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Telling you the reminiscence of the constant past.
Of a boy who lived and searched his bays.
happiness he spread with no hatred.
And spent his days with his chosen friends,
Smiling and sharing gleeful tales.
He grew up with principles and fables, learnt.
And met and made new friends with group of boys and girls.
One such among took his heart,
And he fell for her, as if he got ensnarled.
He helped and glued with her,
But his Adhesive were pale and strut.
2.
An another boy took his love
So far in stinted fane,
She did not realise and followed,
the boy looked her in aghast shallow.
He spent days and nights sinking in the thoughts,
For what actually went wrong!
The relinquishing remarks he made,
‘This wasn’t my love, and it was a mistake. ..’
He went forth treading his paths
Becoming what he desired,
And engrossing the thing he admired.
3.
He sat one day, and thought for his love.
Tears formed in his eyes and dried
As his comrades can infer.
All his days passed like a unquenchable thirst…
‘All I did, was only for her return?’ ..
A piece of his heart was still with her..
Alas, his remorse can never discern.
He grew and grew and grew old.
His might and strength and body senescenced,
A parchment paper appeared and it said,
‘The love you crave has died,
The girl once you loved has now realised’
For her heart beated for him,
Craving to returned to his vortex, each moment!
But alas! everything were too late.
His thirst quenched with the ink,
As it disappears with the tears in every winks.
And closed his eyes with a smile
And saw his love talking to him, again!
Taking him to the magnificent realm of sane.
Aquib khan .
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You are a master indeed🙌🏻 hats up
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I dunno what to say. (Lol).
Thank you Hati so much for the love and support.
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True love is wonderful, and your words were wondrous,….. I too, once had a true love……
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Thank you for such a lovely comment. That’s pleasing to hear from you, and your dots are signifying many unspoken words.
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My writings are my tributes …….
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Sure it is…😇😇…
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yaar tumne to pura phd kar liya
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Lol, I dunno. I wrote this, jab Mujhe neend hi nahi aa rahi thi, 🙃🙃🙃.
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Ha ha…aksar badiya lajaawab poetry tab hi aati hai jab neend nahi aa rahi hoti hai. I call it writer’s thrills 😉
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Meri tabyat abhi tohri nasaaz hian, kya kare….. You coined a very good term for this, , good night though. Keep smiling. …
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Thank you. You get well soon!! Good night toi. Take care
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LOve is not always predictable! Great poem!
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Yea Peter its unpredictable sometimes or rather more often, i think the mortals should deduce the complex equation to simpler form rather than complicating it, without getting valid solutions.
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You’re right. that’s a good advice.
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Thanks Peter, have an awesome day. :)))
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You’re welcome and you too.
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beautifully written….
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Thank you sir so much. have a nice day
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What a wonderful dedication to true love.
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Thanks Moushmi very much, hope you enjoy each and everyday.
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Beautiful poem and so emotional. True love can be very painful sometimes.
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I have never met a true love(oops) .
Would love to read your opinions about it, Lara.
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The fact is that you might love somebody who does not care for you. And the harder you try and run after that person the more he will reject you. Believe me it happens often. I have experienced it myself. Lara
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Yeah I believe you. Lara.
Never lose perseverance and smile. ☺️☺️☺️
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Spellbound!. You made me speechless.This is the best master piece work of your’s.👌💐
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Oh, Shayra, kuch zyda tareef kardi apne. 🙃🙃
Well thank you for stopping by and reading it.
Have an awesome day and enjoy and these holidays, wow sat, sun, mon, and tomorrow, yay.
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Nhi tarif bilkul jaruri thi .Really, bahut h acha likha h creative.Well penned👍👏
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Thanks a Quintal, JazakAllah , Shayra, Tumhara next episode fallen nightmare ka Kab aa raha.
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Bahut h jaldi, bas last h aur twist b last h .Finally, its over.But I’m overwhelmed to see the response.Thanks a ton for that 😊
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Yea, it’s very intriguing. You did an apt plot twist.
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Thank you aquib
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This is so beautiufl. I just wanted to say I was in need of this. Thank you. True love does wait. I have waited a long time and I have finally found true love.
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Oh, that’s great, congratulations, patience and preservarence is the key really.
Have a blessed life ahead.
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Thank you. Yes I agree. Thank you and I wish the same for you.
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Oh, thanks
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You’re welcome.
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Wonderful poem !!
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Thank you Mam so much, have a nice day.
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Saya suka postingan anda…sangat bagus…. Very very nivce…..
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Thank you Marly for liking it.
Semoga harimu menyenangkan. Saya juga menyukai postingan anda.
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Terimakasih kembali…
😄
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Marly you change your profile picture, looking awesome, great ☺️☺️☺️. Terimakasih.
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Yeah…. Its me….
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I know. ☺️☺️☺️
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💕
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Thanks TTB, for the read. I really appreciate it. Hope you are doing good, I th ink you are posting after a long time, right?
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I’m well. Summer time is lazy time for me.💗
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Oh cool. Where you from btw? In India summer ended like centuries ago
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Texas, USA
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Oh cool. You guys have a never ending summer gap right?
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We have 4 seasons.
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Cool. ☺️☺️
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I mean a long summer holiday.
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Oh no, no long summer holiday.
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Oh, my bad.
