#poem#peace.
I sat on the doorstep of abandoned house.
Scattered torn and spilled, Grothous*.
Amazed by, sycamore and teak tree.
Standing telling the history.
Look I saw, broken toys and dolls.
The carvings on walls
The children echo from alls.
Pearls like shine, in my eyes.
As the tears fall down.
Family and brethren all gone.
Diverging lights from the walls.
Carcasses of food and females stalls.
All clotted with blood and free.
Telling me the dreadful history.
Causulities and collateral damage.
Was sited by me, the house I could only see.
The silent cries agony and pain.
Was so evident.
My hands and feet trembled, precedent.
Can’t you see the misery.?
When the deaf hears the history.
The house has a clot, broken and still.
Breath no air and looks for its kin.
‘Go bring me, my inhabitants’, :yellin’.
Walls of house I see you tellin’
In my hands there is no wands,
Can take the balls back to cannons.
There you see a child smiling,
It used to be, now stucked in a framing.
This innocent has yet no wings.
Now in a this earth, draped in white.
Waiting for a day for all his smiles.
The daughters, son and people
The brethren and all kith and kin.
On the floor you stand has blood spills
The innocent did nothing but has bearings.
I stand losing their hope, I wasn’t strong to cope.
The sound of the cries,
The shout of of missiles,
I wasn’t strong enough to hold.
Alas, the dust has it all,
My friend all you need to do
Is spread the message.
For innocent life’s is precious
Behold to the Rope of the Most Gracious.
This life is one, a gift and a test.
For there lies a recompense.
For the soul who doeth the wrong.,
Surpasses the worldly law,
Will grabbed by the forelocks.
On the day that is bound to come.
I sat on the doorstep of abandoned house.
Scattered torn and spilled, Grothous.
Amazed by, sycamore and teak tree.
Standing telling the history
#wakeup
Four words story.
They live,
you sleep.
*Name of this imaginary house, Means a place of safety.
A repost.
©Copyright reserved !ns¡ght 2017
Aquib.
Images do not belong to me.
wow, its really nice..
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Hey thanks. For your time.
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Nice work.
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Hey thanks for your time. Keep blogging. 😀
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You are welcome. You have talent!
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☺️ thanks for your appreciation. You have it too.😇
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Hi Aquib!
How are you
Just wanted to let you know that I listed you for sunshine blogger award, please check our my latest post, congratulations. Thanks
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Hey bro thanks for doing this, I am really thankful.
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Most welcome, you deserve it, bro!
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I am good Alhamdulillah. I. Hope ur too.
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Alhamdulilah doing well too, buddy ! Ramadan Mubarak🙂
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Ramadan Mubarak to you too bro.
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Ramadan Mubarak, Eid is on the way, wish you have very happier period during Eid days with your family and friends too, bro!
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Same to you bro, and keep blogging and keep smiling.
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Thank you buddy you too, thanks for your encouraging words, aquib
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Oh.what is dis tragedy?everyone know.government know.but nobodys are doing any efforts but only some words of sympathy.all humans should come ahead to stop dt terrorism in dis world.thank to u for put up a most sensitive point.marvellous.
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Hey thanks, We should come to common grounds and then support any evil activity be it corruption or terrorism or hate crimes.
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Absolutely right.welcome dear.
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*stand against and do not support.
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Nice
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Thank you. ☺️
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Your poem touched my heart and the pictures you have chosen brought tears in my eyes. And reminded me of so many beautiful places in this world (yes, Syria is one of them) that are turned into ruins. So many beautiful and innocent souls who did nothing wrong…to be victimized by political powers they don’t even understand. My prayers are with all of these little ones. My gratitude for you, for writing courageously and honestly, with so much talent. And for honoring me by following my blog! Thank you! Be sure that every like I’ll ever give comes from my heart!
Blessings of love upon you!
Claudia
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Hey you are awesome, ☺️. And I agree with you completely.
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And I appreciate your time for commenting your thoughts. 😇😇☺️
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This is a great poem! Well done. if I would not exaggerate, it is an award-winning one for that. best wishes!
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Thanks bro.
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The understated horror behind these subtle lines is so humbling to read – a powerful poem.
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☺️💚
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Awesome and brilliant
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Thanks sis.
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Thanks bro, 😇
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Thanks man, I really appreciate your kindness. Keep smiling. ☺️
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This poem stopped me in my tracks. I was there, I could hear the cries and feel the pain. That power to move and to recreate a place with words is a special talent. Thank you!
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Thank you, the pleasure is all mine.
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Melancholic and beautifully written.
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Thanks for your appreciation. ☺️☺️☺️😇😇😇
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It was a pleasure.
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Nicely written.
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Thank you,☺️☺️☺️
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Wow. That was very well done and full of emotion.
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Thank you.
