My poetry aint that good,
Someone blathered that to me,
I might agree to it, dude!
Don’t worry my words may not rhyme
Or may lack required dictions,
My metaphors may bounce,
And May be it does not mean anything.
My heart knows,
These words aint just a product of mind,
’cause emotions and conscience
Aren’t a thing of synapse,
Not just a messengers or ions,
Jumping in the sheath of myelin’s.
Neither i had lost in love, (by the Grace of God)
Nor i had a fall.
it wast those trifle of victory and loss,( hell no!!)
Absolutely they are all gimmick (for me)
Or a lack of good consciousness & concerns
To fall each time I see a cocky girl. (Damn those kids, so funny lol!! )
It comes to me all by default.
Certainly blessings is a mercy of God.(Thanks God, please have mercy)
What should I tell you more about?
Hey Poetry! , tell me what should i write?
That It should strike the chords of mind.
What more should I do to put in?
Does water mix with albumin?
To produce a simple concoction!
Since deduction always been not buttery
Surely intricating always been easy.
Those who gives hearts and are all smiles, (don’t aww to me, hell no)
Those masquerading face don’t shine
Their plasticity is so sticky,
They melt on the scale of Fahrenheit.
Oh, dear souls I ain’t a game player,
I may lose games but I play it fair.
Oh words now please come magically,
And assemble to form in a good poetry .
My readers are awesome and great.
Produce a poem so that they can get impress!!
By the way if you don’t,
Hey please don’t…
I am your friend and a neighbour,
Residing right in your heart
Now hear those lub dub beats.
That’s where my voices come out.
LOL, if I am sad I read bak***d billi post, damn they make me laugh hard.
Let’s see who comments because likes don’t matter to me because half of my readers just read it anonymously, and don’t give likes or follow me even.
©Copyright reserved 2017-18
!ns¡ght
Aquib khan.
Reblogged this on Lincoln Life Blog.
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I loved it !
I’m not a metaphor person, i don’t understand it , but I felt it.
You’re a wonderful poet Aquib.
That’s why you have lots of followers
👍💕
Keep going man.
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Thank you siister.
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Hahaha too much I enjoyed thoroughly. Every word to each meme. Superb
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☺️☺️hey, Jay thanks, thanks for appreciating it.. Happy new year… Hope you are having a lot of fun..
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:)happy new year to you too. Thank you:). U too have fun
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The memes are really funny Aquib and for the poem, hmmmm, (AWWWWWWWW) 😀
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Oh thats funny.. Wish you luck and happiness.. Keep writing and smiling.
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Loved it. I would like to say, this post has both wonderful poetry with deep meanings and a lot of funny memes.
Good job👍
Happy new year..have a great life ahead
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Thanks for appreciating it.
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Nicee! And Merry Christmas!
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Thanks buddy, hope you are having a lot of fun.. Happy holidays. ☺️
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Your poetry is great. Are your cats bilingual?
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Yeah!!! Holly these memes are so funny. Wish you had known the Hindi language. Thanks for appreciating it.
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I wish I did too! 🙂
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Hindi language, spoken one is like English, pretty easy… Trust me.
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Whoever said that your poems are not good are definitely wrong. Your poems are really good 🙂
I loved the caller tune meme the most. There was some song isn’t it, banale mujhe tera caller tune of something like that. Bollywood does come up with some hilarious songs 😀
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I like the cafe coffee day one, thanks for appreciating it rekha, keep smiling.
Nowadays, really! some lyrics of the songs are so funny like
“baby ko bass pasand hain,”.
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Oh, I was thinking it was Starbucks. Lol.
I stopped listening to songs long time ago. Songs like mein tera shirt ka button and Dil garden garden hogaya and all that, seriously, 😂😂 if you like cat memes, check out chemistry cat. They are hilarious 😀
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Oh, thanks will check out right now… Agreed, these button lyrics are beyond like they have crossed the escape velocity.
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Haha 😂 true that.
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Just so you know . . . you’re poetry is that good.
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Thanks for appreciating it mam, hope you are having an amazing time this Christmas…
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I am, thank you! I hope you are, too.
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Nicely written. Merry Christmas! Enjoy holidays.
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Thank you sir, happy holidays to you too.
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Thanks a lot sir for appreciating it, have a lovely Christmas..
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BC billi memes are hilarious. I too enjoy them.
Let me admit ,Yeah sometimes your metaphors bounced me😅
But they are remarkable, most of them.
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Hey, thanks rishi bhai for appreciating it..you can obviously ask for the explanation anytime.
For example this Fahrenheit one, their is more rise in per degree comparitively to Celsius.. So yeah.. Hope you connect now.
Happy new year too in advance. ☺️☺️
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It’s my sheer pleasure Bhai. Keep posting😊.
And merry Christmas to you.
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My pleasure.
