(please if you can listen to this song and then proceed)
Was that your love?
You never told me,
How much you loved me.
And you kept looking at me.
And I went away and away, faraway!! .
Was that your love?
Whenever you stood there for me.
And that voice that was so heavy ,
And that your eyes was full of tears.
And I never noticed. (How can I?)
Was that your love?
How can I decipher those?
Wasn’t that the love was weak.
Tis time, the mighty decider,
That sublimes everything so easily.
Those effervescence of happiness,
And that effulgence of energy,
Wast a thing of chance,
And may be we are separated by time,
But rest assured that our hearts beat in unison.
And we might make the picture lovely and clear.
I know it’s the peace
And a tranquil aura that is required
That Combines to form a unique elixir,
But I am only a flying falcon without a nest,
Without any anchor
in the turbulent storms among crabs that frown,
Tis not love that only means togetherness,
It’s also a form of sacrifice.
True that feelings felt were sublime
But our ways are different,
So does our minds,
Our shores are parallel
And cannot meet in the sands of time.
*Reposted.
©Copyright reserved 2017-18
Aquib khan.!ns¡ght.
The poem is fervent- expresses what true love is apart from today’s meaning of love and temporary emotions that people have now a days. Good job!👍
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Thanks Nandita, I appreciate your each words, agreed to what you have said. Keep smiling.
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👍👍👍
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😀😀
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You are right…Those are not even humans those are just demons who can even spoil somebody’s life for their cheap desires…
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# They just know…
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Absolutely brilliant! I went about it wrong though and read the poem without listening to the song (I started reading and couldn’t stop!) so I’ll need to listen later when I’m able!
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Oh, it’s alright Arbie, glad to hear from you after a long time. The song is great it’s in English for the first half, so you will enjoy for sure the whole song.
Wish you luck and happiness for the next year ie 2018, stay blessed😀😀.
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This song came out a few years ago, and I still listen to it, its’s gold, awesome poem 🙂
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Thanks Pia, I like this song too. Thanks for appreciating the poem.. Wish luck and happiness for the next year.
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great lines!
When he waited for me I preferred to go. Now when I wait for him he is nowhere.
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Thanks AkankSha for the read. Just been to your latest post, your latest poem is terrific. Keep writing and smiling. Wish you luck and happiness.
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thank you very much sir for your great words & happy new year.
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Thanks madame, certainly was my pleasure.
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The video and music is so sad, and your poem is amazing and so full of emotions and about what true love is meant to be. I really love this post. I also wish you a very happy new year.
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Thank you Lara for the read and encouraging so profusely through the year. This means a lot. Well keep smiling… Appreciate the nature as you do by clicking awesome photos.
Happy new year. Wish you luck and happiness. 😀😀☺️☺️
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I noticed that you changed twice your picture!
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Yeah, Novus. One was I was changing and then got busy in some odd(don’t think please that I was hanging up side down on palm trees, you know, a simple odd) job, so then it was left blank for a while, then a odd pics I thought I was looking so shocked as though I was returning from Mars lastly I received this quotation via WhatsApp I thought its cool… So I updated it.. 😀😀…
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😄😄😄😄
You’re so funny !
OK I like it.
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Yeah, but on serious note(which I don’t have right now) thanks for the comment!! And Wish you luck and happiness.
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Thank you, you too
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Amazing post 🙂
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Thanks Mistimaan bhai.
I never got that goja Mithai you told, I completely forgot to tell you, sorry for that. .
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Come to Kolkata bhai….you will get goja more
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Well, will inform you when I will. One of my aunt live there, in Kolkata btw. Great place it is.
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Beautiful as one can expect from you. You put feeling behind this poem as a song writer does behind his music.
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Thanks a lot, Roy. You precisely get to the gist be it anything, I can bet on that. Wish you luck and happiness roy, Keep rocking and no doubt you are always encouraging and positive.
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You a certainly welcome my friend and like I said, when you put feeling into your writing like you do, you too reach places on a positive level. Carry that into 2018 and nothing will stop you! 😉. Keep it up!!
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Hey, thanks. Happy new year to you too. May it brings lot of positive and good surprises for ya. 😀😀
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Thank you and same to you, I’m sure this will be a good year for you!😁
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Amazing poem . I haven’t listen the song , I will listen it later. Good to read your posts after so long
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Thanks a lot Shayra, glad you stopped by here. Always a pleasure to receive your feedback. Wish you luck and happiness for the upcoming year. Keep smiling.
