I spilled the ink from the lava down the core of the earth.
To burn oxymorons in my Oxymorons.
I see the darkness in the black days,
And false enlightenment at lit nights..
Those vitreous are not refractive,
But opaque to the real light…
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Now burn in your pseudo truth,
These galloping lines would trample your flimflam.
Your dimension is pseudo, an uncanny philosophy.
Your emphatic words are devoid of sympathy.
But Ah! the Dead Sea where you get drowned.
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The fields you created are non magnetic,
Non electric.
Lacking lines of earthly charge.
But inspired by hypocrisy and malice.
Now burn in your callous coal.
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Inspired by the poetry of My valiant soul.
Please do check her posts out.
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Aquib.
This is very Impactful, must say.
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Thanks Sneha.. Glad to hear that.
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👍
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Powerful. 🙂 last few lines reminded me of physics. Lol. 🙂
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I do use as metaphors. Hope you got this.. 🙂, you didnt respond to my very important comment on “work”..
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I got that. 🙂 vector. Dot product went above my head.
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Oooh nice one!
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Thanks a lot Arbie, glad to hear that from you.
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The dramatic intensity is equally striking as the lyrical fervor of the poem….Good job!😊
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Oh, thanks Nandita a lot. Glad to hear from you. 🤗🤗
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Very meaningful 🙂
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Thanks Mistimaan bhai.. 😊. Keep smiling bro.
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This was strong Aquib, I mean pumping poetry iron strong. “The Dead Sea where you drowned” that reached out, what an impact line that can be taken many ways, I loved that one. I loved the art as well as the title too, you combined everything and turned it into a work of art. That’s awesome.
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Oh thanks Jo, buddy. . This comment literally made my day. I wrote this like with a bit of heart . You are so encouraging I must say this.
Lots of peace love and unity.
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No problem my friend. It seemed you did put a lot of heart into this, I could feel the emotion and that’s great when a writer can pull emotion from a reader. Keep it up buddy.🌹
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🌹🌹, 😊😊, I feel the same for your, yours is always always motivating and thought provoking. Keep smiling.
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Will do, and thank you my friend. 😁🃏
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Last paragraph- amazing!
Kaafi intense!
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Zhanks Oranze zee. Lagta khoob holi banaya hain rango ke sath.. Khair wishing the best in life..
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Humari zzzindagi mein rangzzz ko humne sab orannggzzz aur black kar dala zzai! 😛 Kaise manaye holi😂
Thankzzz
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😂😂, waise aap safed rang ko apna le.
I like white, and black too.. White metaphorically… Khair yeh sab kehni ki baat hain..
Aap Gujiya khaiye.😋😋😋
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Bheezzz dezziiyyeee guuzziiyaaa kha lenge!
Log mujhe sachi pagal samjhenge😛😂
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Really!!! Vezzh zhonga Mein. 😎😎.
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Thanzzzz ziiii ☺️
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😁😁, have a great day ahead. Keep smiling. 😊😊.
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Aab bhi! Bhaiyya zzii zzmmiiillleee plzzz photo khechni hai 😂
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“Pholo ka taro ka sab ka Kehna hain ek hazaro me mere behna hain. “, lol, yeh gana yaad aa gay… Kyon nahi. Smiling.. 😊😊😊, deep, woh kya kehte close up paste Wali sleep.. Dant saaf hain mera.
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Breathtaking! I loved this! Be it poetry or your anger, I can feel the intensity is huge.
Great metaphors, Aquib! You are intelligent! Aaj pata lag gaya.
Just kidding! Have a calm and peaceful day ahead🤗🤗
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Dhanaywad aapka Pragya.
😂😂😂, aaj pata laga… Einstein bhai ke sath kaam ki hain… Uski theory of relativity Mera bahut bada hath tha.. 😂😂😂
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Kaha chale?😂😂😝😝..
Thik hain bhidu, attack kardo questions se. Stephen hawking ki novel although it’s not a literary journel. But it’s interesting, kyonki Maine ni padhi, tum order karogi main tumse le longa.. .
