Disillusioned (dyad/collaboration )


Fading shades of discretion and mind

Driven cattles, in that gloomy light… 

Lacking penorma of savoir faire,

Gaining the shades of obtuseness.

Everybody, Assuming the ‘Noah(pbuh)  of arc’ in oneself…

And steadily losing in the vague; losing the ‘self’… 


A grotesque situation apparently masked 

The echeloned elite stucked stringently, 

in the swooning, lurking in hubris chivalry. 

Blinded with the spectacles’ dust, 

Reverberated in the murky resplendance.

Rolling on the cold sweltering loathsome coal. 

Enamoured my emulsified aurum, 

Grasping it with their molars 

Turning their soul to charred ash


A ‘silent ignore’- is a tribute sent,

To the rape that begins and ENDS on the road’s END and begins soon as day ENDS.

A ‘violent strike’- is the shame sent

To the conjuncture of two religions and begins with love and ENDS on two lives END and begins as soon as hatred ENDS.




The kurfuffle of betraying flame, 

Blind the closed eyes in the lights, 

Surpassing what was meant to be perceived. 

Retiring to home with frolic retribution.  Then, 

Alas! retiring painfully to the Grim reaper. 



In the ombre sky those that stood, 

Standing;marching to the right, 

Like the sea foam that formed 

Tossed and Fading and dying. 

But still fought the gelid waves. 

Merrily gleefully, immortalized.


Sadly I wish I can reveal the name of the other author. But it was disapproved about the revelation and I respect. So yeah  hope my fantastic readers don’t mind.


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Aquib & anonymous.










Published by AQUIB

the unsung poet..

37 thoughts on “Disillusioned (dyad/collaboration )

  1. Everybody, Assuming the ‘Noah(pbuh) of arc’ in oneself…

    And steadily losing in the vague; losing the ‘self’…

    Woah.. mind blown. Whoever he/she is..my appreciation and applaud for both of you.

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  2. Wow!! Very well penned. The thing I am sure about is that the other person who collaborated with you has surely been lucky to learn a good vocabulary from you…I think he/she would use it to match ur pace by the next time…👍👍👏👏

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      1. Are are are, itna gussa. I just wrote one word and that too in english but you just….
        I could read it but I must tell you that I’m still working on vocabulary. Ic an read but not understand the meaning. haha. I guess the first word was thank. right?

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  3. This was amazing Aquib, so many lines just jumped out and grabbed the readers!! My friend, your pen is becoming a wand because you are creating magic with words. You and your anonymous partner really did an amazing write up!🌹🌹🌹

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