#insight #poem
Elixirs that made me who i was;
of happiness, sadness and tides of lows and highs
of those tiny smiling moments,
The bereaved moments; interred!
The drenching heart blacked out
From ill-taints and murky fog.
Those moments that brought gleeful tears.
And of those that drenches heart.
That brumal nights that quivered me
From tip to toe.
Seeing and standing at the precipice of life,
Tenebrously relflecting the rays
Rainbows; indigo, violet, orange and red,
Ah! Those ‘VIBGYOR’!
Alas! Formed at the terrain of the cheeks; swaying faraway!
Looking back hither – forth a gaping smile appeared
Seeing the dented heart,
Still beating the viscous blood
Violent and charred that turned blue.
Pitch dark were nights and burning days
Those winters full of frozen desires
Hazed in translucent misty fog
That barred cage that incarcerated me
Occulted me from the opulence
Standing now at faraway stupor
Greying pummeled by time supreme.
Things that looked bright and beautiful
Love that never reciprocated
That brother soujoured in cold,
Friends that gleefully turned malevolent,
Though smiling at them, those tiny caricatures!
As the palpitating heart trembled,
Petty microscopic belching caricature
Seemed insignificant and meagre,
Seeing garden beneath that rivers run
Those that they see not
Washed away their ill propensities done .
I stayed all night,
‘now a sunny adieu to all’
‘clearing my life’s account that you had’
Then opened my eyes in the tranquil aisle.
**Reposted.
All rights reserved 2017
!ns¡ght, Aquib.
Images credit : respective owners. Google images.
Beautiful Aquibview. ⚘❤
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Thanks a lot, E. A. glad you liked. ☺️
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I did. Your words are as beautiful as you are.
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Thanks Amanda a lot for the appreciation and support. Have a great day.
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I will going to pick up my New Spectacles from the opticians and meet my Mum for a cup of tea.
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Oh, really seems a roller coaster day that you are going to have, keep smiling. ☺️
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It has been a Lovely day. X👍⚘🌹
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beautifullllllllllllllllllllllll
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Thanks a lot, Danish bhai, means a lot. Sab khariat?
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Wow, the way you blended so many words with an array of colors was absolutely tranquilizing, no pun intended! This was a pure journey to read my friend!! 🌹
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Thanks a lot, Joy, glad you liked it, receiving it from a person who himself pour an ocean of words to dive in, means a lot friend. 💐
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No problem and thank you my friend. Like I said, it was a pleasure to read such a symphony of vocabulary. Pure art. 🌹
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😊😊. 💐.
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An exquisite interplay of words with colours,nature and emotions
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Thanks a lot indishe, glad to hear from you, means a lot.
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Great thoughts well presented as a post. What do you expect? Great post of course! Thanks for sharing Khan.
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Thanks a lot, brother. Glad you liked it. Always my pleasure.
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Your posts are always well-researched and written.
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Appreciation coming from you, always means a lot. Thanks for being so generous and kind. Your certainly very motivational and inspiring so as your post. May God bless you with happiness and prosperity.
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So lovely it is 🙂
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Thanks a lot, glad you liked it.
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Beautifully worded to mean so much!
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Thanks a lot sir. ☺️☺️
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My pleasure! and its Malkie please
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Beautiful and breathtaking.
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Thanks a lot Sophia, have a great day. ☺️☺️
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AH-MAZING ✌✌
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Thanks a lot maam.
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Heavy stuff, my friend.
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Thanks a lot sir☺️, glad you liked it.
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Beautiful poem.. As always😄
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Thanks a lot Caren, keep smiling.
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That was fantastic and very well written!
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Thanks a lot buddy, glad you liked it.
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In fact behind the trouble, there is convenience….
Very nice poems and touching the heart….😢
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Thanks marly a lot . It was my old poem I just reposted it 😋😋
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I like it very much. I look forward to the next posting…😊
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Much humbled by your remark…will post insha’Allah…
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That is indeed the case, Very good. Okay i’m waiting..👍👍
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A subtle interweave of colours, thoughts and emotions.
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Sent a mail brother
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Responded back 🤗🤗
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Thanks a lot indie she … Glad you liked it
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Beautiful poem
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Very well thought out… it’s a beautiful poem!
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Thanks bling bling16…
Hope are having an amazing day…
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Your writing is exemplary
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Thanks Noor …glad to hear from you.how are you these days ?
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Damn!😍
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Thanks Aqsa .how are you these days ?
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Alhumdulilah I’m good.
How about you?
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I am good , grinding with the daily chores ruthless world .😂😂.
Allah has been kind to me for making my way out to peace .
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Aiyyo!😂
May Allah bless you always. In Sha Allah.
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Of**
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Beautifully penned!❤
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Thanks Richa , means a lot .
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Masterpiece 🌻
Nothing less expected from you ! Masha Allah
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Thanks Ayesha , really kind of you to say that .
JazakAllah Khair. wish you all success.
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Phenomenal! Philosophical! Just like a calm, placid river! 🍀
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Thanks A, your remarks are also soothing for me. Stay blessed.
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😊
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This poem was of that type, the one who read on uninterrupted. And yes, you use beautiful words.
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Thanks for your kindness ,it’s certainly by God grace
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You are welcome 😊
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This was just so beautiful, Aquib! 🙂
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you write so well ❤
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Thanks TN, glad you liked it. 👍👍😊😊
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Great post however I was wondering if you could write
a litte more on this subject? I’d be very thankful if you could elaborate a little
bit more. Kudos!
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This poem held me still for a moment. What expression!What emotions! You are really so so talented a poet.
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Thanks a lot Jaya. I am not so well today.
Thanks for overwhelming me by your kindness. Wish you good luck.
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Take care of your health, Aquib.
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Yeah it’s seasonal.
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