#poem #life
part 1
part2
1.
Master I beseech give me a glimpse of my land.
Thy eyes can’t bear propensities of men and their whinges
I fear, your bounded here, vacuous soul
Your bound’s transitory, but I will make you see,
Good soul, is this what you need?
You are definitely the Most High.
2.
You prayed for this, this soul to connect
See, the ‘dark’ face, behind this masquerade
Now I cognise: The Almighty.
Why can’t people pensive?
Your everlasting eternal sovereignity.
This brethren, you lied, for: to your umblicus
Most Merciful, I yearn, thy refuge, I was vacuous.
My son, your left book is a blank paper
All Praise, be on Thee, most Gracious
The Most Generous.
3.
The mishap and tyranny,
The hypocrites being worshipped
And truthful being deceived.
Oh My dear, they Willed, against themselves,
the will for all mortals are free
Still forgetting, thy shall returneth to Thee
For their peccadillos, We forgive
They persistent obstinately in wicked supreme
They turned on themselves,
Disbelieving the heralds We sent
They forgot, about their resurrection,
And their penalty still to be paid,
A penitentiary for them is prepared
And their skin to be burnt in fire, Supreme.
Pictures abhi bake h mere dost.
(The story continues).
Thanks for reading
Aquib Khan.
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Thanks Rachel, everything is copied, thanks for your time really, I don’t mind anything, feel free to criticize. Thanks Aquib.
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I’m very glad to help any way I can. We are all fellow writers, adeeb.
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For the iPad, I used it as a metaphor, for the lively earthly actions, since it requested in the first line, I will edit punctuation a bit, and then it would be more clear, thanks. Hopefully.
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It’s very good 😊, Khan. You kept the tempo and pace , kept the reader interested.
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Thanks yassy, for the positive feedback, I don’t mind your criticism if any, thank you. And I appreciate your time. JazakAllah.
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Jazakallah khair
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Great dude.
It’s a reminder for humanity
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Thanks bro, I appreciate it very much. ☺️
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I tried, I hope people can the message.
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Tbh It’s bit difficult to explain here. You might be conveyed otherwise, because it’s a bit long explanation and requires time and scrutiny.
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No, no its just a bit off topic, most poets mostly write about love, lost love etc. Which I did and try it most often? , but it’s something different I thought to be. It’s a poet which I made this blog about ie insight.
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Ye teeno bahut achhe se professor. May Allah subhanahu wata’aala bless you. Āmīn
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