(please if you can listen to this song and then proceed)

Was that your love? 

You never told me, 

How much you loved me. 

And you kept looking at me. 

And I went away and away, faraway!! . 



Was that your love? 

Whenever you stood there for me. 

And that voice that was so heavy , 

And that your eyes was full of tears. 

And I never noticed. (How can I?) 




Was that your love? 

How can I decipher those? 

Wasn’t that the love was weak. 

Tis time, the mighty decider, 

That sublimes everything so easily. 

Those effervescence of happiness, 

And that effulgence of energy, 

Wast a thing of chance, 

And may be we are separated by time, 

But rest assured that our hearts beat in unison. 

And we might make the picture lovely and clear. 

I know it’s the peace 

And a tranquil aura that is required 

That Combines to form a unique elixir, 

But I am only a flying falcon without a nest, 

Without any anchor

in the turbulent storms among crabs that frown, 

Tis not love that only means togetherness, 

It’s also a form of sacrifice. 




 True that feelings felt were sublime 

But our ways are different, 

So does our minds, 

Our shores are parallel 

And cannot meet in the sands of time. 



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Aquib khan.!ns¡ght.

Published by AQUIB

the unsung poet..

85 thoughts on “Love*

  1. Absolutely brilliant! I went about it wrong though and read the poem without listening to the song (I started reading and couldn’t stop!) so I’ll need to listen later when I’m able!

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    1. Oh, it’s alright Arbie, glad to hear from you after a long time. The song is great it’s in English for the first half, so you will enjoy for sure the whole song.
      Wish you luck and happiness for the next year ie 2018, stay blessed😀😀.

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    1. Thank you Lara for the read and encouraging so profusely through the year. This means a lot. Well keep smiling… Appreciate the nature as you do by clicking awesome photos.
      Happy new year. Wish you luck and happiness. 😀😀☺️☺️

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    1. Yeah, Novus. One was I was changing and then got busy in some odd(don’t think please that I was hanging up side down on palm trees, you know, a simple odd) job, so then it was left blank for a while, then a odd pics I thought I was looking so shocked as though I was returning from Mars lastly I received this quotation via WhatsApp I thought its cool… So I updated it.. 😀😀…

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      1. You a certainly welcome my friend and like I said, when you put feeling into your writing like you do, you too reach places on a positive level. Carry that into 2018 and nothing will stop you! 😉. Keep it up!!

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  2. I did read ….between the lines…also….nice very touchy…..i will say emotions make the word flow….love is felt deeply and ernestly till u find it. The moment you got it. The feeling fades….and so is every emotion. A balance keep things last longer.
    just a thought…
    love you above every thing.

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      1. 😂😂😂😂😂, that’s right…. But I don’t think anybody does that, winks in class.. Its so cheesy.. Esp in Indian school where there is a rat race of marks and grades.. Even in college too rn, I don’t see any of my classmates staring let alone winking.. It’s utterly fictional.. (I did all my schooling in a boys school )..

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      2. Hahaa. That’s true. There’s really a rat race.
        And esp in Indian schools.
        Though I’m studying In a coed Convent still no one winks in the class I guess. This was really funny. And if teacher catches me she’ll for sure kick me out.

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      3. 😂😂😂😂, Yo please these winks she did, was part of the script.. Ok… Those who follow these common Bollywood, tollywoood or Hollywood stuffs they don’t think they are doing their job and then counting money on their table.. We should follow what’s practical and do what is necessary for our future.. You know.. Therefore shreya jindal follow what’s the straight path..

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  3. Awww so soulfully romantic! Beautiful! ❤ ❤
    And yes the song…..originally by Rohan Rathore…that touches my heart! It's so deep in feelings! ❤ ❤
    Especially when this line comes…….."Tune mere jaana
    Kabhi nahi jaana
    Ishq mera, dard mera, haaye!" Oh my!! It makes me wanna cry so bad!!! 😦 😦


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