Lost love (poem) 


Original on lost love

I saw you my girl

With eyes full of my love

This  is not as random as it may seem

Togetherness may have been in our life’s scheme

Trust no logic my love its so awkward

Don’t shy away like a rainbow

Trust no nearby nor steward.

This journey is our friend

No accomplices and trends

My love don’t be Afraid I’ll be there

For anything you need you don’t have to wait

Just  for one time see my eyes

For  our love might ends when the journey ends

I dunno ’bout our destiny but only regrets

This journey is our friend

No accomplices and trends.

I do have fear but love don’t

I dunno what you feel inside your veil

Because its ur eyes that don’t tell lies.

You destination is near so as mine,

The love I felt as first sight ,were just mine?

You probably don’t care and its fine.

It can be  a crush or just fake

Feelings belongs to everybody its humane.

It’s time to depart and my love to fade

This momentarily error that must be paid.

It has no meaning and has no gain

The love I felt was not true

She felt no love and eschewed.

Was it my preposition or conclusion

For when I left I saw her numb eyes

She has sorrow fear and melancholy.

I wasn’t there for years but I felt the same

As she looked broken away

My sadness turn to joy

She was my love so was I.

But Alas our journey has completed its course

She faded away like a sunset

The gift we share is a gift of remorse.

©copyright reserved !ns¡ght 2017 Aquib.

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Published by AQUIB

the unsung poet..

76 thoughts on “Lost love (poem) 

      1. I got you. I was just trying to expand it, out of curiosity ,lol like how s.t.u.p.i.d are expanded, s for super,t for talanted…bla bla… lastly… in ..demand for i and d respectively

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      1. Yeah I check my spam every morning, I found your comment, and I have replied. Thanks for informing many other bloggers comments are also landing in spam these days.👍

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    1. Thanks Kathrin for the read . Have a nice day. Well yea as it’s said that the fruit of patience and perseverance is always sweet And it’s the key for many locked doors to. Keep smiling.

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  1. Nice one. This talent is disappearing also people who are writing it . So this talent must spread as much as we can to stay and develop all over the countries . And i can feel the words u write it was just amazing , when I finished reading it left a lot of sad feelings . Wonderfull i swear .I respect you ,you’re doing so good . Keep on…. and (sory for grammatical mistakes and so on 🤗)

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    1. Oh it’s OK, you just correct in all sense, and yea keep smiling. Your like and support just resonates with me. So yea, I am humbled to have you here. May Allah bless with success here and in hereafter.

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  2. I do believe in love at first sight. But thereafter, some researchers have to be done whether to therein or take to our feet. Thanks for posting.

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    1. Oh ya, I always believe love makes you a better person and heartbreak makes you more compassionate…so no matter what one is experiencing at a given time, rest assured it is always win win

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