“love wins”
But not in my case.
Love failed me
“She is fake and hypocrite”
It was hard for me to believe when they said
Our love was hideous.
I can never be coaxed to believe that
She was veritable .
She was an epitome of insanity,
They said,
I never used to resonate with them when
I was in love with her
There now remains no hope
It is impossible that
Things will change.
She turned her back to me
It is totally untrue that
She will return
she parted her ways
It was impossible for me to believe that.
That slits my heart
When they said,
‘She is no more in my life’ .
(Read from bottom to top).
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Aquib.
That’s painful. So painful that I just want to die.
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Hey, please its fictional and do read from bottom to top, neeche se upar.
The world relies on you, don’t ever think that.
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I get it it’s fictional but that doesn’t makes it less painful does it. Words are mightier than the sword.
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Try reading from bottom onwards. Please.
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I made a fool if myself yet again. I didn’t get the bottom to top bit. Haven’t done that before.
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Umm, don’t haste, think and think and think.
But I like it, you are very innocent and sweet MashaAllah. Stay blessed.
Peace and love
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😅 😬 😌 God bless you too.
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And I know I over did it with the dying thing 😅
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Oh, I see it.
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Wow! How did you even come up with something so amazing as this? This is so cool, Aquib! I loved the surprise turn. 💛
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Thanks Sana, it’s always my pleasure to hear from you.
I will let you know InshaAllah 😉.
Peace and love.
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Hahah. Stay blessed. ☺️
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It was a sad read Aquib, both from bottom to top and top to bottom.
I wish you peace and happiness.
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Oh God why? Is it not optimistic from bottom to top?
I wish you the same chote peace and love.
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Brilliant!👏
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Thank you so much. 👍
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A splendid piece of writing!
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Thanks for appreciating it. Have a great day
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Thank you, you too!
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Wow! Beautifully written ❤
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Thanks Riya a lot. Peace and love.
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Ahhhh you are so damn talented ….this was something unique ….top to bottom made me flinch ….. bottom to top brought a smile . Bravo👏👏👏
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Thanks Sakhshi a lot for you kind remark. Much humbled. Stay well. 😊😊
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My pleasure 😊
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So damn creative. I can see the hard work behind this one.
👏👏
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I did not see you seeing my work, where were you? 😜.
Thanks a lot for seeing it like that. 👍😊😉
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Oh! You missed it, didn’t you.
I was right there when you busy typing this one.
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, oh yes I felt someone standing at my back, your astral projection , I was unnecessarily getting horrified, I wasn’t actually looking back, na. 😁😁
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Someone is still standing behind you😈
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I am now reclining on the wall. 😁😁
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*hands emerge from the wall behind you*
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. hath Wath se meroko dar nahi lagta Mohtarma
Pyaar Se lagta Saab. 😁😁😂
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Haha😂
Anyway, the ghost I sent you was a feeble one.
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I will train the ghost to be a successful ghost. I got you, you have sent it to the right person.you know.
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I don’t at all suspect you to be good in the art of scaring someone. You will make the ghost a jolly person instead.
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You are like Sherlock Holmes, good in suspecting 🕵️♀️🕵️♀️🕵️♀️i see it. 😁😁👍👍
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😂😂
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😁😁
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Beyond amazing.🖤 Well written, Aquib.
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Thanks a lot Barkaat, 😊. Peace.
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It’s poignant from top to bottom yet, from bottom to top each verse is filled with positivity and hope. Beautifully penned 👏🏻👏🏻👏🏻👏🏻 🙏🙏
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Thanks RM, my pleasure to receive your kind words. Have a great day.
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I like turning this upside down and right side up again.
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That’s show how positive a person, God bless you. Thanks for appreciating it. 😊
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This is amazing. Really a brilliant piece. Hats off to you Aquib ji. Both versions were just wow but I love the bottom to top more.
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Thanks a lot Jaya, Hats off? Cool Haan. Hats look cool.
Appreciate a lot Chote, peace and love to you.
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Peace 🕊️ and love to you too 🙃
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😁😁
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Thoda talent please yaha parcel kardijiye😁
This is fab..AK.
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😁😁, Acha OK, address mail kardo.
Aha, thanks a lot RR, keep smiling. Stay blessed.
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You too keep smiling like😁😁😁😁😁😁this
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😁😁😁😁😁😁I will InshaAllah, you too my prayers with you .
Maine hasne ka wada kia tha kabhi isiliye ab sada muskurata ho main. Bollywood dialogue chipka di 😎😎😎
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Zarur…chamakte daant paaye aur 😁😁😁😁smile kare.
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Mere toothpaste me namak aur koyla hain. Aur tumahre?
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Chamak ujaagar karne wale tatva🤣
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Chamak, namak and chammak.
I see the rhymes you took. I got the electrical message in your brain before, mere talent ka hissa logi yahi hoga, ootpatang cheech.
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You got electrical message….i hope you’re fine now…after the shock
🤣🤣Pj
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😶😶😶, Waah kya pj hain. Waah kya pj hain. Agli baar Riman Sarkaar.
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🙏
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Wow Aquib, I like it bottom to top
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Thanks a lot Ananya, hope you are doing great. 😊👍
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M good
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This is too Deep❣ and beautifully written Bhai❤❤
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Shukriya bhai, my pleasure to hear from you. Stay blessed peace and love.
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Most vlcm and u don’t need to be thankful coz u deserve😍😍
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That’s shows your kindness brother MashaAllah. 😊👍👍💖
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❤❤❤
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No problem 👍
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Sent a mail
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Great work
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Thanks RD, appreciate it a lot.
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well written,beautiful.
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Thanks a lot Maanya. Best wishes
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Thank you💙
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Poignant. Contrary to everybody I think the top to bottom is truer 🙂
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Oh, nevertheless, I am humbled to received your kind words of appreciation. Have a great time.
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Mashallah bro! Lafzon ki nazaakat toh dekho. Both versions were equally good!
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Thanks Bro, a lot for appreciating it. Wish you good luck.
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Simply Beautiful!
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Thanks Jamila a lot. May Peace be with you. 👍
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Wow Amazing work! I loved it.
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Brilliant…Commendable👏👏
I truly loved the concept ❤️ Keep going Aquib🔥 Lots of love💕👍
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Thanks a lot Sahil,your latest post is commendable . keep writing bruh , looking forward to it.
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