Smirking when I let myself fall,
Besides your hazy trail
Your sights at me setting me ablaze
What should I meant to do, Why can’t
you say?
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I am a fragmented soul of cruxes
Fighting in the darkness of blue,
Floundering in the flood of perplexing thoughts
Hitching myself away but latching with you.
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Shall I come to you!? my intuition says ‘no’
It’s a hasty surge of lost soul
Your charm just spread for all
And obviously anyone can fall!!
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Amorous glances and infectious smile,
When words fell short
To describe your aura that fall,
Was it general for all?
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Alas, as you fade away with the tide,
I know my love always hide
It will always remained buried,
In the sands of time.
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I cared for you and always will,
Away you are, utmost carefree.
Oils of my midnight lamp burns.
As my careful eyes make a spree.
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My love was true, if you stumbled upon me
With your evolution of emotions turning into sea,
I would turn my arms, as your home ,
If you become a inhabitant of me.
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My love is unexpressing
It’s hidden in a reticent bay
Help me to decipher, oh dear soul!
My eyes just tell the tales.
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Tirading time moved us away,
Too far in the unnamed fanes
Scrounging me with her memories
Oh, my love please come back again.
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Keep smiling
Aquib.
Beautiful bro
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Thanks a lot brother,(sorry your comment landed in my spam)… Keep smiling.
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Not an issue dear..
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☺️👍
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Great! Awesome poem….😊
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Hmmm, thanks a lot Nandita, Finding the lost ‘Nemo’ now!!! .
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Exceptional words here. This material is good.
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Thanks bro, I appreciate that, ☺️. Have an amazing day.
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Beautiful poetry Aquib ji, thumbs up 🙂
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Thanks a lot soiba jee. My thumb is up now. You see.
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Haha 👍
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👍👍👍👍👍
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Nice one aquib:) keep writing friend
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Bahut U Dhanyawaad aapka, You too,keep writing and smiling.
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Hahaha hinglish? Yes.. smiling very important
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Yep, ☺️☺️😁
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Well crafted, I must say!
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Thanks a lot valiant, And good night!!
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Your beautiful poem of interweaving natures beauty, and a young couples failing path is quite superb.
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Thanks a lot sir.
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“Hitching myself away but latching with you” was a unique saying and it tied into the ending well as hitching and latching implied staying together. The picture with the couple interlocked hands adds to the moment and the feeling of this poem also, a true Romeo you are sir. Great words of love.
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Thanks a lot Joy for this beautiful comment. ☺️☺️👍👍☺️
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You’re welcome my friend. Beautiful poem. 👍🙂
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Beautiful poem! As always..❤❤
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Thanks a lot Caren, 💙💙
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You’re welcome! 😉
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☺️☺️
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You already have your emojis😁
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You stole my words, Caren really, I was going to say that, lol😂😂,
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😂😂😁
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This has to be your most honest expression of self!! You are always perfect in your wonderful craft…I must say, but this was different…this had your soul latched to it, an essence of you swirled around the intertwining words, searching, yearning!!! I loved it to the last drop ❤❤❤
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chronicles, thank you!!! , you are really inspiring and motivational… ☺️☺️☺️💙💙💙
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Come on, now..thank you for your kind words☺
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☺️☺️☺️, you are most welcome.
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Awesome writing
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Thanks ankur bhai.
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So well written and its inner meaning is so wonderful 🙂
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Thanks a lot Mistimaan jee.
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Beautifully composed lines, Aquib. So deep lines penned. Great.
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Thanks a lot Kamal, have a great day.
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Welcome Aquib and same to you too.
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beautiful words. 🙂
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Thanks a lot. ☺️
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Beautiful poem. There is so much emotion attached to these words. Keep writing Aquib, we want to read more.
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Thanks you so much, your comments are profoundly supportive for me, thank you Lara.
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Beautiful expression of romantic love and yearning.
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Thanks a lot Magarisa.. ☺️
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You’re welcome, Aquib. ☺
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👍☺️☺️
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Emotional. Awesome!
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Thanks a lot brother..
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You’re welcome
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☺️☺️👍👍
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superb
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Thanks a lot, have a great day.
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Awww the words are so touching and soothing !!! ☺☺☺
Please go through my latest blog
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Heart touching one !!!! 💓
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Thanks anakha, glad you liked it.
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THIS IS PURE! ANOTHER CASE STUDY! I NEED TO LEARN SOME ADJECTIVES NOW SO I CAN JUSTIFY YOUR POEMS WITH MY COMMENT!
YOU’RE A TRUE POET, AQUIB!
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Star pragya, firstly thank you for appreciating it, your support means a lot to me… 😊
Well your remarks are themselves so profound, you don’t need any adjectives, lol just *space , space * 😂😂😂, love and support don’t need any words… 😂😂…
Btw Stay blessed. Looking forward to your next post. Keep smiling.
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Lol😂
I keep my best of the comments for you haha😘
* space, space*
You too keep smiling, Aquib🤗🙂
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I will be in debt now to return the favour,.. Waqai me, it’s always my pleasure to receive your feedback and comments. ..
But it is all your kindness tbh… I wish you the best in life. You are in my dua.
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Oh god🙁
I love your work that’s why I do it. It’s not kindness, Aquib! Favour? Debt? 🙁🙁You’re my dost, let’s not bring such words.
You are in my dua, too. Waqai mein!
I am keeping a low profile here now, so it wasn’t a favour! Star Aquib you deserve it! 😊
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Ok, pragya..
Thanks again.. Btw.. Hope you are having an amazing day today..
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🙂🙂🙂haha
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Beautiful flow!
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Hey thanks orange, thanks for liking it… Lot of *spaces* for you too😂😂
Well it’s a bad joke..
Never mind… Keep smiling.. ..
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Lol! Yeh sachi dead joke tha 😝
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Yep, utna bhi dead ni tha.. Akhri Saans le raha chal rahi hai, tum ne Maar diya.. Lol
. 😂😂..
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Loved it bhai 🙂
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Thanks a lot Mistimaan, glad you liked it.
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Beautiful
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Thanks a lot buddy.. I glad to hear that from you. Keep smiling. ☺️
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Such a beautiful piece of poetry!
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Thanks a lot maam, I am glad you liked it.
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👌👌👌
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Thanks bro, 👍👍👍
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You’re welcome man😁
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Loving the image and imagery. ☺⚘
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Reblogged this on Just another voice and commented:
Beautiful!
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Thanks a lot kaylamarie, I am glad to hear that. And thanks for sharing it.
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Of course! I always enjoy reading beautiful things 😊
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😊😊,
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Too good 👌👌
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Thanks preeti , glad to hear that from you. Have a great day. 😂
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क्या बात है बहुत उम्मदा है जी…
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Thank you sagar bhai, glad you liked it. 😊😊
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Welcome Bro.
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Beautifully composed.
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Hey thanks, @lilmunchkinn, glad to hear that, have a good day.
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😊
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Nice piece, mate!
Also, I’m new to WordPress and just trying to find my way around. I just posted some poetry, hope it connects!
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Thanks bro.
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Beautiful bhaijjan! Maza aa gaya padkar. I’ll keep frequenting your blog now, more often! Will read a few older of your poems as well! You’re a good poet buddy! Glad! 😊
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Yeah yeah, would be my pleasure. It means a lot to me. Feel free to compliment and give remarks. Best wishes for you. Keep smiling buddy.
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I wanted to thank you for this wonderful read!!
I absolutely loved every bit of it. I have got you bookmarked to check out new things you post…
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