Fading shades of discretion and mind
Driven cattles, in that gloomy light…
Lacking penorma of savoir faire,
Gaining the shades of obtuseness.
Everybody, Assuming the ‘Noah(pbuh) of arc’ in oneself…
And steadily losing in the vague; losing the ‘self’…
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A grotesque situation apparently masked
The echeloned elite stucked stringently,
in the swooning, lurking in hubris chivalry.
Blinded with the spectacles’ dust,
Reverberated in the murky resplendance.
Rolling on the cold sweltering loathsome coal.
Enamoured my emulsified aurum,
Grasping it with their molars
Turning their soul to charred ash
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A ‘silent ignore’- is a tribute sent,
To the rape that begins and ENDS on the road’s END and begins soon as day ENDS.
A ‘violent strike’- is the shame sent
To the conjuncture of two religions and begins with love and ENDS on two lives END and begins as soon as hatred ENDS.
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The kurfuffle of betraying flame,
Blind the closed eyes in the lights,
Surpassing what was meant to be perceived.
Retiring to home with frolic retribution. Then,
Alas! retiring painfully to the Grim reaper.
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In the ombre sky those that stood,
Standing;marching to the right,
Like the sea foam that formed
Tossed and Fading and dying.
But still fought the gelid waves.
Merrily gleefully, immortalized.
Sadly I wish I can reveal the name of the other author. But it was disapproved about the revelation and I respect. So yeah hope my fantastic readers don’t mind.
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Aquib & anonymous.
Sure love it!
Congratulations both of you
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Oh sorry, your comment landed in my spam folder..
Thanks for appreciating it.. Have a great day and don’t sweat the small stuffs, sweat it for bigger. Keep smiling
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It happens 😁
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Thank you brother
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My pleasure.. 😁😁
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Everybody, Assuming the ‘Noah(pbuh) of arc’ in oneself…
And steadily losing in the vague; losing the ‘self’…
Woah.. mind blown. Whoever he/she is..my appreciation and applaud for both of you.
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Thanks Sameera baji , the lines you quoted are not mine though, but her lines are awesome.. ..
Have a great time.
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I hope she knows this.❤
Wonderful collaboration Bhaijaan.😊 Have a blessed week.
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Wow!! Very well penned. The thing I am sure about is that the other person who collaborated with you has surely been lucky to learn a good vocabulary from you…I think he/she would use it to match ur pace by the next time…👍👍👏👏
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I agree❤ she did it brilliantly. 🙂
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Yeah…😊😊
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Thanks Nandita much humbled by your sweet remark. Keep smiling.
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Oh sure…As I have colgate😂😂😋
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Colgate ki close up p
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Lol…Abi jo h…Usi se kaam chala lo😂😂
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Sahi hian. Close up me hian… Ki brush Karo aur Ispe jado hain.. Apne aap log pass aab lagte hian… “pass aao pass aaooonaaaa, woooooo oo ooooo” 😀
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Lol…Isliye mai close up nai karti…And koi aaye bhi to m like “bhaag jaao bhaag jaoooooonaaaaa, dhishum dhishum!!!”
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A very moving statement, about peace and harmony!
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Thanks a lot malkie. Glad to hear that.
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My pleasure !
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A powerful rendition on peace
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Thanks indie she.. Much appreciated
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Rayie!!
Keep it up both of you.
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شكرا عزيزي. بارك الله فيكم
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Are are are, itna gussa. I just wrote one word and that too in english but you just….
I could read it but I must tell you that I’m still working on vocabulary. Ic an read but not understand the meaning. haha. I guess the first word was thank. right?
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Yeah .. Translate karlo.. Maine bhi wahi kia..😀😀
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😂😂😂
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Nice!
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Thanks a lot sir..
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This was amazing Aquib, so many lines just jumped out and grabbed the readers!! My friend, your pen is becoming a wand because you are creating magic with words. You and your anonymous partner really did an amazing write up!🌹🌹🌹
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Thanks Jo, much humbled by your comment..
Been writing very less now, busy with uni chores…
Always my pleasure to receive your encouraging remarks..
Keep smiling and writing.
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Very welcome my friend, been living your work. Busy time, busy mind! My pleasure to read, keep up the good work!!
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😊😊, you too keep showing the cards.
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😊! 🃏, I surely will my friend.
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😀😀🤗🤗
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This is a masterpiece.
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Thanks a lot sir. Much humbled. 😀
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