I was wrong to think of you of my own kind.
I was wrong to call you a friend of mine.
I was wrong to wait for you .
I was wrong and you proved me right.
To think of shallowness of water,
Until I plunge to choke in the benthic.
To think of softness of your heart,
Until I stumbled over that.
The smile I received with the scintillating stars,
The breeze pecked me with the trees laughing with me,
The peace I receive when my forehead sunk in praising the Almighty.
World’s chores are like that,
The prerogatives are bit harsh,
Darkened soul with benefits and ready to give scars,
Choose the emanating stars,
That burns within itself,
And shine glistening with the light.
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Aquib.
I think your line “The breeze pecked me with the trees laughing with me”, told me the theme of your verse, hurt, regret and recovery.
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Yep, Ivor sir you are apt. Have a nice day and good morning.
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Powerful lines!
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Thanks valiant. Have an awesome day, good morning.
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Broken heart! Sorry my friend. It will heal. Else, there is always Fevicol.
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Thank you sir so much. Have a nice day.
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Good one!
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Thanks virendra, have a nice day.
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Such poignant verses…yet the very fact that the hurt has been acknowledged is the first step towards the journey to heal. Beautifully expressed 👌👌👌
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Thanks a lot chronicles, keep smiling.
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Every word is great
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Thanks a lot buddy, keep smiling.
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Well done here! I’ve nominated you for the Mystery Blogger award. Check it out here: https://adewumipeterblog.wordpress.com/2017/09/09/the-mystery-blogger-award/
Do continue blogging and succeeding.
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Thanks a lot Peter. Don’t know why your comment landed in spam.
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Thank God you find it. Do keep on blogging and succeeding!
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You too. ☺️
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Well written dear.. 😊😊
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Dhanyawaad aapka Gaurav bhai. Have an amazing day ahead.
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You too bro ☺😊
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☺️
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AWESOME YAAR
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Shukriya Danish bhai
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“The peace I receive when my forehead sunk in praising the Almighty.”
These lines are aaaamazing❤
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Thank you Ummati, the peace is so ethereal by connecting with the The Creator of this universe through the heart by meditating in the process. Peace love and unity.
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Exactly the true Bliss lies in connecting to him only..
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Well said, wow, impressive.. 👍☺️
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