1.
The slumbrous night,
Dark, vivid with stark blackness
A lonesome soul fighting –
Fretting like anything.
He is me, a part of me.
Whose voice they loved,
And cherished him solely.
Now banished in the land,
And his cries unheard
On the boulevard of
Loathsome morsels & tatters.
Now Wish me luck and loads of hug.
But my chest is not safe, like yester days.
That chest whom you vouchsafe.
In these bivouac these arrows’ head,
Will pierce my chest and heart-
Bloody heart, and when you hug
Take away my blood stained shirt ,
and cry not the pearlescent tears,
Save, i will see you later (God willing) .
on the faraway land,
Beneath which rivers run.
2.
What more dirge shall I sing ?
Your ears shall not take,
Oh dead heart! ensnared in sullying.
Deadened viciously, by the daggers
Clenched by your own hand.
Your eulogy is fake, turn away
Your sinning hand from my face.
I smell of dead living meat,
Manaquin, a piggery- soul and star
in the hall of shame.
For death even hates you,
Your soul rotten and dead.
You denied the light and
Breathed darkness and smoke.
And cried volatile tears,
Filled with hollow emotions,
And fake unreal metaphors.
And now die as you breathe
Die as your heart beats,
A living corpse with cursed soul.
Hello readers, (not again) please help me with the title.
May Allah bless you with happiness and guide you to success here and in hereafter ameen.
Aquib.
Spectrum for instance.
Hey bro, is there any reality in this poem? sounds sad
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No sister, don’t worry. 👍👍.
Alhamdulillah I am good.
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Great😊
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Maybe the appropriate title would be
Lament or Bewail
Hope you like them.
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Thanks RM. That’s approximately appropriate. 👍
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😣 I wanted to be the first.
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You are already firsted (Golden English 😂).
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😀😀 Praphesar ji.
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Title could be ‘a living corpse’.
I like it and hope the feelings contained in are for the sake of writing just. Eh?
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Living corpse. 😳.
Thanks a lot.
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Such intense writing Aquib👏👏👏💖
You are a man with very deep thoughts and I really need to read your poems couple of times to understand them🤦♀️😄
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I am near sighted but have deep vision MashaAllah 😂😂.
(blowing my own trumpet). 😜😜.
Nonetheless thanks a lot for your appreciation means a lot.
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🤣🤣🤣
I fall short of words to praise you so it’s ok if you praise yourself a little 😄
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Ye thi. Mashallah, kitni achhi hai.
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