#poem #life
Watching shores slushing in the pool of hurdles.
And the catapillers struggling for last moulding to transform
And as the winter reaches heights animals crumble and shrieks..
Where is all the mights and ferocity?. All gone!.
The shooted arrows returning shattering from inside..
The man of words and thoughts crumbling in the deepest ocean of frivolity, malice, a victim of insanity.
The drops of tears unable to form,
Heats of regrets and convulsions burns him cowering.
Interring him in the cloak of sulliness.
Not all transform to butterfly as some of it dies.
Not all animals survive as the winter pasts.
Survive or die. Die each day at the hands of jolt-full jarring circumstances.
It’s time to connect all the dots, time burns but gives time, for returns.
Time for healing, it’s time to be healed.
No more of dry tears, no more of heart breaks.
Time for show time, time, it’s the time.
‘Stand take up the pieces, stand for thyself. Stand for people against you.’
‘Stand for people who loved.’
‘Stand, stand.’
©Copyright reserved !ns¡ght 2017.
Aquib.
Yes. I love this. Excellent
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Thanks bro. Have a nice day.
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You’re welcome bro. Have a great day.
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☺️☺️☺️
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Great post , Aquib. So full of positivity.
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Thanks Yassy so much. Have an awesome day ahead.
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You too have a great Thursday and write some more fabulous stuff.
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Yep, it’s almost mid night. Lol. Happy eid. Remember the takbir. My parents have gone for Haj Alhamdulillah yassy.
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Eid Mubarak to you. Lucky parents jazakhAllah ! I will remember the takbir, thank you 😊 so much.
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Not mid night, it’s late night.
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Half past two
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Yep, exactly. So yea, Good night and sweet dreams.
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Awesome one
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Thanks a lot bro. Have an awesome day.
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You too 🙂
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This is some amazing wtiting from you.
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Thanks a lot valiant. I hope you are having an amazing, btw it’s raining too. With sweet rains comes a lot of khichad, and Nala ka pani entering my shows.
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Oh sure I am having a nice day.
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A meaningful poem, and I especially liked the line, “Not all transform to butterfly as some of it dies”,
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Thank you sir. Hehe a nice day. This means a lot me.
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Brilliant composition of words and stand tall now you cannot crumble and fall. Great poem.
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Thanks Kamal a lot. Have an amazing day.
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Welcome friend and same to you too.
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☺️☺️☺️
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Superb and strong message
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Thanks a lot. Have a nice day.
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Happy new year!
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Happy new year to you too.
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very sanguine
happy new year
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Oh, thanks, happy new year too you too.. Well just saw your comment I apologize for replying late.
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Is this an old one?
But it’s great, nevertheless!
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Yeah, it is. Thanks for reading and appreciating it. Well been struggling for a while to jot down some lines. 😀😀. .. Have a great day.
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Great!That was powerful.
Longtime! Happy New year ,wish you good luck!
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Hey thanks wish you the same, hope are having an amazing day.
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Have a nice day!
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Loved it bhai
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Thanks Mistimaan bhai. Keep smiling always, just do it… Wish you luck and happiness.
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This is awesome. So well penned. Combination of both pain and motivation crafted beautifully. Liked it a lot. 👏👍☺️
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Thanks a lot ashish bhai. Glad you liked.
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Great work Aqui.
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ahhh. your words are extraordinary. so much gratitude…….never stop writing.
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Hey thanks birdy, I am overwhelmed by your words of appreciation. Your blog is awesome just stumbled by today, glad you followed me back. Keep smiling.
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no it is an honor to both follow your blog, and to be followed by you as well. keep smiling, keep being, keep on keeping on. i’m excited to read more of your posts in the future, as i hope you read mine as well. ☺️
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Yeah, of course birdy., 😊
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Beautiful imaginary… I love the ending: makes me hopeful… Wishing you a great 2018 😀
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Thanks aquileana thanks for your words of encouragement, courtesy. Wish you good luck, lot of lorries loaded with happiness to your way just unload that 😀 and have a great 2018.😀
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Hi Aquib, So glad that I get your posts emailed to me.
I have just nominated you for a Leibster award. It’s a blogging award that was founded many years ago as a way of recognising new bloggers, and blogs with under 3,000 followers. It provides a way of getting more traffic to your blog, and it can be used as a marketing tool as well. It involves answering 10 questions, and then nominating 5-10 bloggers yourself, and putting some questions to them. Clearly you do not have to do this, but if you are willing to accept the award and be involved then you can find the instructions on my blog https://photosociology.wordpress.com/2018/01/11/the-liebster-award-2018/
Thanks
Richard (photosociology)
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Thanks Richard, I am overwhelmed by your courtesy… I accept this while heartedly. Keep up the good work. 😊😊
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Thank you. And you also.
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