Unsung love. 

Smirking when I let myself fall,

Besides your hazy trail

Your sights at me setting me ablaze

What should I meant to do, Why can’t

you say?

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I am a fragmented soul of cruxes

Fighting in the darkness of blue,

Floundering in the flood of perplexing thoughts

Hitching myself away but latching with you.

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Shall I come to you!? my intuition says ‘no’

It’s a hasty surge of lost soul

Your charm just spread for all

And obviously anyone can fall!!

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Amorous glances and infectious smile,

When words fell short

To describe your aura that fall,

Was it general for all?

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Alas, as you fade away with the tide,

I know my love always hide

It will always remained buried,

In the sands of time.

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I cared for you and always will,

Away you are, utmost carefree.

Oils of my midnight lamp burns.

As my careful eyes make a spree.

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My love was true, if you stumbled upon me

With your evolution of emotions turning into sea,

I would turn my arms, as your home ,

If you become a inhabitant of me.

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My love is unexpressing

It’s hidden in a reticent bay

Help me to decipher, oh dear soul!

My eyes just tell the tales.

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Tirading time moved us away,

Too far in the unnamed fanes

Scrounging me with her memories

Oh, my love please come back again.

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!ns¡ght

Keep smiling

Aquib.

Published by AQUIB

the unsung poet..

97 thoughts on “Unsung love. 

  1. “Hitching myself away but latching with you” was a unique saying and it tied into the ending well as hitching and latching implied staying together. The picture with the couple interlocked hands adds to the moment and the feeling of this poem also, a true Romeo you are sir. Great words of love.

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  2. This has to be your most honest expression of self!! You are always perfect in your wonderful craft…I must say, but this was different…this had your soul latched to it, an essence of you swirled around the intertwining words, searching, yearning!!! I loved it to the last drop ❤❤❤

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    1. Star pragya, firstly thank you for appreciating it, your support means a lot to me… 😊
      Well your remarks are themselves so profound, you don’t need any adjectives, lol just *space , space * 😂😂😂, love and support don’t need any words… 😂😂…
      Btw Stay blessed. Looking forward to your next post. Keep smiling.

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      1. I will be in debt now to return the favour,.. Waqai me, it’s always my pleasure to receive your feedback and comments. ..
        But it is all your kindness tbh… I wish you the best in life. You are in my dua.

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      2. Oh god🙁
        I love your work that’s why I do it. It’s not kindness, Aquib! Favour? Debt? 🙁🙁You’re my dost, let’s not bring such words.
        You are in my dua, too. Waqai mein!
        I am keeping a low profile here now, so it wasn’t a favour! Star Aquib you deserve it! 😊

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  3. Beautiful bhaijjan! Maza aa gaya padkar. I’ll keep frequenting your blog now, more often! Will read a few older of your poems as well! You’re a good poet buddy! Glad! 😊

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