1.
With the sweet words
And the smile on the face
Accolades for everyone
Withering each day,
From the dusk to dawn
Hearing the bursting of cloud
With the flash of thunderstorm
Waiting each day for the rain
To the sweet face, drenching it wet
Seeing their gates wide open
Smiling each day, for the drops to come.
2
Standing at the station
Watching the train stops.
Yearning for my dear to appear.
With all the whistling vanishing
the platform gets clear.
3
Walking like an agitated stoic soul
To the jungle of beast kinship
Getting weak by its dementor
Until, a glowing sweet soul,
With eyes wide glancing,.
Like an apparition so high but so nigh
Calling to the awaited fane..
Giving me the cup free of frivolity
Free of all ill taint.
©Copyright reserved !ns¡ght 2017
Aquib Khan.
the story (poem Part1).
betrayal song.
Email me for feedback and comment down if you have any thoughts.
Insight2017aquib@gmail.com
Its indeed a beautiful prose, from a rainy feeling to worthy wait.
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Thanks Alesha for kind words. ☺️☺️
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Lovely post, very well written! 🙂
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Thanks Sophie very much, ☺️☺️☺️
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This was nicely done!
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Thanks Nandita, . ☺️☺️😀.
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You’re very welcome
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Thanks for all the suggestions. ☺️☺️
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It’s a beautiful poetry! … Matches the weather 🙂
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Thanks Simi, ☺️☺️, enjoy the weather.
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Agreat style of depiction of long wait for the rains always welcome after hot spell. Nicely worded to bring out the theme.
Thanks for visiting my blog . kindly read my blogs
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Thanks Sir, sure I will. ☺️☺️☺️😇
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Always welcome . do read my book STRAIGHT FROM THE HEART. BY BRIJ KAUL recently published available on Amazon .in /shopclues etc.i will be delighted.
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OK, sir sure. ☺️☺️☺️
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AMEEN.
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JazakAllah.
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BRIJKAULBLOG ….brother i just read your articles…some are amazing…but one that i can’t resist myself to answer you is that one…brother personally i am not that indian pakistan critisist ..i love both countries…you said about terrorism…. Terrorism has nothing to do with Pak … our children and our families are being attacked how can you even say that we are helping these terrorists to kill our own people…. blame terrorism not the victims… we are already fighting against these terrorists we are not feeding them…now pak is known by the name of terroist…while we are not supporting this like other countries of world…so as you said same …Both countries must play their own role to solve issues …Hope so you understand if you are not seeing this as indian pakistan😞…
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yes I understand your point of view and would be praying for peace for all of us. Thanks for reading myblogs
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From the rain to the love felt in the words, this is a beautiful write, Aquib! 🙂
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Thanks my friend, have a nice and super awesome day. 😇✌️
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You too, you too! 🙂
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☺️☺️
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Beautifully constructed ✔
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Thank you very much.
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Beautiful poemHope you could visit my site and give feedback on my posts. Thank you😊
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Thank you and I will.
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Beautifully described!☺
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Thanks Nandita very much.
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Heartfelt velvet words.
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☺️☺️thanks for your kind words.
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The metaphor of the rain, the bliss after a sultry spell of summer, the anxious wait…the flow of your emotions…spellbinding 💙
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☺️☺️👍. It’s kind of you to say that. Have a nice day. Hope you cooking awesomely good..👍👍👍. Btw can you tell what ‘the rock’ is cooking?
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Kindly decipher that for me😂
Yeah…I was indeed cooking 😎
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Please watch this short clips on U-thube. It would be clear to you. Hopefully. ☺️👍
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Haha…all righty…got it now😉😂
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Alright, ☺️😉(Now, it would open the eyes,) ☺️😀
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👀all open
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Nice poem 🙂 nd heart touching words… ❤
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Thanks a lot, Naima. Hope you are having an amazing day. I must say your urdu is awesome and the way you tell the story is very poignant. ☺️👍
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Thank you soo much for appreciation 🙂 Nd your posts are also awesome… 🙂
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Awesome! N so beautiful poetry!!! 😀😀
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Thanks a lot Poojan. And happy Diwali, I hope you had an amazing day.
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Yea.. I had..same to you too 😁😁
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Very healing poetry….
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Thanks a lot the read. Your latest post is tantamount to the highlighting some plight full issue related to women. Well done.. 👍👏👏👏
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Thank you for appreciation… I’ll cherish it…
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And wish you a happy & prosperous Diwali brother…
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Oh, same to you, happy and prosperous Diwali to you and your family.
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Such a lovely poem 🙂
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Thanks a lot Mistimaan bhai… Keep going.
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Nice piece of art..go ahead Aquib!!
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Thanks a lot Sister soheir… Keep writing.
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Yes..thanks bro !!
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Really😀…you write these poems by yourself …amazing👍
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Koi shak hain h kya… Alhamdulillah, These are all my original works and obviously Allah helps as always..
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Sorry for asking…great work brother😊…keep it up👍
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Oh no,.. Don’t say sorry… I know your intentions weren’t that… I got your humour. Keep smiling.
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😊
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Wonderful
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Hope your dearest get down from the train!!
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😂😂😂. Thanks for reading bro.
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