Been witnessing dark cloud hovering over me from quite a long time.
I was disillusioned that what I saw were overpowering darkness , product of dark.
Hearsay lingered over that light existed but they were uncanny artificial light in the dork of night.
That kept blinding the eyes.
the remorse, the plight the pitying words, the sorrows
And their synonyms all lying as
Cheese cakes that melt in the mouth.
What for we lay awake in the dark
And asleep in the light?
Why then blame the stars?
And lie floundering in the
Sea of confusions.
Dear, the cage that bonds, the noose we stepped on.
The straight path we ignored.
And lay in pseudo light of ignorance.
Why then blame the shadow of darkness?
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Aquib
Sounds like a voice from my soul !
Fabulous one..
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Thanks OS, for appreciating it.
Gald it resonated with you too.
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🙂
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Have you deleted your site? It’s not opening.
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No dear 😥 I don’t know what the problem is !
This is my site
https://optimisticsoulin.com/
I’m a new blogger 😄 will be glad if you guide n walk with me in my future posts 💐🌷
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No problem for any help you can contact me.
Thanks for sharing your web address.
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😅😆🌷🌸🙌🙌
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😁😁
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I love it.
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Aha, Gald it made you too. Much humbled.
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I loved it ❤
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thanks T. N, pleased to hear from you. Hope you are having an amazing day.
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Np I m thank you
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👍😊😊
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Beautiful! Really, how we blame the external factors for our failures but never take the time ignite our inner self.
A lovely piece, friend.
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True that, we don’t work on but we should.
Thanks for your wisdom here jaya. Always my pleasure to hear from you.
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🙃
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Well penned. Lovely lines ✌🏾🌸
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Thanks 👍😁
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You’re welcome
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Beautiful but sad.
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Thanks Novus, Glad to hear from you.
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Loved it bhai
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Thanks bro.
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Is this Aquib’s Prose debut?
This was awesome and thought provoking! Can’t wait to read more write-ups like this👍📖
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Thanks, well I don’t give much thought on that. Was waiting for your remark.
I feel its the amalgamation of both poetry and prose.
😁😁
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Yes, yes. I, too, do that a lot. Let’s call it a prose-y-poetry structure!
🤗
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Actually there is and very ancient form of this type of amalgamation. Which had been used as far as I know it was “the thing of beauty there” and date back to people in arabian peninsula where there were lack of resources besides sand which was of no use except it helped in making pop corns, 😁, but theere the language was Revered and poets were highly honoured, so much so that they so they conversed in poetry.
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Oh my God!
Pop corns hahaha 😜
Very insightful! I agree to each and every point out there. The honour part has reduced significantly. 😒
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Yep true. 👍👍😉. But poetry is poetry nothing can beat it.
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Exactly💯
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Reblogged this on Cereus Florus and commented:
Honestly, I love such write-ups where the prose is beautifully entangled with poetry. A prose-y poetry?
Awesome job, Aquib!
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🙏🙏Thanks a lot.
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You replied to the post. Lol. 🤗
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Yeah, this app has bug. 😁
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Sad but beautiful.
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Thanks a lot Punam for stopping by , appreciate it a lot.
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You are welcome Aquib.
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Very powerful and so sad. Very well written. A masterpiece🌷
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Thanks a lot Lara 🤗🤗,it is always been my utmost pleasure to hear from you.wish you the best .
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The straight path we ignored. I have been thinking about this. There is a straight path … we have been given it from Allah (SWT) , it is our main concern. This is a lovely and gentle reminder. Very well penned, Aquib. Keeping you in my duas, hope you are well and if not, may Allah (SWT) grant you ease and comfort.
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Thanks for the dua I really need it, my exams are on the way and my focus is bewildered nowadays, 😁😁.
Yeah, I keep hearing “I did ‘that’ and ‘ this’, ‘regrets'”, it’s so simple yet we choose to ignore it, “the guidelines of the Creator of this universe” . May Allah swt guide us and grant you utmost happiness and peace and success everywhere.
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Very deep !!!
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Thanks for appreciating it. Have a great day.
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Do check out my blog ! I write short fiction:) Happy Reading!
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Yeah sure. Would love to.
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Hey Aquib!
I have nominated you for the Quotes Tag by Universe Fireflie. Please visit my latest post for the details.
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Did I reply to my post again?
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Yes lololol😂😂😂
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😕😕
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Yeah, thanks fam. Visiting right away, Chai paani tayar hian?
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Hahahaha haan lol😂😂
Happy waala blog hai ye..🤓
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When you happy and you know and you really want to show it, clap your hand. *Thap Thap *..
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😂😂😂😂😂😂*Thap Thap* Awesomeeeeeee
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Hey! I posted something new on my blog! I Would love it if you could like and leave a comment!
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Loved the words that effortlessly flowed from your pen Aquib!
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Thanks a lot maam, much humbled by your encouraging words of appreciation. Best wishes.
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Soulful post
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Thanks a lot Tanvir glad to hear that from you. Hope your are fine.
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All good Aquib. Thank you. How are you?
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I am good too Tanvir by the grace of God.
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Into the exam mode nowadays. 😁
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Very nice…. Very deep and very true
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Thanks a lot brother. Best wishes to you. 👍👍👍
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‘What for we lay awake in the dark
And asleep in the light?’ – These words are beyond beautiful.
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Thanks sana, much humbled by your kind remark. Aslamalaikum
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It’s my pleasure. Walaikum as salaam 🙂
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We need to accept ourself the way we are. Self love and self acceptance is crucial. Stop blaming external factors for one’s happiness ..
Why blame the stars?
Why blame darkness?
Amazing. Loved it
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Couldnt agree more. You are absolutely correct.
I was going through the same thought process while writing this,
why being so narcissist and play blame games?
Having patience and perseverance is what makes a difference.
Thanks for adding value to this post. Have a blessed day ahead. Peace.
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Amazing post I don’t know but it made me feel like it was about a lost connection that was somehow never meant to happen. It’s kind of mysterious but it’s written. Keep going ♡…
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Thanks a lot Shaikh, I would say you have interpreted it quite aptly, and depends on readers discretion as well.
Thanks again for your warm. Best wishes.
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