A Mirrored etheree. GONE

In response to Nandita Yata’s latest post. Her write-ups ie her poems are an epitome of class. And she truly bleeds poetry.

Her blog is a sanctum for all beginner poets, like me,   foremost she is a humble and ever helping &  ever evolving. My best wishes  for  her.

Here is the link to her post.

Nandita Yata

Make sure to follow her.

You

never

will know how

it felt when you

turned your back on me

the sun that I once was

shone down on you brilliantly,

you loved having me on your cheeks

until you turned in search of night skies

leaving me bleeding with dusk in my veins

never knew the aftermath of my own tread

was breaking your heart into  pieces that

used to be glee, I dwell in ill

propensity, your eyes hint

at me the love and care

that dilated my

heart core, vows and

woes form a

bleeding

Rose.

 PS:the first part/etheree is written by Nandita and the mirrored one is my response.