
Furtive motive travailed in a labyrinth,
Onto a assortment of delicate tender petals,
What mortals desired in inundating taints
In their futile attempts they lost in nature.
…
Dark close alleys
Suppressing passionate whirlpool.
Binds the soul forever
What tries to unshackle it’s core
And falls in the endless black depth.
Untold petals, crushed in the cries and chaos.
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Enchanted alleys in the Saturnic terrain,
‘Why trudge thee like drunkard soul?’ Certain is the fall that befell
the dark alleys thus scalding, charring.
‘the vernal blossom you lost,
Left me agape with thy alacrity,
In the precarious ballyhoo
Tormenting, blanched feeds charred you’.
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Captured, curtailed, cascading in the core.
Charred to the color of pulverizing petals.
Mephitic black petals leads to dwindling state,
Overwhelming darkness asphyxiates,
Black ash, black alleys, blackness prevails
Baffling spiral I sway in this lousy labarinth.
..
In this realm of toxic darkness,
This wasn’t your onyx
nor your nature
In pastoral of the heart
That lied serene and pristine.
Coaxed into Devouring
opaqueness and adamantine.
..
The serenity is lost and heart is ravaged.
Where were you when they plucked my ruby petals?
The topaz soul was shattered long ago,
When the leeches sucked my pristine redness .
Now venom seeps through these toxic veins,
Love is barred from entering in these dark lanes.
..
My ears hear your dirge.
The jabbing sinister coax,
That led you in the dark deluge.
Your face that shines,
New day still awaits
Dewdrops on your freckled cheeks,
Is a sign for you days to begin.
Now rise and shine from your ashes.
Like a new born Phoenix.
It was my absolute pleasure to work with Jaya Singh for this wonderful poem, it was an experience itself. This wonderful piece of art belong to her which really caught my eyes. Please do follow her to be just spell bounded with the art work and poems.
best wishes and good luck.
Aquib.
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Bonnefille and !ns¡ght.
By
Jaya Singh and Aquib.
Before typing this I say, ‘Bismillah’.
Aquib ji, it was really a great pleasure to work with you. Each time I read your poems I am left spellbound. You are really talented and above all you are a very good and positive person.
Jazakallah Khair
🙃
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Oh my God, thanks you surprised me.
Well, yeah I like to b positive. Above all its all your kindness.
Stay well, the feeling is certainly mutual.
(मैं तो vaporize कर gya, , bulk मे तारीफ जो हो गयी😁😁😁😁).
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Vapourize ho hi gae hai toh Kuch molecules ko Yaha bhej dijiye, hame bhi thoda dimaag mil Jayega.
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😂, मेरे मस्तिष्क के व्यासप को ग्रहण करे.
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😜😜
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Wonderful collaboration my friend, also read this on Jaya’s page, you two worked great together, love when you spread your talent around to other talent my friend. A great poem indeed.🌹
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Thanks Roy for your appreciation means a lot. Peace and love.
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My pleasure my friend, your talent is amazing. Much peace and love to you.
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Thanks for encouraging my dear friend, it’s all your courtesy. Its just learning from posts like yours. Much power to you.
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Your comments and support keeps me and others that support you going my friend. You are a wonderful person, a million thanks.
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You are too my friend, a motivating, genuine generous person i came across through this. My prayers goes for you as well. Best wishes.
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Thank you my friend, and yes I too am lucky to have come up with a wonderful person like you in this world. Keep smiling.
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A wonderful collab by two beautiful artistic and talented writers.
Salute to both Jaya and Aquib for such a tremendous effort.
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Thanks anamika, glad to hear from you. Peace and love.
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It’s my pleasure Aquib…Peace to you too….
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I have commented on your latest post, I think it’s spammed. Regards.
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Ya thanks ji for letting me knw. Thank you for your valuable comment on my post. Really appreciate it Aquib.
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Oh no worries, sometime comments land in the spam folder you know. 👍👍😁
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Yup….it can be such a head ache sometimes. But once u retrieve… i don’t think it will happen again..
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This gave me so many feels. 🖤
Cheers to both of you Aquib and Jaya!
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Thanks for appreciating it sana. Much humbled.
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Last few lines were just fab..
Great work both of you…
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Thanks RR, glad to hear that from you. Peace
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Amazing collaboration …great work you two👏👏
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Thanks Sakshi, 👍. My pleasure to hear that from you. Much peace and love. 👍👍
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My pleasure Aquib 😊🌼
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Such a wonderful collaboration.
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Thanks a lot Rudra for appreciating. Peace on you. 👍👍
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Hey, Aquib.
So nice to read you words. And yeah mesmerizing it is
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Hey thanks Mvs, it’s my pleasure to hear from a you. Hope you are having an amazing day.
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wonderful collab, love the flow!
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Thanks Bud for appreciating.
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“Like a Phoenix ” Such a beautiful play of words.
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Thanks Pramegha. Appreciate it.
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Pulsating!
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thanks for stopping by.😊
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Good work guys !
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Yo thanks. . How are you? Long time. 😁
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I’m ok,
Big post on 1st nov😉
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I am waiting. Best of luck and prayers to you.
I wanted to apologize i did not mail you, the thing i was mailing. I lost track, I am sorry for that.
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No worries bro 😁
Some other time….
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Yo thanks for this.
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