Standing on the platform I saw some vapid dreams,
My eyes sprinting horizon,
But often a mirage occurs,
It’s all wavy; a Conundrum of affairs.
A humdrum life?
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There is no looking back dear,
That now cannot be undone,
You know what, when I leave!
‘I will &’ m not here for the apologies, Certainly, one day will be deaf for your eulogy.’
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In the mist of brumal night,
When those balmy hands waved me..
I fleed away in the nebulous dungeon..
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I could make out through the fog
Your lucid smile.
Just be there..
I am not the one to hold;
Those hand.
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I am still Shackled by my vexing,
Still searching for my white dove,
But all proclaimed by poachers,
My tears sublimed in the murk,
Rest all smiles died in the dorky nights.
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Lies ahead are just vacant roads,
The veil my eyes had had retreated,
When lightning strucked me.
Some falls apart and some dies
That’s the tale of fighting souls.
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Standing on the platform I saw some vapid dreams,
My eyes sprinting horizon,
But often a mirage occurs.
It’s all wavy; a Conundrum of affairs.
But this life is certainly a test.
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Aquib khan.
Well written
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Thanks buddy.. Glad to hear from you. Certainly very kind, I appreciate your comment a lot.
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My pleasure bhai
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Certainly a test which you have well written
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Thanks a lot Tanvir. You are very kind for appreciating this.. Much humbled have been inactive from your insightful post, will get updated to it. 😊😊
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Most welcome!! Thank you 😊
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Your most welcome Tanvir. 😊
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So true Aquib, wonderfully written 🙂
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Thanks a lot soiba… I am very glad that you appreciate it. 😁😁. Keep smiling.
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What a great piece, Aquib! I absolutely loved it. 🤗
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Thanks Chaya, I am very glad you liked it.. I tried it, thanks again your comment certainly encourages me for you yourself is a poetic mistress with the unmatched afflatus .
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Oh God! I am flattered! Thanks, Aquib. It’s always a pleasure reading your wonderful work of poetry. 🤗
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Oh, thanks that’s very kind and supportive of you. Always Looking forward to your posts.. Keep writing and smiling.
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Thanks and I wish the same for you, Aquib! 🤗
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😀😀
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Beautiful almost spiritual!
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Hey malkie, it did not come out as I thought, honestly, but glad your comment means a lot.
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Ohh I thought seeing the pic its time for a mcq test😂😂. Jokes apart super writing my friend…
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😂😂😂, yeah I thought someday would comment that.. Certainly you are humorous.. Thanks for the read buddy.. I am glad you liked it.
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You’re most welcome bud😉
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You are most welcome too. ☺️😀 keep smiling…
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😊
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I liked it! 🙂
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Thanks @crazywroteeof6, much humbled by your remark…. That’s encouraging for me. Keep smiling.
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I didn’t know a theme like this can be explored this way and something this beautiful could be written about it! This is so impressive, Aquib🤗🤗I loved the choice of words👏👏
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Yeah, thanks I did not think it was that good , I am glad for your appreciation. 😊
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Brilliant. I love how this sounded in my head while I was reading it!
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Thanks a lot Arbie, glad to hear from you after a long time hope you are doing well. 😊
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🕊🌹Beautiful.
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Thanks a lot Adnama, glad to hear that from you
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You’re Welcome Aquibview ☺
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It seem to me that you have deleted your site!, your previous storyline about vampire was very engrossing though!!
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Thank you. I had some problems of my own making yet unintentional.
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Thanks for sharing your link. I wish you good luck and happiness.
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Thank you.
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Very well written. Yea i guess, life’s a test. Every moment we’re being assessed.
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Thanks A lot buddy.. Glad to hear that from you. 😊
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would really appreciate if you could go thru my blog too.
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Yea buddy, on my way.
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Blending of emotions and words. Perfect. 😍 Life is beautiful test.🙂 Powerful Poetry
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Oh, thanks a lot sameera, I am glad you liked it.. 😊
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Beautifully written…..I like it…
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Thanks a lot sir. 😊, much humbled by your remark.
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Very well written!
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Thank you sir, glad to hear from you.
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Liked this very much
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Hey Noor thanks for appreciating it.. Hope you are having an amazing day.
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This is a beautiful writing!!! I loved this!
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Hey thanks Tapasi, much humbled by your remark.
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It’s my pleasure 🙂
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One should be able to stand and take a decision, no matter the end result.
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Yeah ,agreed buddy…thanks for reading..glad you liked it.
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Be rest assured I will always like your post Khan.
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Yep, I know it, Peter, my friend. 😁
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Do continue blogging, impacting, and succeeding. Enjoy your weekend.
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Thanks you too.
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You’re welcome.
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Great post 🙂 🙂
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Thanks a lot asgleigh I am glad you liked it, 😊
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