Why am I so numb today?
Was that you left me?
And you pledged that your return
Will never be seen in passing days.
Sanguine chats under the moonlight,
My eyes sparkled each time I saw you
The stardust and gush of amorous aurum,
How can it lay Rusted, lifeless?
Those moments are still alive,
Your smile and coaxing hues,
Created a pliant of the honest love.
Was it never quintessential?
But my heart ached, jostling me.
I wished I stayed away,
And never would have
fell in the cobweb of this
This obfuscating love;
An intricate serenade of heart.
Now you return whilst high tide
Where my heart is void of empty love.
Our togetherness sojourns in empty space.
Now your palatable heart,
Produce no exhilaration,
Though Your sky have many stars,
But mine cannot shine there.
You let go my love,
move on with this,
You will be better without my shadow.
Your sunshine is in the east,
And I am the west.
Somewhere in the sea,
We probably can meet,
and I will bid you
‘Adieu, adieu.’
Again I will say
‘Adieu.’
I said that what my heart felt.
Still, Why am I so numb today?
Was that you left me?
And I pledged that my return
Shall not be seen in any day???
Love is neither a victory nor a loss
It’s there only when we seek no return.
©Copyright reserved. 2018 !ns¡ght.
Aquib khan.
So touching. I love it 💖
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Thanks a lot . Glad you liked it. Loads of happiness and love back to you, I know you can lift it., 😁😁.
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Thank you. To you too brother
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My pleasure.
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Nice one… liked it 🙂
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The stardust and gush of amorous aurum – what a line!
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Thanks Nandita, your appreciation means a lot. Have sweet dreams.
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You’re welcome, Aquib. Sweet dreams
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It’s a masterpiece
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Thanks nisa for appreciating it.. How you been these days?
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M nice dear ty.. hope u do also well
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😊😊
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Very nice
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Thank you for liking Ananya. 🙂🙂
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Nice and true.🙂
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Thanks Nandita, keep smiling.
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Lovely……………………Nicely written Bro….
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Thank a lot sagar Bhai.. Have a great day.
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Welcome.
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nicely penned
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Hey thanks alot, sorry again your comment landed in my spam.
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doesn’t matter bro
once again happy new year
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Yeah, 👍👍
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Straight from the heart Aquib, where a true writer pens from. Love the emotion you spill into your writing, that’s what makes it so good.🌹🌹. Keep it up my friend.
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Thanks a lot jo, pleasure to receive your words of wisdom, encouragement and appreciation. 😊😊
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No problem, very touching words from a talent. Keep it up.
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🙂🙂
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🙂
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What a wonderful piece, Aquib! Wishing you a very happy and creative new year! 🤗
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Thanks a lot chaya, wish you a happy new year too with lot of luck, happiness and success. Keep smiling.
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Thanks, Aquib! 🤗
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Most welcome. Chaya. May God bless you with success here and in hereafter. 😀. Glad to receive your comment. 😀
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Wish you the same, Aquib! 🤗
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Its always so difficult to say adieu! Touching composition Aquib!
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Thanks a lot maam. Yeah it’s tough to say good bye.
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The ending to this is so bloody good. The entire piece is brilliant but I love that ending. 💜💐
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Thanks a lot Arbie, your appreciation means a lot since you are an awesome writer. Have fun and eat a lot, 😀😀.
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Beautiful work! So touching!! Please do visit my page and have a look too!! 😊
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Sure, 🏃♂️🏃♂️🏃♂️on my way. Hey, thanks for appreciating it. Have a great day ahead.
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Thank u so much!! 😊
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“Sanguine chats under the moonlight,
My eyes sparkled each time I saw you
The stardust and gush of amorous aurum,
How can it lay Rusted, lifeless?”
These lines are mesmerising. Words indeed create magic.
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Thanks a lot sneha, glad you liked it.. Keep smiling.
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Sanguine chats under the moonlight,
My eyes sparkled each time I saw you
what lines..! ❤ one of your best . aapke words par Allah ki barkat hai 🙂
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Hey, sameera thanks long time, I thought you get khafa with Me unfollowed or what… Lol😀😀.. Great writer you are, yourself.. Glad to receive your words of appreciation..
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how can i unfollow you..! 😛 Not great though but thank you .. ! and i really love your poetry so how can i miss them. 🙂 and your bad jokes too 😛 😀
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Gao gao, dil jo toot gya hian tumhara, 😀… Well on the serious note (that note does not exist btw) remember pizza deal… I don’t forget all important stuffs you know.
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Nice one
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Thanks a lot brother., 😊😊
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Welcome bro
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It was so beautiful Aquib but sad at the same time but then the subject of this magically woven poetry kind of is self explanatory for that. I think I have followed your blog recently and have not been active myself so missed a ton. Looking forward to your posts now. Happy writing ☺️
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Hey, thanks I have become less active myself. So, I apologize if I haven’t been up to date with your blog. Thank you for being kind and for the encouragement, this means a lot. Keep smiling and stay blessed.
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That’s alright ☺️ You too stay blessed.
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“Your sunshine is in the east,
And I am the west.” 💔
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😀😀Thanks a lot Sophia, your latest post is very powerful, I must say. Keep smiling. 😊
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You are too kind, thank you! 🤗
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Very touching! Happy new year!
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Thanks a lot Just_me, happy new year to you too. Keep smiling.
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😊😊😊
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sad poem
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Hey, thanks for stopping by. Sorry your comment landed in my spam.
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That’s happening a lot. I don’t know why. You’re welcome
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Heart felt…❤ this is so touching..
