
My endearment lied in my hands,
Unblemished it was unable to reach your shore.
We though seem to converge,
But it was the lie of the eye.
We were parellel like the shore.
..
My tears, laughter dried with your Visage diverging,
In the teritory where my shadow vanishes,
Thou shalt then have the shade unknown.
And my memories as honey dripping on your soul.
..
I was shattered in sea of turmoil,
With wounds of time when I collided.
“Dear, why hath you laughed at my wounds?”
Even though your heart cried,
Your shine christened my wounds.
..
I can’t see sun brilliant at us,
Hazing you, besides the warmth.
The cold doth chilled me but
your clandestine embrace
(You were my God sent sun)
Though healed my wounded heart.
‘Silly me, with each crystals of Epiphany,
Swayed me away with the ebbing riverine.’
…
How canst you then lie in the ashen figments?
It’s a Phoenix and will resurrect,
resuscitate you when thy sun rage.
Silly you to say me endearing words,
The uncanny bulwark faltered,
Buried our wonderlust love..
..
The Harp that I played the lore ,
Echoed in the valley of wraiths
The strings percussed until
It broke with jaded crescendo.
Will ye be happy now?, Nah!
My farewell remain due until now.
Will ye then witness the sun set?
It’s now lost in the horizon.
Where you shalt then happily cry,
And with glee my prayers
Will Jocund your walks.

©Copyright reserved !ns¡ght 2018.
Aquib.
Nice!
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Thanks a lot sir. Much humbled. 😊😊. Best wishes. 👍👍
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Nice poem
Liked it
Well expressed !!!!
💜💜💜💜💜💜
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Thanks Akshaya, reminded of the song, hum hain seedhe saadhe akshay, don’t mind please.
Have a great day, best wishes.
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😊😊😊 my pleasure , have a great night , best wishes
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thanks for the wishes, it was my utmost pleasure.
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Beautiful!♥️
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Thanks Aqsa means a lot. Thanks for the love and support MashaAllah . God bless you.
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Aquib…this is fab!!
Really nice
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Thanks RR 👍👍👍, appreciate it a lot. Have a great time ahead.
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I like it.
Seems medieval
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Thanks Novus, true that.
👍👍Best wishes.
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Thanks !
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“The Setting of the Sun” shall be called a guide and a beautiful treat to Philosophy amateurs. Astounding!
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Such a profound remark, from my one of favorites here is really a catharsis to my pen, which is resting in the sea of confusion that now I can tell, “calm down oh pen, your ink is still left “..
Thanks for encouraging me.
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Even your comments reflect the artistry your words are endowed with. Truly gifted and truly enhanced over time artistry. Wow!
Have faith in yourself. Believe in your artistry. 🤗
You too are my favourite, needless to say. 😊
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It’s all because in the shadow of profound writers I too bathed in the Shade.😂
Ho gya aaj ke liye itna angrezi kafi hain, “dhat tereki mujhe gahr ni jana”
“Selfie maine laaay li hain”. 😂😂,
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Noor hi alag hai lafzon kaa yahan😊🤗
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Thanks Again Aaeedah. 👍🤗🤗
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Loved it
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Thanks Mistimaan bhai.
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This was beautiful
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Thanks a lot Drew, my pleasure to hear that from you. Best wishes.
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Thanks.
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😊😊
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Wonderfully profound, wonderful use of words!
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Thanks a lot Malkie for your kind words. Best wishes.
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Wow!!!
So emotional, profound and beautifully worded.
Spoke to me!
Stay blessed
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You too stay blessed. Best wishes.
Thanks for appreciating it fam. 😉😉
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Damn. This was one heck of a read, so pensively put into words.
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Nameera please delete your latest comment of mine I wanted it to be mailed, but did it hastely over the comment, my bad..
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“the lie of the eye”….that is such a phrase. It tells so much. Nice one Aquib.
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Glad to you found it worthy, I am really thankful for your remarks Ma’am. Best wishes.
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I loved it.You write so well.
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Thanks Tanazzah for your kind words, you write more beautiful tbh.
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That`s so sweet of you Thank you :))
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Great!!
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Thanks fam.
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Thanks fam.
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Nice one!😊😊
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Thanks fam. Best wishes, stay blessed . 🤗🤗🤗.
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😊😊
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👍👍👍, msged u. 😂
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🤗🤗
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You just nailed it. This was so very wonderful one.
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Oh thanks Shreya, 😊😊 lol I think we commented on each other post simultaneously. 😂😂.
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No, not simultaneously but I did first. Hahhehe
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Oh, I see. I am second 😊, “better luck next time” for me.
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Wonderfully written, you really can feel the emotion pouring out of it!
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Thanks a lot kaylaan, remarks from a profound writer like you means a lot.
Have a great one.
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☺️
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Very well imaginative poetry and beautiful pic too. Loved it.
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Thanks kamal, really appreciate it a lot. Have a great day.
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Welcome dear Aquib
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A very good poem. Thanks for sharing!
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Thanks a lot, appreciate it a lot.
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You are welcome!
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😊😊
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You write so well! Glad I’m that i follow your blog.
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Thanks Gauri, pleasure is mine actually. Have a great day.
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Nicely written.
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Thanks a lot Sagar bhai.best wishes.
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Welcome bro.
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Alhumdulillah i was finally free to read all your recent posts ! You post so frequently and regularly, i wish u could do that 😉
This was lovely Aquib. Melancholy and beauty mixed in one..
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Thanks A. K, your nick name is bit Confusing, is it syed or Kishwar, kishmish 😋😋😋(Hey sorry, don’t mind please) .
One or two are repost are there , I try to write more often you know, trust me its always Allah who is kind to me, you know. , btw I have sent one mail like ages ago. 😔😔..
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I don’t know what to say. When I open one of your poems I think that I would analyse it and leave such comment. But then while reading your words I sink in the mire of emotions. Professor oh professor take care.
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Kya hua.
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