#Faragzy is super intelligent.
(😂😂😂)
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This is so true…I like the first two lines more….And empathy and sympathy…👏👌…Read it twice to understand….It was worth reading
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Thanks for the read sana mahin. I am glad you liked it. Have a great day.
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Have a great day too…
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In love with each line.
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I was really thinking about your poetry .. I must say your poems were the inspiration.. Sorry I forgot to credit you.. Will add..😛😛😛
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I have been missing from this platform since a couple of days and now reading your kind comment made my day.🙏
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When I was writing this one***..
Oh, koi baat nahi.. Aap waqt lijiye bilkul..
It’s my pleasure..
Yeah Welcome back,
Hope to read your latest poems.. Best wishes.
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Superrrr se bhi Uparrrr!!👍😊
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Thanks a lot Zankhana.. Glad to hear that from you. ☺️☺️
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Yaay!!! My comments are coming!!!
Thank you for the help!!!!🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏
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Oh, my pleasure,😂😂 did you try, or contacted the officials ??
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Off Course, I did….
TABHI TOH my comments are coming!!!
Thank you kese kahu….!!! 🙏🙏
Btw than too,
Thank you!😀😂😅😊
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Yeh toh mera fardh tha.. Ispe Kia Hain, 😀😀..
Best of luck for your boards Zankhana.
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Aayyeee…..
Again thanks…..
Itne bade poet se help! 😅🙏
Thank You…..!!!
Aapke Ashirwad se top bhi kar sakti hu….!!! 😅😀
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Arey I will pray for your top marks and grades… Give your best.. I am not bada poet madam ji just a novice.
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Aayyeee!!! So Great of you….!!!
I loved your attitude!!!!👏👏
This INCREASED your Respect 🙏🎀
Keep It Up 👍👍 Sir✌
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Arey yaar.. Padhai Karo jaldi.. Sara phataphat complete kardo syllabus aur Kia.. And bam top ho gyai. 😀😀😀Ispe respect wispect kuch ni..
Tum apne liye kar rahi ho yeh sab.. Yeh mehnat yeh sirf tum apne Khushnoodi ke liye karogi, aur usse tumhare parents tum par fakhr karege.. So, be proud of yourself first but don’t be arrogant and stubborn 😂😂.. and be awesome a d humble yeah . . OK.. So be happy and do good.
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Sure! Sure……!!!!
I would follow each and every word mentioned by you…..!!!
Itna bada Comment 😍😀
Haha! Thank You!😊🙏
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Very dark re!
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😊😊, Haan.. Now I live in shadows. Just kidding.. Haan Kabhi Kabhi change is good.. 😂😂
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Hey there! I have nominated you for the mystery blogger award. Make sure to check it out soon😀
https://wp.me/p88vHI-4c
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Thanks a lot sapphire Wilson for nominating me. It means a lot..
I checked your post, must say that your answers were superb.
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Thank you! Glad you liked them😃
Enjoy!😁😁
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Beautiful and poignant lines of poetry, Aquib.
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Thanks a lot kamal, pleased to hear from you. Keep smiling. 😊😊
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Welcome Aquib
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Awesome
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Brilliant lines and intense . The flow of words and the image is fabulous. Great creativity👌
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Thanks a lot shayara. Hope you are doing well fit as a fiddle.
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Yupppp, yeah nd wt about u?
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Oh, I am good Alhamdulillah, just busy with exams. 😕😕😕😕
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All the best 👍
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Very nice
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Thanks maithily, hope are doing great and having amazing days. Best wishes.
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You are most welcome…best wishes you too
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Your posts so amazingly beautiful I can’t even describe I’m speechless ❤ ❤
Its great to connect with you here and I would love to write about your blogs sometime in future on my upcoming brand, or do a cross-promotion if possible
Do followback and be in touch 🙂
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I am sorry your comment landed in my spam. I am overwhelmed by your lovely gestures ,it’s great to have a fellow writers ,blogger like you to be so supportive.
I wish you great success and happiness.
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