1.
Treading the path
Glee,jolly along with its fire
But stumbled across
Deluged wall, a demean
An oasis of hope.
Dessicating the elixers,
With each mighty approach.
2.
Floundering in the flood of dismay,
A caricature demure,
Pushing towards the sanity
Deputising , soothing , harmonizing.
Became the ‘driving force.’
3.
Alas , vaporizing each day
Unable to solve the mind’s equation
Felled into the trench of frivolity
Vapour vanished ultimately.
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Aquib.
That word play! Amazing.
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Thank you valiant . Its your kindness. Keep grinding.
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Nice!
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Thank you sir. Good night.
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Such a clever write!
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Thanks christy a lot. This means a lot to me.
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bahut khub Aquib bhai
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Shukhriya danish bhai .
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Deep and poignant lines so well penned, Aquib and I loved the apt picture too. Great words.
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Thanks a lot Kamal.have a great day. ☺️☺️👍
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Welcome Aquib and same to you too.
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Loved your post
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Oh, Thanks bhai, your comments really mean a lot to me. Keep smiling…
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the “trench of frivolity” that is a wonderful phrase and it speaks volumes.
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Thanks a lot maam, for reading. This means a lot to me. Have a nice day ahead.
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👌👌 nice😃
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Thanks Pooja, hope you are having an amazing day.
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Yes.. I’m having it.. 😁
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Cool. ☺️👍.
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so beautiful, god bless you.
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Thanks a lot Laiba, JazakAllah.
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I am following you but this post didn’t appear😒I wonder why
And, you are an amazing writer! Wisely chosen words👌👌
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Koi baat ni. Sometimes it happens. Post does not appear in the feeds. Thanks for appreciating it pragya.
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You’re welcome😍😊
When will you post a new verse?
And, I am so gonna sue this app😩😩
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Well i have written few lines and trying to compile it.. Today was just so hectic for me I have some errands, thanks for the concern pragya.
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Busy people are the best😊
I just saw your new post in my feed. Here I come😊
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Good morning pragya, please check my latest post, published a poem tonight, hope it stand out for you.
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Good morning, Aquib😊
It stood out as always😍
Your vocab is❤
Teach me some in your free time😂i am poor at it
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Hey thanks pragya, I feel you are doing great and always looking forward to read your poems.
For me poetry is not about heavy words it just comes to when in need spontaneously, you know , I feel the poem just speak to one’s hearts.
Believe me! write whatever comes to your heart,
.” Just follow the straight path,with patience and perseverance”
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You have been always so supportive of me 😊
Thank you😇
But, I know you’re just being nice!😒😒
I won’t argue about the vocab thing but just believe me that not everyone’s command is this high on vocabulary like yours!
Have a great Monday😩
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Yes, btw you are funny I hate Monday too and I just I am so lazy to go to the class today.. Lol..
Well trust me on this one when you read others and improvise on yourself. Like never doubt your inner soul which is pure and is unique.. Really then vocabulary and all these will come like when you read others it would add, I really don’t fathom myself as a good poet, my poems are just drops on the ocean… .
So, yeah do write with “Poetic Pragya.” 😉😉😉
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Classes! I’ll tell you😩😩They should at least allow a pillow, if not sleeping 😂😂😂😂😂
Okay,okay I agree😊😊
This felt nice😘
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It was all my pleasure😎..
Yep, pillow one is a good, tum agey badho pragya hum pillow morcha me tumhare sath hain..
😋😋😂😂. You too Have a great day .
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Lololol😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂sangharsh zaari rahega hahahaha
Now, before that they throw me out of this boring’est’😂 class, I am getting my mind back onto studies.
Again, have a super duper monday lol😂
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That’s super cool, OK me too atleast I must now start attending it regularly.. 😂😂😂Well thanks again.
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Like, dark returns, superman returns, and bla bla I shall too return… 🤧🤧🤒🤒🤕🤕
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Hey thanks really Pragya.. It happens with me too, all these questions arises, and I get that aliens do exist!!! …
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Deep and beautiful words
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Thanks buddy, glad you liked it. ☺️
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