Time to venture out and swim in the sea,
Elements, elixirs that maketh thee.
Certain clocks that stopped ticking
Tis not the time, it’s constantly marching,
Tis tiriding at my slumber state,
Smashing against the tyranny that upholds,
Though my eyes were open
Never had I opened the third one,
Until now, I see the cruxes beguiling,
And the maze that exist,
Now unraveled its solutions.
Those words you spoke,
The words that gave momentary pleasures
Took a part of your soul..
To see you falling when I gave you the hand,
You befelled on your own
Now there left for you is only remorse.
The part that you denieth!
Wasn’t meant only for me,
It was the one, you refused and treaded and tried the pernicious contrary road,
Until you reached the core,
Now my friend, it’s now or never.
To transcend uphill,
Or descent to sticky downhill…
!ns¡ght
Aquib
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Really thankful for your lovely comment and continued support. Have a great day. Keep smiling.
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Beautiful 👌
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Thanks a lot Gargi. Glad you liked it.
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It’s Wonderful.. the last two lines are really captive..
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Thanks a lot, sunshine, glad you liked it.
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Beautifully executed, loved it!
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Thanks a lot, Really appreciate your continued encouragement. Have a great day.
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So beautiful. You are a master of words.
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Thanks a lot Lara. Glad to hear from you. Hope are doing well, keep smiling.
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Really beautyful 😊 well done 👌
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Thanks a lot maam. Glad you liked it. 😊😊
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Nice one. A crossroads. So well expressed.
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Thanks a lot, glad you liked it.
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Though my eyes were opened, I never truly opened the third one….so powerful because that’s a symbol that he was still blind. This was an awesome read for me my friend and wonderfully written. You must have had joy writing this. The last lines were such an eye opening message…..rise or fall, love the choice. Awesome!!
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Yes dear friend, you summarized it very well. Your thoughts really create resonance. Glad you liked it. Have a great day. ☺️ ☺️ keep smiling.
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You too my friend, you too! And thank you.🙂
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Nice poetry
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Thanks Author, glad to hear from you.
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Fantastic visuals! I really liked this, man!
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Hey, thanks for appreciating it. Means a lot.
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Very beautiful and expressive post, Aquib!
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Thanks a lot Hussain bhai. Glad you liked it. How are you these days?
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Most welcome, bhai! I am doing well, but i have been busy, i got a lot of works to do it. Thanks for concerns, and hope you do the same, family and you are both ok. 😊
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That reminded me of something really interesting, an important event that occured in my life…that was excellent mate 👍 you’re from which country by the way?
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Thanks a lot brother shaad, glad to hear that from you. Well I am from India. Well would love if you share your intriguing experience,if you are only willing. let me guess are you from u. K?
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Nice!
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Thanks a lot sir… ☺️ ☺️
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You’re welcome mate, i’m from Mauritius by the way…my dad was an Indian, he came from Gujurat…
about my experience, well i oversimplified it by calling it an event but it’s more accurately a long story, i made some pretty bad choices in the past especially by ignoring the advice of people who extended their hands to help and now i’ve found myself in the situation to either “transcend uphill” or “descent to sticky downhill”…just like you said, “it’s now or never”…that poem is very relatable mate…great job! 👍
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Hey, thanks a lot buddy , glad if it can be of any constructive aid to you or anyone. Well you know what I feel you are awesome and great. Everybody errs ’cause it’s humane, but to repent and turn to the straight path is the differentiation, so buddy…. No worries…..nice to meet you.. Have a great day, don’t loose that smile. 😀😀😉😉
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Thanks 👍
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‘To see you falling when I gave you the hand’ – my favourite line! ☺️
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Thanks Sophia, glad to hear that from you.
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Completely relatable!!You write so well.Keep up your good work!!
Have a wonderful day!!
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Thank you… ☺️ ☺️
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Hard to find something witty to say when all the wit is already in what I read… 👍👍🤗🤗
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Hmmm, well ,awesome .. Glad to hear from you …B. Does that full stop after B signify anything?
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“Full stop”, nothing. “B”, something
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Oh, “B” “something” great. 😊😊
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Thank you! 🤗
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“To transcend uphill,
Or descent to sticky downhill…”
Beautiful summarisation!
The choice is ours.
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Yeah, very nicely put by you..Have a great time indieshe, wish you good luck.
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You have such a wonderful style of writing …damn so good😑
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Thanks a lot velvet for appreciating it.
Much humbled by your remark.
Keep smiling.
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You are welcome 😊
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Something to ponder, written with great rumination! Profound!
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Sorry graci your comment landed in my spam. Thanks for appreciating it, much humbled by this.😊😊
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You are welcome Aquib 😊
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Great!
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