Echos in the ripples of the consigning wave.
Kept calling your name with fortitude.
Marvelling at your shadowed sight.
.
.
You felled down,
bowed like hypocrites.
And then expected
a return to show that face.
You poured down
of what you were feeded,
You remained in the
boxes that were given.
.
.
Things aren’t fair or just
All are painted with same color,
Rights are wrongs and wrongs are rights.
When the one shouts for rights
there is no unison,
All bathing in the same blood..
When the distinction of zero and one
are faded with concoction, then,
following shall be Dire destructions.
.
.
The wrongs bellied in bogged assuagements,
There shall be then no return,
When then thy fall
in the pit of conflagration,
Ignorant and blinded by qualm lights.
Ye! Well then be a zombie?
Eventually crying out with contrite heart.
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Aquib.
This must be a cryptic one, Aquib. Lots of lines suggest so. 😜😉
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Aapki baaton me koi shararat toh nahi! 😜😂
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Nahi nahi.. Maine Matlab aapse guftago ho rahi thi.. Socha ki Batado..
Aur kuch ni..😂😂🤗🤗🤗
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Lol. I was teasing you. Baaki your poem is outstanding.
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Oh, lol.. 😂😂😂, you got me.
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Yay Cryptic!!!remark From the expert. .
enthralling for me.. 😅😅 keep smiling.
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I’m no expert re
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Poets and poetesses are like that,.
glad to have you here Nandita . Peace love and unity.
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Deep and thoughtful message Aquib. Beautifully written.
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Thanks a lot Holly.. Glad to hear that… Keep smiling.
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I can’t promise that but we try.
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Yeah, holly don’t worry.. There is always a bright sunny tomorrow.
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Hmmm i’m thinking about that new picture….. CREEPY😲
It seems you’re spying your visitors.
If you’re not satisfied by your pics, why not putting a sketch of yourself?
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😂😂😂😂
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Do You want to sketch me?.. 🤔🤔
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Sure! Why not?
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You must reply.. “Pakka Haan ” pakka na it’s an question tag sort of.. So you reply “pakka Haan ” or “pakka na “.. 😂😂🤗🤗🤗
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There is one more life after death!
Sadly, some people will realise it only after their souls depart.
I like the reply of Shaikh Ahmed Deedat, when he was asked once by an atheist “What if you die and will realise that there is no hereafter?”
He replied –
“Not worse than you will discover that hereafter is the truth.”
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Long time, no see.. Where raho you.. Haha… Doctor Saab, see ya..
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your poetry spills honey comb sweetness and Ilike it. congrats.
do you read my honey comb blogs/poems do it very interesting.
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Thank you. 😊
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welcome
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Nicr
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I mind, Nice!
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Thank you 🤗
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Where are u from?
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India.. You from Indonesia?
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Yes, how do you know?
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Terimakasih, apa kabar?
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So, you can speak Indonesian?😱
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No I know these only.. And the word sukma..you didn’t reply for apa kabar ?
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Im sorry im forget😂
Im fine, how about you?😄
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Baik Baik, Alhamdulillah…
😂😂…keep writing and smiling. 🤗🤗
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Are u muslim?
Of course😃
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Yeah.
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Alkhamdulillah. Im happy for know that.
Do you like to read my story?
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Yeah.. Ofcourse. Why not brother
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I write short stories and also serialized stories. About love, broken hearts and more. If you want to read, please visit my blog😊
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But I don’t know bro indonesian Bahasa. 😊
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It’s ok. I can speak english, with google translate help😄
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Very well penned Aquib ji…Halaki your poems are often very deep so it is. Good job!👍
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Thanks Nandita Gupta ji… Get well soon.. Chaliye Acha laga sun ke aapse… 🤗🤗🤗
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Thank you.😊😊
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Welcome.. 🤗🤗🤗
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👍👍
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Deep Aquib, very deep my friend. Wrong are rights and rights are wrong, so true and I loved that line. A true revelation is sometimes we gotta do what’s wrong to do what’s right. Your poem speaks so many beautiful messages and like I said, your wording is amazing. Keep the journey going my friend, the path is great!!🌹
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Thanks for appreciating this buddy… Always glad to hear form you… Yeah we must realize small small things coalesces to bigger one… So we must be little wary of those.. I feel so..
Keep writing and smiling.. Dear friend.
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No problem my friend, love your writing and you’re so right with this post, so true on so many levels. I will keep smiling, it’s what I do best! Stay strong buddy!😉
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Loved it.
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Thanks Just me… Have a great day. 😀
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https://prdudi.wordpress.com/
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Waah!
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Thanks a lot.. Rishi bahi. Have a great day.
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Rishu Sir! Naam ko lekar gadbade jaate hain log aksar. 😊
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What an idea sir ji ..😁😁….
Koi baat nahi.. Naam me nahi Jaana chahiye Bhavna pe jana chahiye., (sorry For the typo error ,😊😊 )..
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Lol. No problemo. Ha Ha Ha. 😊
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And have a great day! 😊
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Nicely written
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Thanks Mistimaan bhai.
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So ? The picture ?
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Confused on which one to give.. 😂😂
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😁
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No matter which picture. It’s for a drawing you know ?
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Yeah,…
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Ok, then drop this idea because I am not sure. 😀😀🤗🤗😛😛
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As you wish
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Amazing ☝✌👍
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Thanks nath bro.. Glad to hear that from you.
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You’re welcome bro
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The wrongs bellied in bogged assuages,
There shall be then no return,
When then thy fall
in the pit of conflagration,
Ignorant and blinded by qualm lights.
Ye! Well then be a zombie?
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Thanks Indishe, I appreciate your remarks very much.. Have a great time.
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Beautiful lines and a powerful message
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All bathing in the same blood…that’s some powerful imagery right there.
Mast likhte ho yaar 😄
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Nahi ayesha ji apki badai hain…
“The write direction”, I like this name.. Keep smiling.
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