Things said and done
We are not together, not one
My path is different from common ones
Dulcet scribbles in a cascade’s shun,
Had to digest, else, can cause constipation.
Words facades in your intuition
’cause your living in a glitzy mansion,
That fetters your trepidation
And cause you to slip in your hullicination.
Remember a contumacious rejection
Will cause the harm of the salvation.
Don’t flounder in a flood of confusion.
The signs for the path is casting till horizon,
Don’t ignore and be in transgressing unison.
Things said and done
Are we still together or one?
Aquib Khan
©Copyright reserved !ns¡ght2017
This is a repost of my earlier blogs , lately I have been occupied with something or the other and not accumulating myself to produce a poem , I do have written chunks scattered over my phone or note book. Hope you all will like this . There is a part one to it too, please do read that too Part one. Click here., there is no chronological order as such. Please stay tuned . Stay awesome.
Insight2017aquib@gmail.com
Image credits: The flash.
Monorhymes this time. Not bad at all! Good diction and I see your attempt your attempt to stand out in a crowd. Well done, Aquib!
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Thanks, Nandita, I am totally overwhelmed. ☺️☺️☺️
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You’re most welcome. And don’t be overwhelmed. I’m just a simple poetess. 🙂
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You are simply awesome. ☺️☺️☺️.
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Oh am I? You are kind. Thanks. 🙂
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Yeah, really. ☺️☺️☺️
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Awesome 🙂
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Thanks Simi, long time,!!!. ☺️☺️☺️
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My pleasure.. 🙂
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☺️
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U r awesome and I m awesome. Everyone is awesome. World us full of awesomeness…ha ha ha on a lighter note.
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I hope your not agitated. Lol. ☺️☺️☺️.
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I liked the imagery and concept!
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Shukriya valiant. May God bless you.
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Same to you!
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☺️☺️☺️
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Reblogged this on Ace Friends & Bloggers News.
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Thank you very much Ace, ☺️☺️☺️
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Totally welcome great post such insights are rare … ⭐️
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Thank you. Totally overwhelmed. ☺️☺️
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Thank you so much brother,
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Thanks for visit and great post to share with friends Ian 😊👍
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Thanks brother, I am so glad and highly appreciate it.
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Nice!!! Kisses ❤ ❤ ❤
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Thanks nilda, so nice of you. 💙💙💙
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Comment my photo!!! Kisses ❤ ❤ ❤
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Of course.
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“My path is different”
Loved it.
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Thanks Moushmi, Keep smiling.
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Powerful, Inspiring!
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Thanks a lot Adnama, what are you upto now? ☺️
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Watching a program.
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Oh, cool. Enjoy!!
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It is getting cold at nights.
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Oh, I love Winters here, in Delhi, because the summers are so scorching. Dunno about your place, though ☺️👍
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Compared to Delhi, Cold. Just about to look at my throw.
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Did you mean it’s too cold to relish the cold, rather can cause frost bite?
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Shudders added second single duvet under current one.
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That’s cold,
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Yes, I am not good with cold weather.
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Yep that’s because that’s too cold, I will probably feel the same..
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This is one gorgeous piece 💞
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Thank you Priya, hope you had an amazing day today,. Keep writing and smiling… ☺️☺️👍
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💞
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💙☺️👍
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That flash reference though! ❤
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Thanks buddy keep going.
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Nice concept khan bhaisahab 😊😊
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Thanks a lot Gaurav bhai.
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👌👌
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☺️thanks ekta, glad you liked it.
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Your words are changing course…I see a shift in your pattern…they are getting bolder, more confident, independent thoughts on its own realm…beautiful❤
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That’s such a cool and lovely comment. That’s so kind of you. Thanks a lot for liking it, 💙☺️👍
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A thought provoking verse, and especially the words, “Don’t flounder in a flood of confusion, The signs for the path is casting til horizon”
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(Thank God, and thank you for liking it sir. ☺️👍.
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Lovelyyyyyy😍
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Thanks a lot poja, I am glad you liked it
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Welcome Mr. Khan ^_^
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😀👍, It was my pleasure.
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Oooh good question to end on!
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Yep, thanks a lot, ☺️
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nice n lovly
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Thanks a lot Danish bhai.
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Woooaah😍😍
‘Are we still together or one…’ amazing
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Yes, Punmeet, it’s upon the readers,,, ☺️👍😉
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Wonderful wordings and imagination
“Things said and done;are we toghether or one…..”Marvellous.
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Thanks a lot mam, hope you are good and having a great day. ☺️👍
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You are most welcome dear!!
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AWESOMENESS ✌✌
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Thank you 😄
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Wonderful. Dynamic. Great post👍
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Thanks a lot K. C. Have an awesome day.
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Happy Sunday 🙂
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Happy Sunday to you too, have an amazing day.
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I like it , it seems a rap song!
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Oh, thanks Novus , really appreciate it.
Will write one rap.
If you want you can suggest me a word or phrase for me to write a poem about.
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Ok!!!
Delusion 😬
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Okkkk,nice one
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😁😁😁
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Will try inshallah,,
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😆
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Monorhymes.🍑 Sachi you write rhymes really well 🌸🌸
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Baba, pehle comments padha .. hmmmm .. poemwa padha ki direct ,cut copy paste???.😂😂
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Poem re. Abhi itna knowledge hai meko. Monorhymes matlb kya😁😂 you never rhyme much..yeh first tha vo bhi monorhyme sidha sixer.
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Waaaw, elixir didi , btw while writing this I didn’t know about this. 😂
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Fir toh yeh miracle hai😁😂😂
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😄😄😄😄😄😔😔😔😔
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🥝🍎🍎🍎🍎🥑🍍🍈🍐🍈🍐🍈🍐🍊🍐🍋🍐🍑🍎🍇 sehri ke liye😁
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A great one! Your poem just went in a flow and it’s lovely🌸🌸
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Thanks pramegha appreciate it. Have a great day.
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You are welcome!
You too have a wonderful day 🌸
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It’s wonderful reading you after a long time, Aquib. And what a lovely piece this is! Hope you’ve been well. 🤗
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Delighted t to hear from chaya. Always my pleasure to receive your encouraging remarks.
Sab bhadiya, asha hain apki chor (end) me sab ekdam fit fat hain. Kahiye pijiye ekdam.
(😋😋😋, don’t mind this, it keeps me rooted) wish you good luck and happiness.
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Ji, Aquib! Sab badhiya hai. Shukriya poochhne ke liye. Kafi dinon baad aapki kavita padh kara achchha laga. Likhtey rahiyega jab bhi fursat ho. 🤗
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Koshish jari rehti hain bas.
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👍
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I tread with you through your words ,life’s phases passed in your words.
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Yeah, very well said. Thanjs for appreciating it, Yasmin.
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My pleasure, Aquib😊
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Just loved it
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Thanks bhai
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Wonderfully penned!💖
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Thanks Richa. Appreciate it a lot.
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