My poetry aint that good, 

Someone blathered  that to me, 

I might agree to it, dude! 

Don’t worry my words may not rhyme

Or may lack required dictions, 

My metaphors may bounce, 

And May be it does not mean anything. 




My heart knows, 

These words aint just a product of mind, 

’cause emotions and conscience 

Aren’t a thing of synapse, 

Not just a messengers or ions, 

Jumping in the sheath of myelin’s. 




 Neither   i had lost in love, (by the Grace of God) 

Nor i had a fall. 

 it wast those trifle of victory and loss,( hell no!!) 

Absolutely they are all gimmick (for me) 

Or a lack of good consciousness & concerns 

To fall each time I see a cocky  girl. (Damn those kids, so funny lol!! )  




It comes to me all by default. 

Certainly  blessings is a mercy of God.(Thanks God, please have mercy) 

What should I tell you more about? 

Hey Poetry! , tell me what should i write? 

That It should strike the chords of mind.

What more should I do to put in? 

Does water mix with albumin?

To produce a simple concoction! 

Since deduction  always been not buttery 

Surely intricating always been easy. 




Those who gives hearts and are all smiles, (don’t aww to me, hell no)  

Those masquerading face don’t shine 

Their plasticity is so sticky, 

They melt on the scale of Fahrenheit. 

Oh, dear souls I ain’t a game player, 

I may lose games but I play it fair. 





Oh words now please come magically, 

And assemble to form in a good poetry . 

My readers are awesome and great. 

Produce a poem so that they can get impress!! 

By the way if you don’t, 

Hey please don’t… 

I am your friend and a neighbour, 

Residing right in your heart  

Now hear those lub dub beats. 

That’s where my voices come out. 

LOL, if I am sad I read bak***d billi post, damn they make me laugh hard. 

Let’s see who comments because likes don’t matter to me because half of my readers just read it anonymously, and don’t give likes or follow me even. 



©Copyright reserved 2017-18


Aquib khan.

Published by AQUIB

the unsung poet..

88 thoughts on “Poetry. 

  1. I loved it !
    I’m not a metaphor person, i don’t understand it , but I felt it.
    You’re a wonderful poet Aquib.
    That’s why you have lots of followers
    Keep going man.


  2. Whoever said that your poems are not good are definitely wrong. Your poems are really good 🙂
    I loved the caller tune meme the most. There was some song isn’t it, banale mujhe tera caller tune of something like that. Bollywood does come up with some hilarious songs 😀

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    1. I like the cafe coffee day one, thanks for appreciating it rekha, keep smiling.
      Nowadays, really! some lyrics of the songs are so funny like
      “baby ko bass pasand hain,”.


      1. Oh, I was thinking it was Starbucks. Lol.
        I stopped listening to songs long time ago. Songs like mein tera shirt ka button and Dil garden garden hogaya and all that, seriously, 😂😂 if you like cat memes, check out chemistry cat. They are hilarious 😀

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    1. Hey, thanks rishi bhai for appreciating it..you can obviously ask for the explanation anytime.
      For example this Fahrenheit one, their is more rise in per degree comparitively to Celsius.. So yeah.. Hope you connect now.
      Happy new year too in advance. ☺️☺️

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  4. Well, as far as I know poetry doesn’t have to rhyme… At least not all poetry. Sure there are rules for certain forms like a sonnet or a kwartet for example but there is als a free form like yours. And I like it…
    Merry Christmas 🎄

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  5. Honestly, your poetry is pretty amazing in my opinion, it touches my heart sometimes and this is what makes someone a great poet…just keep doing what you’re doing mate 👍

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      1. I have been doing good, enjoying the end semester examination vacation and holidays , yep right you are… Pretty much boring to be honest because I am down with cold that loves me a lot, isn’t leaving me that easily.

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      2. Oh that’s great, well the first thing that i’m gonna do tomorrow is check out for one of your birthday post…i won’t ruin the fun by wishing you right now of course…

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  6. I really liked this poem very much. I can completely see where you are coming from when others look at your work and think it’s not good enough. You wrote it, it’s your baby, your creation that you chose to share with the world and that is what matters. The fact that you felt like you could put it out for others is great. Poetry is art and not everyone will like it, but they sure cared enough to comment so… what does that say about them?

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    1. Hey it’s OK, all good By the Grace of God. Thanks for the love and for appreciating it, and am glad.
      Well I looked at your blog it’s awesome with really great poetry. Hope to read more from you. 😊


  7. I think we all have been there, you know, doubtful of our art. And you have brought that out in your poem quite wonderfully. And with such unabashed honesty, it’s laudable. Great post, indeed. 🙂

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  8. Hey! I’m new to WordPress and just trying to find my way around. I am incredibly inspired by your blog! Thank you for sharing your talent 🙂 if you have any pointers for someone just joining I’ll be happy to take the advice!


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