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💫💗
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☺️💙
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Hey! Loved this poem, would you check out https://tanyatale.wordpress.com/2017/08/25/poetry-with-deveaux-fraiser-cracked/
This guy is a amazing poet and I’d love for you to see his work
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https://poetsalbum.wordpress.com/2017/09/02/merry-go-round/
Your like would be very much appreciated. This is an activity given to us and I need a total of 150 likes to pass. Thank you so much!
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Your writing is mesmerizing! This is a beautifully written piece.
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Thanks a lot..this is overwhelming for me. Have a nice day.
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I love it, this is beautiful.
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thanks a lot dawn. keep smilng.
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Nice!!
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Thanks so much for the read, have a nice day.
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🙏🙏👍
https://avoicefromiran.wordpress.com/2017/09/21/private-property%d9%85%d9%84%da%a9-%d8%b4%d8%ae%d8%b5%db%8c/
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Wow …nice one !!
I hope u will like mine too !!
Visit : https://bleedingthoughtsweb.com
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Of course buddy. Thanks a lot for reading.
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This has a deep meaning. And, this is lovely. I loved the flow, each and every transition. 🙂Experienced ho!
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😂😂, kisi ne shayad sahi kaha hai , pyaar ka Matlab unse poocho jinka koi humnawa nahi hain. (actually yeh maine kaha hian lol)..
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Lol😂 Sahi, bilkul sahi!
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OMG…. This is just too good….. Lot many things to learn from you Sir,yet!!! This piece is marvellous 💞💞💞 Glad to find you on wp🙏😉👍👍👍
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Thanks Zankhana, I appreciate your support and remarks.. Your comment humbles me. Keep posting and smiling
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Superb composition of words of pure love that is so deep, Aquib. Lovely poem.
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Thanks kamal, good to hear that from you. Hope you are having an amazing day. 😊
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Welcome Aquib and yes absolutely. You too have a nice day.
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Mesmerising post and how beautifully you have described your thoughts
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Thanks Tanvir for appreciating it.. I am glad to hear that. God bless you. 😊
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My pleasure
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Well💑💑💑👌👌👍👍👍
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Thanks a lot ankit I am glad you liked it… Have a great day ahead. 😊
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Wonderful 👍👍
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Thanks @The crown I am glad you like it.. Keep posting.
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You’re welcome bro😊😊
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Sad and beautiful I‘ve re read and feel still same…
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Thanks a lot Noor, your presence here means a lot.. 😊😊
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Still single Aquib?
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I believe in singularity theory for now.. Haha. 😁
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Yeah, you’re still too young for these kind of stuff…
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Excellent post by the way, it was very emotional…really…
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Thanks shad your love and support means a lot.. Keep smiling, best wishes for you…
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Same to you! 😄
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Methink too, there is always a righteous time for everything.
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Couldn’t agree more Aquib…
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🤗🤗👍👍
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beautifully written man! it was really nice and I enjoyed the read!
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Thanks bro, just read your latest post and I must say it’s awesome, well penned about social issues, looking forward to your posts.
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thanks alot for checking out! i am really thankful
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True love never dies but goes stronger with time. I quite agree with you.
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Thanks a lot Peter, glad to hear that from you.
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It’s a great and impacting post.
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Loved it
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Thanks a lot Mistimaan bhai. Have a great day ahead.😊
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Loved this beautiful poem!
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Thanks a lot diana, I am glad, your remarks are just encouraging. May God bless you. 😊
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You’re utmost welcome. Thank you and God bless you as well. 🙂
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So wonderfully truly lovely😍
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Thanks a lot Ortensia, your remark means a lot to me. I am glad you liked it.
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A beautiful tale Aquib the parts were distinct yet related by a single thread which resolved them happily in the climax. 🙂 Have a great day 🙂
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Thanks for the remark anand bhai, this means a lot , I am overwhelmed by it.. Keep smiling. 😊
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You’re most welcome. You also stay blessed and happy 🙂
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It never dies!!
Wow
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Thanks vikram, glad to hear that from you. ☺️
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👏👏👏 beautiful!!
I write poems too, not published here yet. Will soon do. On this note would like to say;
Our hunt for definitions and meanings are never ending. We always desire to provide something meaningful and yearn for the same.
We build a fence around us and only look outside it to compare. But don’t realise the treasure we possess within.
Unveiling such realisations, opening chests of such treasures,
HemasSphere brings to you 1 of such series. Focus is always on realism.
To the world where I belong and to me where the world resides.
Listen; don’t just hear! – is the 1st of the series.
Would be honoured by your visit and presence on my page and would be appreciate your views.
I can be followed on
hemassphere.wordpress.com
fb.me/HemasSphere
@hemassphere -Twitter
Happy reading.
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Very beautifully written hemas… Will read yours keep posting.
Thanks for appreciating this.
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Thank you.
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Amazing poetry. Your words touched my heart. 🙂 🙂 Your story telling through your poem is amazing indeed. 🙂 🙂 🙂 🙂
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Thanks Charisma for appreciating it.. I am humbled by your generous remarks. Best wishes for you. Keep smiling.
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Love and best wishes. 🙂 🙂 🙂 🙂 And keep writing. 🙂 🙂 🙂
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Peace and love, keep smiling and writing. 🤗🤗
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truly emotional and educational ..
wen its time love and admit, rather than later regret
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