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Great
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Thanks for appreciating it, it’s one of those bad vibes I guess Siddhartha bhai, thanks again for encouraging.
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😊😊
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The poem is exemplary…Truly. As it also extols your love for your dear readers and those memes are really hilarious! Have a great new year!
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You are exemplary, to say that…. Really… Great to have you here and this means a lot… Because your honesty and uniqueness shines MashaAllah … Wish you luck and happiness..
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Thank you Aquib ji…For your kind words.🙂🙂
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Such a lovely poem
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Thanks a lot Mistimaan bhai.. Wish you luck and happiness.
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Lovely string of thoughts young man.
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Thanks mel. Have a lovely day.
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You as well friend
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😊😊
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Well, as far as I know poetry doesn’t have to rhyme… At least not all poetry. Sure there are rules for certain forms like a sonnet or a kwartet for example but there is als a free form like yours. And I like it…
Merry Christmas 🎄
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Hey thanks, Anna, I truly it appreciate your encouragement. Have a lovely Christmas.
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I love your poetry ! Am always looking forward to a new post .
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Thanks Lara for your encouraging words. Wish you luck and happiness for the upcoming year.
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Honestly, your poetry is pretty amazing in my opinion, it touches my heart sometimes and this is what makes someone a great poet…just keep doing what you’re doing mate 👍
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Thanks bro, I appreciate your encouraging remarks.. Well how are you these days? Hope you are having amazing days.. Keep rocking mate.
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I have been doing good, enjoying the end semester examination vacation and holidays , yep right you are… Pretty much boring to be honest because I am down with cold that loves me a lot, isn’t leaving me that easily.
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Yep, thanks mate, about to enter 20 tomorrow lol.. Yep I did well.. Hopefully.
Yes.. I hate cold…
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Oh that’s great, well the first thing that i’m gonna do tomorrow is check out for one of your birthday post…i won’t ruin the fun by wishing you right now of course…
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. I don’t really celebrate my birthday here. Lol, I think it’s awful I dunno, 😋😋😋.. Well… Here is my email insight2017aquib@gmail.com. You can msg me on hangout or Email me. Thanks buddy, hope to meet you one day.
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I understand ☺ thanks for sharing your email address by the way 👍
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☺️☺️☺️. Wish you luck and happiness. Have fun.
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Thanks and same to you!
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the memes lol
🙂
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😁😁😂
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A heartfelt response. Anyway your poetry is yours. Who cares, what others think.
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Thank you sir for the appreciation and for the encouragement. Means a lot!
Wish you luck, happiness and prosperity for the upcoming year.
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Loved the memes 😂😂😂
Amazing poetry too
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Thanks Rita a lot and for your constant encouragement. Wish you luck and happiness for the upcoming year. Yeah, these memes are hilarious,.. 😹😹😹
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Same to you. Happy New year in advance. May it be good for you.
Those cats!!
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I was having doubts on whether my poetry was go enough, but know I believe its at least good. Thanks for making me believe
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Oh, thanks… Glad you found it helpful… Yeah!!! Go ahead.. And keep writing,
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I really liked this poem very much. I can completely see where you are coming from when others look at your work and think it’s not good enough. You wrote it, it’s your baby, your creation that you chose to share with the world and that is what matters. The fact that you felt like you could put it out for others is great. Poetry is art and not everyone will like it, but they sure cared enough to comment so… what does that say about them?
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Hey it’s OK, all good By the Grace of God. Thanks for the love and for appreciating it, and am glad.
Well I looked at your blog it’s awesome with really great poetry. Hope to read more from you. 😊
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In love with this poem. I felt each word.
You’re amazing.
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Hey thanks alot I am glad you liked it.
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You’re most welcome
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I think we all have been there, you know, doubtful of our art. And you have brought that out in your poem quite wonderfully. And with such unabashed honesty, it’s laudable. Great post, indeed. 🙂
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Thanks for appreciating it @anondotverse, I am glad you liked it.
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Btw thanks for reading though.
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Wow! 😊
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Hey thanks for appreciating it. 😊😊
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Hey! I’m new to WordPress and just trying to find my way around. I am incredibly inspired by your blog! Thank you for sharing your talent 🙂 if you have any pointers for someone just joining I’ll be happy to take the advice!
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Your a very beautiful poet keep on.
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Thanks a lot Justin, humbled by your remark. Have a great day. 😊
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Your poetry is great sir
… Plzz give me suggestions to improve my poetry
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Nice peotry. Brilliant use of words.
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😊😊, thanks a lot
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Awesome!!!!
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Thank you. 😊
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👌👌👌
I loved the poetry
But memes took my heart away,lol,they are hilarious, especially cafe coffee day wala🤣🤣🤣
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Yep.thanks.haha
I will get your heart from the memes. Don’t worry.you are safe.😂😂😋😋
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🤣🤣
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