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Very nicely done aquibview.
Some of the poem reminded me of a reality that I didn’t want to be reminded of and some of the pictures were a little sad but you brought it all together nicely.
It’s really a shame that some of the bad things are going on but we have to take the good with the bad.
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Yea, I agree with you.
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That was a powerful piece of writing, but I could not find the word or meaning of ‘Grothous’ anywhere and I am wondering if you meant to write grottos.
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Its actually a name I came across., for reliability, etc. That signifies a house, a place of safety.
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Google it you will get it.
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Beautiful. This line in particular caught me and I re-read it: “This life is one, a gift and a test.”
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Thanks you, Christy. ☺️☺️
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Love the imagery of the “sycamore and teak tree.” 😊
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Thank you very much.
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How did I miss this? Extremely poignamt work and strong writing!
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Thanks valiant a lot. Hmmm. Keep smiling. Your words encourage me. Thanks again.
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I am happy if they do!
Have a nice evening ahead.
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Oh, all my pleasure. Yes, you too. Eat Chai and drink biscuits.
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Haha.
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☺️☺️
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Respected one from your pen. Great sense of social welfare. I am sure that u will reach a Greater heights for serving people
Thanks
Talent Hunter
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Thanks for your encouragement bro. I wish you the same. Keep smiling. Have an awesome day ahead.
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InshaAllah..
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Lovely imagery! And beautifully written☺
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Thanks Pravarthika, have a nice day ahead.
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You too, Aquib!
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Beautiful way of depicting a tragedy.
Is it about Kashmir ?
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It’s general, whereever you think fit is apt.
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Okay
I thought it to be written for there
Good one indeed
Where are you from
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It’s left solely upon readers for contemplation . Thanks a lot for reading and keep smiling.
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Thanks
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Beautifully penned..the way you give words to emotions is commendable👏👏
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Thanks Ummati a lot. Have an amazing day ahead.
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There is a lot to it more than words, simply amazing and powerful.
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Thanks Moushmi a lot for reading. Have a nice day.
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Nicely penned.
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Thanks a lot buddy.
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Wow…. it’s really awesome 👌
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Thank you Mam. Have an awesome day.
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Lovely piece of work !!
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Thanks a lot , tanvir keep smiling.
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Sorry Haida wajibi
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A very moving poem
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Thanks a lot Kaylaan, for the read. Have a blessed day ahead.
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Speechless! Now, I know why you feel that much agony towards those war mongers!
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Yeah, for their ulterior evil agendas innocent are killed..
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😔
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😖😖😖
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I was about to request you for a repost. Glad you did. 🤗
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Oh i am glad to hear that.. Pragya. Hope you are having an amazing day. Happy Holi.. To you.. 🤗
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Haha haanji🤗🤗
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Nice and powerful.perfect choice of images too
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Thanks ortensia, glad to hear that from you.
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Sad and true words so well depicted in a poetry form, Aquib and our world is getting small and people and children are separating and not knowing what to do. This world made by few masterminds who want to control all of us.
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Yes well said, kamal we need to wake up.
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Yes Aquib and slowly the world will definitely change.
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So nice it is
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Brilliant as always, Aquib.
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Thanks Arbie, I am glad to hear from you. Hope you are having amazing days.
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Beautiful 💞 Sir……!!!!
When to join your classes ????? And fees ????
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Thanks Zankhana, I pulled your comment out from my spam folder. Sorry about that. ..
Haha.. I am super novice in these.. But thanks for the curiosity… 😂😂I like it.. God bless you with success here and in hereafter.
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Your most Welcome ❤
And oh! So hard! Your effort of pulling it up from spam! I appreciate! Haha! Thank You!
If you’re novice!!! Toh! Where are we ??? Lol!😂
Thank You So Much 🙏🙏🙏😊
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☺️☺️, we are on same platform of wp.. Haha..
Again, please do write to support@akismet.com the reason why your comments are being spammed? And ask them to sort it out..or an easy way, reach out to instant help and support in the app.. It is so helpful. Is it happening more frequently with you?
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I really don’t know y it’s happening!!!!
It’s just happened with 2 more blog posts….!!!
And your one…
Rest it’s fine….!!! Hope it recovers soon! 😶
Thank you for help!😊
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A masterpiece which I was happy to read.
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Thanks Diana for appreciating and encouraging me.. Have a great day.
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You’re utmost welcome and thank you.
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Very transporting!
This touched me like no other write-up I’ve read today.
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Thanks orange G. Glad to hear from you. Wish you good luck and happiness.
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Nicely done
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Thanks ☺️
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What to say? I can’t really explain how I felt while reading it. Everything seemed to be happening right before me. How I missed this masterpiece! If I say this will be soon taught to students in their classes, it would be no exaggeration. Really a moving and saddening one.
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