As the blossoming flowers I saw you,
A chalice full of your ardor
Caused a mayhem as I sipped in
My heart turned into your aurum.
.
.
Among the horde of faces
I saw a pearlescent shine
Gave birth to amorphous dreams,
Hoped to see you as mine.
.
.
Birth of quintessential love,
A love spilled over epochs
But remained a quivering morphs,
Unable to take any forms.
.
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With tapestry of dreams in my hands
Walked under the autumn’s skies
Like a bubble splashing
The reality sparkled over the eyes..
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left with your some memories
Caramelising me,
into your’s un – yearned Endearment
When your back turned towards me.
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.
Into the sea of my thunders, I swim,
Trying to find some shore,
An island comprising only of me
With no regrets, I build my own dreams.
©Copyright reserved 2017
!ns¡ght.
Aquib.
That’s far too much for this coffee. You should require a lace the. Coffee warning! 😉
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I love caffeine, I just have it… Thanks for the read, and this puzzling comment. ☺️☺️👍. Keep going.
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Enigmatic??? 😉 I am prideful in my esoterism
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Oh, well, keep it up. You posts are really awesome will look forward to your next posts. 👍☺️
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🙂 thanks. Working/musing lettuce wrap … tamarind chicken with vermicelli rice. The W carries often jarritos tamarind soda and with luck, pulparindo- a tamarind pulp candy that’s salted. Other sauce veg is the Casablanca quote of rounding up the usual suspects: garlic onion etc… leaving me a Mexican way to Chinese essentially fusion cuisine. Thoughts?
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Yo, damn, that’s great… You, btw, you definitely made me hungry.
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😉 now to make the sucker! A shopping I will go a shopping….
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That was a nice one khan bro. Loved it.😊😊
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Thanks bro a lot. Just read your latest post, filled with gratitude, you are awesome. Looking forward to your next posts. Keep bringing they are inspiring and full of insights. Thanks for including me it’s all your kindness and humbleness.
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Thanks for the late reply bro! Yes I read that. Thank you once again!!
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Oh, it was all my pleasure. Yea, all smiles. ☺️☺️👍
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😊😊
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Omg!!!!
This is you at your best…I am so proud to read the mystery behind your words…this piece is definitely addictive 😍😍😍
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Oh, thanks a lot, you are certainly motivating and kind enough. Have great day head. Looking forward to your next post.
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Aww…thank you so much 😃
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Yea, it was actually my pleasure.
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😇
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This was extremely poignant.
Well done.
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My pleasure to read your work!
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Same here always. ☺️☺️👍👍👍👍
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Enjoyed reading the concoction of imagery, emotions and words ! A wonderful composition Aquib!👍
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Thanks a lot maam, best wishes from my side. ☺️👍
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Yes, I am trying that. It is difficult but not impossible so I am trying.😊
Thanks again😊
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Oh, well that’s great, koshish karne se toh Khuda bhi mil jate hain, metaphorically. Keep the grind on.
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What a poetry!
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Thanks a lot, sadaf. have a great day ahead.
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“With no regrets I built my own dream” sends souch a powerful message. Wish I could get rid of regrets first. Love it!
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Oh, thanks a lot D. Have faith, it would vanish, whatever regrets that surrounds. Time heals.
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Thank you!
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Why not Mr.Aaquib. karma will hit me with bunches of Dairy Milk Silk you know…that too from your pocket!😂
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You know what you win.
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Oh I always win…you know…😎
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Beautifully written 😊
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Yes, And sorry for posting my comment at the wrong place. I was in flow. 😁
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Oh it’s OK, as long as it’s my own site. Lol. 😂😂
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This is beautiful !!
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Thanks a lot Lara. Hope you are having an amazing day.
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Beautifully expressed Mr.Aaquib. Emotions and Feelings for Miss.Special.😁😁
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You are great, mahaan hasti hain aap, Special kababs I like, proteins, carbohydrates, kuch Khao..
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Ham sab khate hain provided veg hona chahiye…😂😂 and zyada khana like nai karna chahiye nai toh panda se spherical ho jate hain😂😂
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Beautiful images – very enjoyable!
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Thanks a lot sir. Have an amazing day.
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Thank you, you too!
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My pleasure. ☺️
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Likewise!
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Wonderful
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thanks pal. have a great time
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Wow!❤
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Thanks soumya, glad you liked. Keep smiling. ☺️
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Yes. It’s too good. And, it’s Saumya*!
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Oh, i am sorry for that, Saumya!!!.. 😊😊
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😊😊❤
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https://wp.me/p9ttik-h read and you will be waiting for the second part of the story
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Love your use of words and the images you created in this poem!😍😍
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“With no regrets, I build my own dreams.”
Beautiful ending
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Nice one
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Thanks.
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Welcome
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Lovely hot coffee.. with beautiful conversation
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Thanks Tanvir for the lovely comment. Keep smiling.
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Great. Wow Wow Wow.
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Thanks bro.., 😀🤗🤗
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You’ve been nominated
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Thanks novus,
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Mr. Khan,
I must appreciate you for your work. This was incredible.
Keep it up. The way you vent, is above awesome.
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Thanks Shreya.. Glad to hear that from you. Keep smiling.
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And you keep laughing 😆
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Gorgeous poetry, Aquib! Don’t know how I missed this beautiful piece.
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Thanks dab gya tha kahi yeh.. Isiliye nahi darshit hua hoga. Apke darshit ke liye.
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Okay.
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I’m totally drowned into this😍
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😁😁Thanks ortensia.. Is ortensia your real name?
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It’s a pen name.but is the name I would have liked to give my second daughter who never made it.
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Loved it
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😁😁, thanks ortensia… Is ortensia your real name?
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Thanks novus.. For nomination.
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Thanks Tanvir for the lovely comment.
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Thanks.
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Thanks indieShe glad to hear that from you.
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Your last stanza is an excellent finale to a great poem.
“Into the sea of my thunders, I swim,
Trying to find some shore,
An island comprising only of me
With no regrets, I build my own dreams.”
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Thanks a lot Ivor.. I am glad to hear that…
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So romantic…
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Beautiful and heart warming! Thank you for sharing 🌸
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Thanks a lot, shreya.. 😀🌸
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You have a unique voice. Twas a pleasure read you!
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Thanks Diana, the feeling is certainly mutual. Loved reading your poems a lot.
Keep writing and smiling..😊😊😊
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👍👍
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An island comprising only of me👏👍👌
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Each and every line is so overwhelming ❤ Keep up the amazing content and I wish that you get millions of followers 🙂
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Thanks again a, sorry for late responses, I just saved your comments from my spam folder.
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