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Lovely heart touching words……………..Nicely penned.
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Thanks sagar, bhai, unfortunately your comment landed in my spam, sorry about that.. Wish you luck and happiness. Keep smiling.
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Always welcome.
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I did read ….between the lines…also….nice very touchy…..i will say emotions make the word flow….love is felt deeply and ernestly till u find it. The moment you got it. The feeling fades….and so is every emotion. A balance keep things last longer.
just a thought…
love you above every thing.
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Hello boss, you are right. I know and same here. Love you too.
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Amazing… ❤
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Hey, harjas thanks.. For commenting. Wish you luck and happiness for the upcoming year.
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What’s up mates, fastidious article and good urging
commented at this place, I am truly enjoying by these.
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Just awesome ❤️❤️❤️
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Thanks Noor, glad to hear that from you. 😊😊
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Love the song
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I like that song too.. ☺️
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Wonderful post😍😍😍
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☺️☺️, thanks @velvetscreams… Much humbled.
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You are welcome…you might like to check out my recent post😅😅
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Yeah, sure.. Would love too.😀
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Thank you so much for your support….😌…love if that comes often😉😉😊😊😊
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😂😂😂, no love never comes to me.. Lol.. I am angry, tough young lad 😛😛😛😛,,
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😂😂😂😂im sure one day,it will…patience dear😁😁
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😂😂😂,, you are sweet.. 😀
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Thanks indieShe, glad to hear that from you. 😊
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Beautiful poem and my favourite song in both versions!! Glad you shared after long time it bought me different smile
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Thanks a lot tanvir..keep smiling. Best wishes for you. Have a great time.
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Unfortunately yes the love was quite week. Hahaa. *jk*
And the song, I have heard it before and is amazing. Keep it up. Sent a mail.
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What’s *jk*? 🤔🤔
Oh, sorry didn’t receive your mail…
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Just kidding. Ok No worries.
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Oh, just to inform you it’s fictional.. 😁
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I could guess that Aquib. hahaa.
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#shakht launda ho main… Lekin priya prakash ka wink sahi hain,, 😂😂😂
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Hhaaha. She definitely became famous for no reason. I mean just by winking. I could do that better than her. hahaa. Par mereko itni gandi lagti hai wo. chii. hahaa
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Acha khair I was *jk*
, but do you use windows phone???
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Microsoft
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Yeah same thing… How do I know? From your dp??
Dictionary.. 😉😉
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But how can anyone guess the cell that I use from my dp damn???
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😏😏😏😎😎😎
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??? why
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From your dp I guessed.😎😎
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😂😂😂😂😂, that’s right…. But I don’t think anybody does that, winks in class.. Its so cheesy.. Esp in Indian school where there is a rat race of marks and grades.. Even in college too rn, I don’t see any of my classmates staring let alone winking.. It’s utterly fictional.. (I did all my schooling in a boys school )..
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Hahaa. That’s true. There’s really a rat race.
And esp in Indian schools.
Though I’m studying In a coed Convent still no one winks in the class I guess. This was really funny. And if teacher catches me she’ll for sure kick me out.
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😂😂😂😂, Yo please these winks she did, was part of the script.. Ok… Those who follow these common Bollywood, tollywoood or Hollywood stuffs they don’t think they are doing their job and then counting money on their table.. We should follow what’s practical and do what is necessary for our future.. You know.. Therefore shreya jindal follow what’s the straight path..
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Exactly and not winking. Hahaa
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😂😂
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Beautiful verses
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Thanks indieShe, it’s my pleasure to receive your remarks.
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Wonderful words!
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Thanks a lot Malkie, glad to hear from you always. Keep smiling.
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This is one of my favorite songs and your poem was absolutely beautiful.
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Thanks sonali a lot, glad to hear that. Keep smiling.
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You too 😊
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Awww so soulfully romantic! Beautiful! ❤ ❤
And yes the song…..originally by Rohan Rathore…that touches my heart! It's so deep in feelings! ❤ ❤
Especially when this line comes…….."Tune mere jaana
Kabhi nahi jaana
Ishq mera, dard mera, haaye!" Oh my!! It makes me wanna cry so bad!!! 😦 😦
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Most lovely n painful poem as hurted heart..dear!!
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Much humbled by your appreciation. Keep smiling
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Most welcome,dear!!
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