Tere sang beetaaye do pal,
Wo khushiyo ke sidhane,
Khusqismat na tha,
Auro ki tarah, jise gale se lagaya,
Qabil na samjha khud ko kabhi
Tanha safar tha,
Isko do kadam tere sath chalne ka,
Mano Tinkay ka sahara mil gya.
Aarzoo buland na thi,
Teri muskurahat ne Iska karz ada kardiya,
Yeh safar tha musafir ka jiska koi thikana na tha,
Gunjaaish hain humrahi meri humdostana ada karna.
Gumaan na tha naa hi fakhr tha,
Sare aalum ka fikr Na tha,
Par bad nazar tujhe na lag jaye,
Iska bada dar tha.
Gam ki khandak me hoo aye ‘fazil’,
Tu bhool bhi jaye koi fark ni,
Tera aasmaan chamke yahi dua ha,
Main toh toot hi chuka Tha.
Koi falsafe ka zikr na tha,
Tere sath guftagoo ka manzar tha,
Kuch pal tere sath khushnoodi ke,
Mujhe khushkismaton Me shamil kara diya.
Kash tere sang zindagi beeta sakoon,
Waqt ki dehleez ka taqaza tha ya qismat ka,
To gair thi main bhi gair tha,
Par pata nahi kyon dil ne tujhe apna maan liya.
Kabhi aansoo ke chasme na dekhe,
Par to door ho gyi nazro se,
Mayal dil ro pada,
Aur beqaso me shumaar ho gya.
Zindagi aisay jiya aye fazil,
Gham ke darwaze ko fursat na mili,
Kuch hasi thi baqi mujh mein,
Par ab kisi pe aitbaar na raha.
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Aquib.
Lovely… ❤
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Thanks. ☺️
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Beautiful ❤
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Thank you maam
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Waiting for more of them!
You rock as always!
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I forgot to thank you, you corrected it.
Well I feel you rock more than me. 😀😀.
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You’re always welcome beta 🙂
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🤗🤗🤗
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Oh my! That was a really very deep poetry, Aquib.
Well do you know Punjabi?😂😂
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No Shreya. Sorry, wish there were software that can be installed in humans.
Like in movie matrix. Lol
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Hahaa. That’s absolutely fine.😂
I just asked because there were some sentences in Punjabi and some words also.😂😂
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Oh.. I don’t even know. 😀
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Well just wait. I by mistake while posting the comment unfollowed u.😂
Hope you don’t mind. Wait ill follow back after all I wouldn’t want to miss your poetries. Would I?
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Koi gal ni. Oye. Sanu phire se follow kardo..
Trying punjabi. 😀
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I know you’re lying that you don’t know Punjabi.
I mean then how have to tried so perfectly.😂😂 you lier.😂
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nahi Jindal Saab main jhoot nahi kheta. (😁😁).
Movies se sekhi do teen word. Sanu, tenu, man put jat da mandani haar.. Lol yo yo se bhi seekha hain.
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You*
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bahut badhiya.👌👌
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Bahut dhanaywad sir, prashansha karne ke liye.
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Swagat apka.
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loved it
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Shukriya Mistimaan bhai. Hope you are having an amazing day.
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Beautiful poetry and such a meaningful outlook!!
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Thanks tanvir ,always glad to hear from you.
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Okay so that’s desi kalakar.😂
Well I don’t watch Punjabi cinema.😂😂
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Behad umda!
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Thanks.
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So, Mr Aquib(Akeeb ji), that was wonderfully penned and I think I could read those emotions too which stood back in you heart as you always bar them from being out, . And,,,yeah your feelings are flowing as if they are really breathing through your words,, great!👍👍
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Thanks.. Nandita. Highly appreciate your remarks. It’s the eye of reader that interprets its, so all credits to you too for esteeming it graciously.
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Beautiful!
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Thanks iscriblr much humbled. Have a great day.
Btw Your posts are amazing.
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Thank you so much! Love and light! 🙂
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बहुत ख़ूब
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Thanks sir for appreciating it. Much humbled
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My pleasure
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बहुत ही उम्दi !
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Dhanyawaad aapka, prashansha ke yogya samjha bahut abhaar aapka.
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Urdu k saath saath aapko Hindi ka bhi kaafi ilm hai lagta hai 🙂
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Hindi bhi theek thak hin, MashaAllah,
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This was beautiful. Loved it☺️
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Thanks miss Das,
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You’re welcome ☺️
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Ending is so good… I like this poem…
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Thanks a lot sis.
Ummm, does this poem need a work over?
Btw this was a spontaneous poem. Your feedbacks are greatly valued.
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I don’t think it needs a make over… It seems very real and very deep…It seems that the poem is talking to me… Yeah… it is somewhat lengthy but the starting lines were me drowning deep in to the poem… Lovely work…!
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Oh,thanks. I generally likes poem with a moderate lenght. Thanks . jazakallah khiar
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Yes..I know… you normally like moderate length poems… That’s good…because it’s your style
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Mashallah aapne bohot behtareen andaz main Zindagi ke haseen lamho ko lafzo main qaid Kiya hai
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Shukriya bhaijaan Serahniye ke liye. JazakAllah Khair.
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I am speechless as I try to relate to them. Simply amazing!
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Thanks Seema a lot. Much appreciated.
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oh my lordd
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😆😆, sweet of you to say that
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NYC
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beautifull👌👌👌
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Ohho ‘fazil’ jee, ye pen name use karte the aap. Humne meaning search Kiya iska, usme tha “excellent”, “generous”, “praiseworthy”, “righteous”, “superior”, “virtuous”. Hamare fazil professor ji khyal rakhiyega apna.
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