There come a deformed soul,
With anguish in blood,
Filled with Regrets and remorse.
Singing catatonic verses.
.
What does they say?
From their cursed mouth,
A made up face, bemoaning facts.
Molars broken, bleeding coax.
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Swaying away from truth,
In the trance and intoxicants
Guised in the name of pseudo Illumination,
Ignorant with the puerile light.
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What similitude shall infer?
Castigating that provided sustenance,
Frenetic like monkeys, Lewd like pigs.
Heart Besotted and soul lost.
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Breathing from the dark worlds,
For momentary pleasure and calmness ,
What lies in this world? a cage.
Lying in the darkness of frivolity.
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Standing now on the precipice,
Where the limited breaths, cease?
What else will they deny?
When they will be grabbed by the forelocks.
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On the boulevard where there is no return.
Their hands red with their own blood.
Guilty of deforming their own selves,.
Singing catatonic verse.
Would like to express my gratitude to
Jaya Singh for suggesting me the title.
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Aquib.
Hauntingly, a delight to read. *_*
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, I am delighted (super) as well to hear from you.
Best wishes Sana. Peace.
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Haha! Stay blessed, Aquib. 🙂
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I somewhere read, about HAHA gene.😁😁. Do look up on Google (Pronounced Goog lay).
You too stay blessed and fresh, 😜.
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Seriously? Google is not google?
Genetics is something I need to refurbish before exams head my way. I’ll search it now. 😁
But wait? Is it really googlay?? I feel like my whole life has been a lie.
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Wait Sana before you jump to conclusion and break your shoulder because on it lies great responsibility., you see?
Upon great research for about 2-3 mins, it’s is not Goog lay, not even Goo gal but goo gool.
Dr Sana from Nasa (she is your twin, sana 2.0).
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Okaay. Thank goodness. It would’ve been impossible to change the pronounciation otherwise. Hahah! I see what you did there. 😂
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Wait a minute Oops , I missed your latest post, I see there . Let me jump there too.
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Hahah. Good good. Exercise is good for health.
Thank you 🙂
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Dreaming now, myself. Wishing you good luck. Work hard for you dreams InshaAllah you will reach it.
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Oh lovely!! And true
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Thanks a lot Novus😁.
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😊
Novus please
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😝
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Strong words that evoke ( at least in me ) a dark image. But the end encourages “to thine own self be true” and that is an enlightening ending.
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The phrase is so apt here, thanks for adding meaning to my meek words. 😊😊. Peace.
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You are so sweet.
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Would you like to have a bite of me? (lol just kidding)
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I am pure vegetarian. 😁
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Oh k. I see it. 👍
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Eid ki sevai khilana… 🤤
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Haan jee, Zarur Zaya zee.
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🙃
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Yo thanks again, it was a befitting title. Kudos to you.
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You are just being modest. 🙃
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Nopsi 👍
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Powerful poem. Devil is waking up.
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Thanks a lot sir. Sure devils are always on their mark. 😊
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True that !! & Lovely piece Aquib
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Hey, thanks a lot bro for appreciating it. Peace.
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Pleasure always for beautiful stuff mate
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You are kind bro. Pleasure is always mine. Best wishes.
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Good one Aquib, it’s powerful!
Stay happy and blessed
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Thanks Soiba a lot for appreciating it. You too stay happy and blessed.
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Seriously wonderful and the quote too. After a loooooooooooong time that I read the blogs. Hahaa
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Aha, thanks Shreya, it’s always my pleasure to hear from you. Hope you are having amazing days.
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Yeah. Happy Diwali.😋
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Happy diwali Shreya. 👍👍😁
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Wonderfully profound with great imagery!
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Thanks a lot Malkie.
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Again…chha gaye tum..AK.
This is fab.
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Shukriya, kaha ho guru. Sab theek?
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Ha …sab theek I guess😁
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Aww ! Lovely one with deep meaning
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“Breathing from the dark worlds,
For momentary pleasure and calmness ,
What lies in this world? a cage.
Lying in the darkness of frivolity.”
And I would like to give a 💙for Jaya Singh for suggesting this appropriate title
Keep sharing 💙
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Yo thanks A. T, for appreciating and stopping by 😁😁.
Peace and love.
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Filled with intense images, I loved how this is sculpted.
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I am always indebted to your kind remarks P. I really wish for your success everywhere esp in the hereafter.
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I always wish the same for you as well.
Thank you Aquib.
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Wow, wonderfully written and so true!❤
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Thanks Richa a lot. Peace.
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This was lovely, real, and profound.
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Thanks a lot Drew, peace and love.
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Peace and love
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YES, Aquib, this is wonderful. “For momentary pleasure and calmness , What lies in this world? a cage. Lying in the darkness of frivolity.” This world is temporary, hypocrisy for what? “The Dunya is a day and we are fasting in it.” May Allah (SWT) guard us from hypocrisy, truly the most dreadful sin, I was surprised to find that it is the most punished sin, so ya Allah, I hope we do not go near it. Wishing you all the best and peace. 🙂
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Ameen, we.
Truly it’s lovely to hear your profound remarks. You get to the gist of my works so easily. You certainly add beautiful meaning to my poems as well.
I am so full of gratitude. I wish you all the best and pray that you may find abundant happiness InshaAllah.
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