I am glad to present you the collaborative poem. I hope it tickle your taste buds.
Please do Follow the esteemed and insighted blogger Nandita Gupta from poetic periscope. I am grateful for her efforts and it was such a spontaneous poem i must add. She is too young but her thoughts are extremely sublime and streamlined, an extremely logical person .
Sagacious Dilemma, a repost. ***
The fight between me and the devil that resides ..
The craving of bad things the desires of wrong…But everytime I kill it…It adds a charm to my beauty of soul
The darkness of night in which devil is powerful in that darkness I seek lessons from that.
The crusade against that devil of mine
That craves me out for felony acts and desire of perverse pride..
I set a rage against thine; rage rage against the dying of light
Those scars of struggle then turn;
into the glowing charm of ‘following and remembering the Divine.’
The darkness of night in which devil whispers his knell,
So powerful and ferocious are those chants of ‘death-spells’.
The divinity I face is far superior than those,
Feeling of a halo charms kill all malevolence.
I rise up high and high in honour and persona.
Since I gave up all my worldly diaspora.
Those black and white things.
That sojourn innately in our own beings.
Those callous mortals often succumb to these.
Leeching to the blackness Supreme.
And Then I turn up again standing in the mid-flow of mighty stream once again!
With the undying faith in my heart
While this time- I whisper in my devil’s ear…
You are just a stream and I am the Storm.
The Good and White shall always sustain and your darkness and evil shall surely perish again and again.
By heart the message from God and you shall be saved from seeing the mirror on the ‘day of judgement’ and escape the sight of your eerie life that went in vain.
The trepidation of the jacquard boulevard,
I swayed far away smelling the cryptic carroding tars,
I hatched out from the paltry reprisals
Gathering small lights that scatter.
It pierced the shadows of the darkness,
I sung the tune; a divine tune,
That I received from the rope of the Almighty.
Bewildering cantankerous bulwarking walls.
I embark to the alley treaded by refulging stars.
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Nandita Gupta
Aquib khan.
A lovely work!
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Thanks Rita, please help me the title. Unsung war or sagacious Dilemma?
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Sagacious dilemma I would suggest. Both are good though
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Thanks Rita, yeah I think so.. But the other title is too apt , agreed.
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Yep 😊
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This is pure art!👌
Both the titles are justifying but “Sagacious Dilemma” would be just apt😊
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Thanks pragya, I am overwhelmed by your response. Thanks for helping me with the title. 😊😊
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Wonderful collaboration 🙂
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Bade dino ke baad, (chitti chitti aayi hain hain) 😛😛.
Hey, thanks soiba for appreciating it.
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Hahaha lol 😀
You’re welcome 😀
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I love it ! Wonderful and lovely Aquib
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Thanks Novus jee, glad you liked it. How was your day today?
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Very nice, and yours?
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Mine was also good, hey what do you reckon about the title?
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Nice , it suits the poem
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Thanks, Novus. You will get chocolates. 😜😜.
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😂😂😂
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Nice, Wonderful collaboration, keep it up…..
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Thanks a lot Marly, glad to hear that from you.. How are you these days?,
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I’m very good… Just a little busy… Hihi….
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👍
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A superb collaborative poem, very powerful, and I tend to like “Unsung War”
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Thanks a lot sir, thanks for the recommendation.
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Beautiful work brother… Keep it up.😊😊💐
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Thanks a lot bro glad to hear from you. Have a nice day.
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Most welcome 😊😊💐
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😊😊💐💐
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Well written bhai
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Thanks a lot Mistimaan bhai.
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This was our one of the best collaboration…I guess.😊😊 Cheers!
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Yep, I reckon that too. Thanks for your efforts it surely worth it.
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Oh well…Thanks and Thanks bcz u made efforts equally well.😉😁😁
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Wonderful work!
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Thanks a lot Diana glad you liked it.
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Most welcome.
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My favorite one so far
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Thanks a lot shaad, glad to hear that from you. Keep smiling.
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You’re welcome…hope you keep making amazing poems just like always…i don’t know lots of poets but you’re definitely my favorite one…
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Thanks a lot buddy I am totally overwhelmed by your remark. Your presence here is always sought for by me. ☺️☺️👍👍
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Truly blown away. You are an amazing poet!
Hayley 😊
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Thanks a lot Hayley. 😊glad to hear that from you.
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Very good!
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Very powerful poem
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Thanks Tanvir A lot.,😊
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