The long lost wind when it comes submerges the gloom,
Had been left in the corner of disdain
Left with pure and pristine vigour
Only when it comes it shows its face.
.
No fear it has nor it dies in emphatic rides,
Nor it sees sad faces nor wears it as gay.
It rises when the half-doom begins,
When the nights see no days.
.
‘Cometh here!’ “, show me the other side,
Where mourns and tears stay
All that turmoil and Hardship never cease to end.
Definitely, all reside as you sway me away.
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The calmness, jocund glee,
Demures the rage within,.
Tis not pugnacious, no friends (tis not),
Tis The repercusson of a famish..
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Alas, it seeks no words,
It’s silent and still
No love can calm it,
It’s fate! A universe’s whim.
.
The long lost wind i know your redemption,
You would come to me for my penitence,
To burn to shine is the only way,
Long lost wind come and take me away.
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Aquib ..!ns¡ght 2018.
A little too deep.
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Pleased to hear that. Things sometimes seems pretty easy and straightforward but turns out to be intricate. 😊😊
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Oh that’s beautiful Aquib! I like it.
I see hope and despair in the same poem
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Thanks you Novus, much humbled to hear from you. Keep smiling.
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I will
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😀😀
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Beautiful, brother.
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Thanks MVS, glad to hear that.
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Beautiful💕
Loved it!!!
It rises when the half-doom begins,
When the nights see no days.
👌👌👌
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Thanks a lot Yasmin, always my pleasure to hear from you. God bless you
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😊
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Wonderfully profound!
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Thanks Malkie for appreciating this. Have a great day. 😊😊
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Well written 💕💕👌
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Thanks raynotbradbury, I am glad to hear that from you. ☺️☺️
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Loved it
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Thanks Mistimaan bhai. Much appreciated.
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Beautifully written, so profound and deep. You are truly a master of words. I always look forward to your poems. They have a lot to say. Lara
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I always am delighted to hear your profound remarks. Thanks a lot for appreciating it, I am glad.
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Love it Aquib, it’s profound!
Stay blessed
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Thanks soiba, how is your grumpy billi? Bhool hi gya tha main billi ko. Billi ki ni batana baba kahi kaat na le.
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Lol Ramadan mein achi hogae ha kaafi bhau deti ha 😛
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A great piece, Aquib! I had to read it twice to absorb it completely, it had so much depth. 😀
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Oh, that’s really a wonderful remark, , that’s overwhelming for me.
Thanks a lot @poemsinacoffer that’s kind of you to say that. For you yourself a wonderfully profound poet.
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You’re very kind and generous to think so highly of my writing abilities, Aquib. Thank you veey much, and it was a delight reading this piece. 🤗
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It is all my pleasure. To receive your remarks. You are certainly more kind and generous, always look forward to read your marvelous poems . Wish you good luck and success.
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Thanks and wishing you the same, Aquib! 🌸🤗🌸
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Beautifully expressed….wise choice of words that are so impactful !!!
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Thanks Fariha, I am glad you liked it.
May Peace be upon you.
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Outstanding ❣
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Thanks ekta. I am glad to hear from you after a long gap. Wish you success and happiness. 😀😀
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How beautiful Aquib. Loved the flow, the hope 😊🌸
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Thanks a lot sir. Always my pleasure to receive your remarks. Wish you good luck.
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My pleasure Aquib. You have a good one
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Amazing!!!
Zabardast h Aquib 🙂
Long lost wind come & take me away…..WOW!!!
Beayoutifully presented 🙂
Keep up the good work 🙂
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Thanks Tooba, I really am humbled by your encouraging remark. Have a great day
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U r welcome… 🙂
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Beautiful! Loved it!❤
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Thanks Richa, much appreciated. Have a great day
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Oh professor ji this was.. I don’t know what to say. I really loved it. These lines especially
“No fear it has nor it dies in emphatic rides,
Nor it sees sad faces nor wears it as gay.
It rises when the half-doom begins,
When the nights see no days.”
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