In the reflection of a shallow lake,
searching deep in eyes of my trifling love’s vitreous.
In the wave of chaotic busy life,
In the search of the alchemy
I ventured in the horizon of my own strife.
In an ambiguity of perplexing dilemmas,
floundering in the sea of emotions.
In search for an anchor.
In search of the precipice of the gleam,
I sailed in the tides of my predicaments.
Like a gypsy, trudging in the deplorable waves,
Searching for a shore or a peg.
In the consignation of loathing smite,
I fumble across a bereaving part of ‘me’ .
That kept telling me
that why I left thee.
In savanna of my desires
In the nudges of my own fire
In the search of my hearts sire
I transcend coalescing along with ‘me’ ,
That kept sobbing on me,
That why I left thee.
Comment your thoughts too, my dear readers, would appreciate it a lot.
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Aquib.. Without love, just kidding, yours affectionately.
it’s very nice,bro.👍👏
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.. Thanks a lot bro..
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Oh the words and the imagery. Loved it
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Thanks a lot Priya for reading, have a great day. ☺️
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Lots of deep words, and I loved the header Pic’
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Thanks a lot sir… Oh, the pic I liked it too.
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Profoundly deep, sir & literally insightful pic.
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Thanks a lot bro. Have a great day. ☺️
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Indeed..
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☺️👍👍
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Nice one 😊😊👍
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Thanks a lot Gaurav bhai. Have a great day, keep grinding.
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😊😊
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Becoming a fan of your writings…..so nice it is 🙂
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Thanks lot Mistimaan bhai. It is always my pleasure to receive warming camments from you. Keep posting, always a avid reader of your awesome posts.🙂☺️
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Thanks bhai 🙂
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Beautiful descriptive poem!
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Thanks a lot. Hope you are having an amazing day.
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I am, and I wish you the same!
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Oh, thanks. ☺️.
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You must not quit https://alice3927.wordpress.com/2017/10/23/you-must-not-quit/ … visit please
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Well described!! Wonderful!!
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Thanks a lot, Kamal. Have a great day.
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Tanvir 😊😊😊
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Oh sorry. I got confused between the two sites I know of..lol
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No problem today, name confusion had happened with me too !!
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Oh thanks…Tanvir. ☺️☺️
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Beautiful poem
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Thanks a lot maam. ☺️☺️👍👍
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Lovely. Emotive.
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Thanks Adnama a lot. ☺️
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Brilliant!
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Thanks a lot valiant. ☺️.
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Well penned!..liked the flow & choice of words.
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Thanks a lot Maam. ☺️
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Beautiful poem a 😍
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Thanks a lot. ☺️
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You are welcome! You should write a book.😍
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I am really amateur and naive, do you write books? . Btw I appreciate this a lot☺️.
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No, unfortunately I am also naive at this. I need more practice 😃
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Oh, best wishes. Keep writing.
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Thank you, you too.
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Profound ocean of literary genius…introspective and tenacious💕 plus the logo does great justice indeed👌
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Thanks a lot Chronicles, your comments, as usual is exemplary… Yea, btw I withdrew the logo since it was withdrawn by the original creator. All is well.
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Oh…I didn’t know that…nonetheless brilliant piece ✌
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Yep. It’s OK. All is well.
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✌✌
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Nicely penned Mr.Aquib. Give it a thought to elongate more…beautiful.😊
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Thanks a lot… miss Nandita. Well have a good day ahead.
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The day is almost gone. Lol…
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Love the poetic nature!
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Thanks a lot.
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You’re welcome
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☺️👍
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It says a lot this poem. A lot. Emotion, Sadness, Turmoil. Powerlessness. Love. Loss. Freedom. It is all there to me reading it. It’s good.
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Thanks for reading it Anne, have a nice day.
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See one of the comments, praising the logo. I removed it coz you deleted your post when I pinged back the post of the logo. Don’t be such a ignorant, I mean how can you questions it again, when I it’s publicly displayed do I have to show evidence or eye witnesses, that’s, what can I say…
Btw
you still have not reposted it, did you? . You made a logo for your bloggers friend that means you made it, that’s its!!!!, it’s your show casing your talent.
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You refresh or open the site from the browser, it’s there.
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I added some effects.
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I learn a lot from your poems.It’s a beautiful poem and your imagination👌.
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Thanks brother a lot, for appreciation. Keep smiling.
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You too keep smiling.
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Beautifully written!
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Thanks a lot ironicalfacts.
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Fantastic poetry and love the pics!😊
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Thanks a lot Dani. I liked the pictures too, well hope you are having a great day.
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You’re welcome 😊 and thanks you too!😊
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really beautifully written..loved to read it
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Thanks a lot sir for reading and appreciating it. Have a wonderful day.
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