#poem #insight.
Circles of dirt and pollution around,
Silhouetted by filthiness of comrades around,
Each is sitting in there, devouring pan cakes,
A cake stuffed with bladder worms.
Their seems myriad of gobbled head,
Humping like Eichornia in the marshes,
And spreading the coats of miniature,
Unseen sticky leeches sucking their soul.
And swarps of beetles and musca
Sticking around, smell so pungent,
That even sulphide of hydrogens
Shaming under the garb of the mind.
Appearing, as it’s the reflection, the lights seems aghast,.
And the beast lies, littering and casting and blowing the aurora of black tars, is still residing.
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Cast away, this,
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Aquib Khan.
I can see a more mature write-up here and I really like it.
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thanks valiant. I, really, am glad you liked it.
Have a blessed day ahead.
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My pleasure.
Wish you the same.
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☺️☺️☺️
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bahut khub Aquib Bhai bahut umda post
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Shukriya Danish bhai aapka, JazakAllah.
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I enjoyed the darkness in your poetry. Yet, there’s also a message here about the greediness in society. Complicated and well written.
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Thanks Rummager, very much for reading and for the time.
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boht umdah post hay
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Shukriya aapka tanveer g. ☺️☺️
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jazakAllah, salamut rahein aquib ji
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Ameen, JazakAllah khair
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Different aspects of life and society deftly embedded in this poem. Great post.👍
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Thanks for reading kim,
Keep writing.
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✌👍
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Good massage by a poem for unkwon guys.weldone.
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Thanks for reading, May God bless you.
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Welcome dear.bless u too.
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Good Writing, creepy subject, Apologies.
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Thanks a lot, Adnama. Hope you are having an amazing day.
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I’ve had a relaxing and imaginative day.
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How about you?
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I had a tiresome day.
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Oh, in a good or not so good way?
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Kind of both…
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I’ve got a bit of a headache. Mild eyestrain. Going to say good night. And rest. X
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Oh, take rest.
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A great gooey poem, loved it. There’s a wordpress site, that you might find interesting, called Slasher Monster Magazine, I submit writings to it quite often.
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Oh, thanks Sir. Will see.
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Powerful and also repellant in its description of disgustingness. Good work!
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Thanks a lot. Hope you have an awesome day.
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So nice and well written 🙂
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Thanks a lot bro. ☺️👍
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Really, beast poem..
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Thanks a lot bro. Have a great day.
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Yeah, yours too..
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Thanks a lot Chronicles for this wonderful comment,. May God save us all from the eyes of the evils and Satan.
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Awesome Poem. Such beautiful words used. Keep writing👌
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Thanks a lot. Have a nice day
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I like it! Awesome piece!
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Lovely post
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I have written your poem check it on nikitaarora1122
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Nikita, why is it not showing in my feeds? How do I open in my app Nikita?
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Hello aquib ; sorry i know how stupid i am to reply so much late but I got the text last day . I dunno there might be an error
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Great poem! 😊
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Thanks a lot, Sophie. Have a great day ahead.
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Thank you, you too!
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☺️☺️👍👍
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Beast. The title is so apt. Is this an old poem A? If so, glad you resposted so I got a chance to read it 🤗 even the pancakes of bladder worms weren’t repulsive enough to drive me away from finishing the poem 😂 Hats off !
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Yeah it’s an old poem dear ,well I recently wrote a poem titled “setting of the sun” ,your feedbacks was totally missed.
Wish you all the best in life ,keep smiling.
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Ohh. I must’ve missed it in between the reposts. ( I love how much you support other bloggers btw) will check it out soon in shaa Allah 😊
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i totally agree with you, Ayesha. He is supportive and has a Shakespeare soul. Isn’t it? Hehe
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Oh my God, I don’t think so. 😂😂
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Yeah its an old poem, that I reposted. 👍👍👍
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Your style of writing is as beautiful as always. You sure know how to minx words
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It’s your kindness and eyes. Foremost all God grace. Thanks for appreciating. Much humbled
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You’re welcome
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Awesome
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Thanks, indishe, pleasure to hear from you.
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Welcome
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Hello! I posted something new on my blog.. I would love it if you could view and comment 🙂
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Yeah sure will check it. Sorry for the delay.
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A beautiful post.
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Thanks a lot shantanu, 👍👍. Much humbled.
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😊🌸
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That was what I will call….writing raw.
Wonderful.
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Pancakes with bladder worms… Perfect line to read while having breakfast. You are an umm…mazing poet. (By the way the Lizard is missing the spider)
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Lizards keeps spiders away. 😜😜😜
Hey Muntazir how are you??.
JazakAllah khair for your praise and Alhamdulillah it’s just your kindness.
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This lizard is a little bewkoof’ and loves ‘spider’. You tell me, how are you? Waiyyak.
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Good Alhamdulillah. 😁😁.
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Write something na. Kabse appne Kuch Likha Nahi hai. PLEASE.
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