Wall.(Poem., #haiku)

Things are not as they seem dear,
It’s apparently magnificent but it’s all pseudo.
You cry for loses each day and shed tears
In the oblivious night you remained silently awake ,
For the reason untamely tepid.

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These flummoxing flap to glide across,
Realm after realm, stars after stars,
But again it’s pseudo my dear…
Didn’t you see the cage around?
These glitzy wall, chandeliers and
Candle lights…
Flash lights and neon signs blinding thy eyes?

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There shall be remorse and catanonic plights,
Vituperation and consigning ramparts.,
Will mellow down the fire and flame,
With all that you started will crumble back to its initial state.

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I can’t smile at your pseudo business affairs,
And see you floundering in the sea of pseudo opulence,
Among all mirrors that showed your mights,
But you missed your own reflexion yourself, my dear! .

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The truth you missed and ignored,
Was the one that will set you free,
I can only, but say,
My lines here die in fondue of immortality,
I neither have penies nor stardust,
I left these words and few sentences,
Hither and thither.

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If you get out of your pseudo palace,
These permuting surrounding will shout at you.
And make you deaf until you crumble in the sporic wall …
Until you mould and transform.
And shed the wall and transform
Into vivid shiny butterfly..

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#Haiku.

Shine like a star but

Don’t burn with angst jealousy.

Burn with fuel within .

©Copyright reserved !ns¡ght

Aquib.

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123 thoughts on “Wall.(Poem., #haiku)

  1. For a poem being so pseudo based, you have reality down packed, what sincerity behind this and your wording is astounding Aquib!! What wall? You have broken it down my friend with this ode, I read this twice and I’ll read it again. Living the dream, but you only dream when you sleep and when you sleep you’re not living, that’s the picture you painted my friend.

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    1. Yeah, you put this so aptly like a real Jack…
      You my friend always unpack the cards and unveil the real face.
      I am humbled by your encouraging and review, God bless you. Keep smiling.. Always looking forward to your posts.

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  2. Along with the rest of your poem, these words are magnificent,
    ” You cry for loses each day and shed tears
    In the oblivious night you remained silently awake ,
    For the reason untamely tepid”.

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      1. I didn’t think it so profoundly… But have a dream.. But there is lot to learn, rudra. And my writings that I share are dedicated to generous readers like you.. Wishing you great success and happiness Rudra. Keep smiling. 😀😀😊😊

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  3. Everyone has already said it! Beautifully profound and thought provoking, dearest bestie! 🤗🤗
    One of your best poems, in my humble opinion.😊

    I can’t see your latest poem. Haven’t you posted it yet or is there a glitch in my feeds?🤔

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