My star asundered,
That provided me the guiding light,
My hands trembled at this sight,
With Each swaps of puckered dreams.
I lost my own smile.
.
The anchor that harboured my sorrows,
The garment lay tattered that hid my scars,
In my banished land ;the thatched hut scavenged,
Tell me the reason, oh noble hearts!
That bring forth my smile.
.
The land, my kith and kin, my brothers,
The trees that stood on the lands,
Why lie battered lonesome?
Gone astrayed with the order grim.
How then I smile in the fire burning?
.
Tell me not of scathed love,
It’s long gone ;scavenged,
As time progressed during the day.
The hearts, oh human,
Be not leaching leeches.
I am the soul that wears nature,
Not made of plastic and cellophane.
But veritable elixir that absorbed taints
In exchange of the smiles.
.
Will not wait for new days,
Doth my eyes will not see,
As my heart progress the end of mine,
The pleasure I once conspired
Beguiled and was a supernova.
What left then was the nebula,
Lied in the bereft voids.
lost the charms and spells
With that smiles blew away.
.
Why then flak me to smile?
Sure it is lost with time,
My heart, hearken me dear!
Hath plunged into dried tears.
My stoic heart would remain earthed,
Reticent, un-deciphired.
Yearn no reason to cheer,
This world a cage of callous hospitality.
Where I found no reason to smile.
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Aquib.
Sad 😔
Any reason for this sad poem? Something wrong?
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😁😁,
I recently attended a funeral ceremony and few things in the surrounding that get caught up, that’s what come out.. You know. 😁.
btw you can send me chocolates anytime. 😜LOL.
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Ohhhh I’m sorry to hear that.
Here they are 🍪🍪🍫🍫🍪🍪🍬🍬
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Cheer up bro, nothing is bad forever
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Helllo, my dear sis, nothing wrong Alhamdulillah, it’s just for the sake of the poem.
It actually born due to the perception of here and there. Aha don’t worry.
Keep smiling dear.. 😁😁.
We Gucci.
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Alright, good to know
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Truly sad but I like your attitude more than the poem. Also if I may ask what Alhamdulillah means 🙂 I love Urdu words
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😁Thanks Seema.
Well Alhamdulillah is an Arabic word that means Praise be to Allah (Arabic word for God)
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Thanks For the knowledge Aquib 🙂 these words are like music
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Poignant
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Aha thanks Mvs. Best wishes.
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Be not leaching leeches…
Nice as always, AK
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Thanks RR, 🤗. Best wishes.
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OMG this is so relate able. I felt every word of it as something I always held within but was never able to word it out.Thank you so much for writing this
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, this is tanazzah random and just figments of my thoughts.
Please always keep smiling. May God bless with utmost happiness.
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I m so in love with them they are beautiful just keep writing this beautifully always
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Very nice
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Thanks a lot bro.
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Archaic sadness, well written
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Thanks a lot esp. Glad you liked
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Love how you bring the emotion Aquib and writing with the heart no matter what, always loved that about your poetry. The flow, words and emotion. Just know it can’t rain forever my friend and light can be found in all dimness, I know you know that. Wonderful write my friend.🌹🌹
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Words of wisdom here, as expected from you dear friend. Best wishes to you. Always my pleasure to hear your graceful words. 💐💐💐
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Thank you much my friend, it’s an honor to read your work.🌹🌹🌹. Keep it up!!
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Reasons to smile shall never be lost, but that will be utopia.
A lovely poem, though it was sad.
And you, you keep on smiling!
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This poem has a bit different tone.
There is a difference between a child smile and of the adult.
As we grow grey i think the world changes.
Sure there is happiness solace in nature atleast, in beautiful company.
Thanks praMegha for appreciating it. Much love and peace.
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There sure is difference in smiles of children and adults.
You are welcome.
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Hey! Eid Mubarak.!
Btw, I mailed.
☺
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Aha eid mubarak, maailed you now. Lot of works here, been so irritatingly occupied.
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Pramegha mailed you.
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From comments I could get that you are ok and I hope that there’s nothing wrong with you. Is it?
I loved your poem as always.
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Sure it is, Alhamdulillah.
Well, ab kuch panga hoga, I will let you know. You know I have got an haryana connection, 😁😁😋😋
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😂😂😂
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Heartfelt!
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Thanks a lot
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Poignant, relate able. Perfectly done.,
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Thanks a lot.
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A beautiful poem. Loved the way you ended it
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❤
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🤗
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Sad bt beautiful poem
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Thanks a lot sara, much humbled by your kind remark.
Best wishes.
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It is so profound. Really poignant. Never lose your smile… Keep smiling
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Aha, Allah ka karam aur app jaisi Khoobsoorat shakssiyat ki duoo me hoon aur sath hain .
Toh Kia gham
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Waah waah. Khoobsoorat shakssiyat_are you sure? 😜
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Man Ki aankh, 😎😎😎
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Man ki aankh with Kala chasma 😁😁
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Arey samjhne ka na bhidu, Ispe aankhe ich band hain. 😁😁
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Damn!!🤐👏 Loved it…
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Thanks maansi, appreciate it alot.
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