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Thanks Caren, glad you liked it 💙. How are you these day.? Awesome pic 😀👍👍.. Are you able to see clearly in this pose, I suppose don’t walk on road like that 😋😋😋?
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Haha here, I’m still breathing.. Lol.. Yes I can still see clearly. 😄 just to maintain the mystery behind me.. Lol.. Kidding.. It was actually the wind.. Haha
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😀😀
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And you, how are you? I hope what you write is not actually what you feel.. Haha
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Yeah, that’s true, but I imagine you know sometimes. 😋😋. I am good Caren. I just cut my lips lol.
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😂 imagine??
Why happened to your lips?? Lol😅
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I was actually, just ordered my new trimmer.. Lol🤣🤣
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Haha I hope you won’t cut your teeth along… 😄😂
Imw not good with retorts.. Not like you.. 😅😅 I feel dumb lol..
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It’s ok.. That was so funny.. I will not try to cut my teeth, I would rather cut someone else with my sharp teeth, just let me see the full moon, I am waiting for it.
. 🤣🤣🤣
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😂 now, you have just became Lupin..😂😂😂
I just hope again, that I wont be prey.. Lol
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No no, don’t worry Caren. I don’t kill. Well, now I use technology, i just suck blood with the specialised too, so that everyone is happy.. All good vibes.
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And now, you’re a vampire,, oh boy, tell me, how many characters you have there?? Haha 😂😄
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Hmmm, that’s a secret of mine, you know 😎😎. 😉😉
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Edward is that you??? Haha😂
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😃😃,😉😉. Nope. You keep guessing. Joke aside. I hope you are enjoying your winter break.
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Cuz you have so many characters..😂😅..
Well I did.. I went to my hometown.. But now, I’m back to my school again😩
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You can’t guess me haha. Me too, now I hate lectures.
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I actually can.. You’re aquib khan.. A great poet and blogger… And also an amazing person😉😁😄.
True I wish it’s vacation again.. 😂😂
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What if I say I am your friendly neighborhood?… Well, I won’t ascertain this. 😉😉. I feel the same for you wonderful person, blogger, poet and cool and certainly witty 🤣🤣.
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Well, if it that happens, it would be really great… Haha
I’m not witty.. I’m dumb 😂😅
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Wow…. such punching words…
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Thanks B., i was going to comment on your latest post but i erased it.. I thought that maybe it’s not good. 😋😋😋. Nevermind.
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This is so heart breaking🙁
You have written it beautifully, I loved it☺
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Thanks a lot Priya, Glad you liked it. 😊😊
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My pleasure ☺
But it’s Pragya, not Priya😂
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Sorry, autocorrect!! Pragya. 😋😁
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Haha, okay😋
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Lol! Look, what I found! I will hate you forever for this, bhidu!
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Hain??? Kya hua..
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Priya ! Yaar hadd hai😭
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Reblogged this on Ace Friends & Bloggers News.
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Thanks Ian for sharing. 😊
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Truly welcome as always ….😊
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Fabulous post from a man who only saw one side of life ….🌟😊🙏👍 Me ! Until l became a fellow blogger l never knew of poetry, art or prose not for Me ! But it was not Me ! Who took away these things but family who l tried to look up to as elders but it was Me ! Who was the elder l was just 6-years of age and full of love …Saw books on the shelf in volumes of authors l now know as great writers …But not for Me ! To read or learn about just to be dusted, arranged and kept neat …Why Me ! I asked as l prayed to find answers to questions in my ❤️ But l now know l was not ready until Now even when at 14-years of age l prayed for someone to love Me ! For Me ! As someone once said You cannot know love unless you feel loved …For Me ! It took until my family had gone to begin to know what love is …. For Me ! It’s a feeling an understanding of others pain and knowledge beyond gain …My ! 🙏 Was answered and now l can gain the feeling of love and no longer of pain ….Ian
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This wonderful collection comment describing love, loss pain, endurance, and formost patience is just a gem. Thanks for sharing this Ian. I appreciate it a lot. Keep blogging and sharing your wisdoms to the world.
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Thanks so much l feel humbled … You inspire through your writing ….That helps me to impart to certain people who like you understand the fact l…. It then helps and inspires me to share more of myself …. I was very good at hiding my feelings but that was so l would not get hurt again by wearing my ❤️ on my sleeve …A giver l be …A receiver lm not and love is the watchword of Me! Told very few people this but some posts l publish are connected to Me! But others are connected to You My Readers
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It was my pleasure. Keep going.
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Beautiful
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Thanks a lot @hooriofficial, glad you liked it. 😊
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Thats beautifully written! Loved it.
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Thanks a lot ashrita, glad you liked it. Keep up with good posts, just been to your blog, and your latest post is awesome. Keep blogging.
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Thanks a lot for liking and following my blog.😊
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Nice use of words, allowed me to kinda picture the poem as I read it 👍🏽
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Thanks a lot @Malique Taylor, glad you liked it.
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Simply heart touching.
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Thanks ocean glad you liked it.
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So sad yet so sweet❤️
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Thanks a lot 😊
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I envy your talent for poetry. Great job!
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Hey thanks, much humbled by your kindness for you yourself is a wonderful writer. Keep smiling and writing.
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Why thank you.
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Very good dear……..keep writing & stay in touch with me. So, that please follow me & like my posts.
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Thanks dude, yeo sure.
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Hey ! Can you please check out my recent post and follow up 🙂
Thankyou
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Oh yeah sure. Thanks.
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Connects heart.. emotionally 😋😋😊
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Thanks a lot AK, glad to hear that. 😀
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Your welcome 😋😊
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Nyc
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Just beautiful.
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Thanks @justme, have a great day. 😊
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