Tanhai se rishta apna hain purana
Aaj Phir, aye dosto!, usne hain pukara,
Jane kis muqa me aagya, Aye Zindagi!!!
Tune mujhe hian kaha le aaye khara.
Jis raste chala bas chalta raha
Faqad ranjish ke kuch na Mila,
Aye mehboob! Parinda sa Mujhe samajh.
Jiska koi theekana nahi,
Aaj Maine hain jana….
Socha nahi tha waqt ka shikaar main bhi banoga,
Bus has ke nibhata rha dastaan-e-bebaha
Socha nahi tha khushi laut jaygi
Bas maanliya yahi falsafa hamara.
Kehna toh bahut kuch tha
pas Bata de koi Zindagi Ka Pata
Khat likh rakhe the bahut uske naam,
Bas Saansein tham jaye, issi ka intezaar hian
Shayad mulaqaat ho jaye
…
(it was in my draft unnoticed for 6 months.. 😂😂.. Publishing it for the first time… Hope it’s good 🙏🙏🙏🙏)
And translation to English is very difficult,
it’s a group of couplet or shair(s)…
©Aquib.
So lovely
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Thanks a lot. I am glad to hear that. Have a great day.
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Waaaaah! Maza aa gaya.
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Thanks a lot Rishu bhai, I am glad to hear that. Keep smiling.
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You too.
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Waah..! Behtareen 🙂
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Thanks. ☺️☺️. Keep smiling.
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Bohot khoob!
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Thanks orange, Glad to hear that.
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Wah! Accha hai!
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Achha hain.. Lock karde?? (link lock se)..
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Hey, I got the notification from this poem. I guess it was some WordPress problem 😑
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Oh.. I see… Koi baat ni.. Bhidu.. Keep writing and smiling.
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Yep 😁😁😁😁😁 you too bhidu
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It’s somehow comforting to read in Urdu! Nice work!
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Yeah, will try more to come up with more… I like your name, wow it’s so different.. An excellent ‘different’..
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Haha thanks! The 13 year old me came up with that 😛
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From India?
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Yeah!
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Singh is bling??
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Nah, surprisingly, I don’t have a family name
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Beautiful poem !! Thinking in English translation would be oops difficult but original is beautiful and beyond comparison
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Yeah.. Actually i was feeling lazy but the fact that still it’s difficult to translate.. So..btw..
Tanvir glad to have you here always.. Keep smiling dear.
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Thank you and wish you the same
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Behtareen!🤗
And, glad you published your draft😊😊
Keep writing, Bhidu😎
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Thanks bhidu.. 🤗,
Swagat hain aapka,…
(bhartiya rail aapka swagat karti, yaar aaj tak kisi me swagat ni ki)… Sahi Khel gya..
😂😂..
Well have a good day… Well do have kit Kat because you are having a break
.
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Lol haha. 😂😂
Tske care🤗I’ll return soon. 🤗🤗
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I like that you’re writing in Urdu. I just wish there was an English translation because I only know a couple words. 😦
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Thanks Rachel for your remarks. Lol I could had tried but I got busy in some chores..
Will try to InshaAllah… May God bless you.
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Jazakallah Khair
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Wayyikum… 😊😊🤗🤗
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How are you Rachel these days?
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I am okay, thanks. Subhanallah.
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Cool. Alhamdulillah…
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May you be well too!
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I’m certain it’s wonderful….it’s lovely just to look at. And Your new header ROCKS! Really cool! Cheers!!! 🙂
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Are Gazab bhai jaan
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Thanks bhidu.
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Fine letters! (He doesn’t get the words)
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It needs translation
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🙂
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waah …..kya khub likha hai……..shayari men urdu shabd lag jaaye phir kya kahna…….afshosh hamen urdu nahi aati…..magar ek ek shabd sikhne ka prayas hai.
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Thank you sir.. Jahan chah hain waha raah hain.. Aisa buzurgo ne kaha.. Wish you good luck and happiness m
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Sae ha sae ha ub tw aap Urdu mein b shuru hogaey hum jese logon ka kia banay ga ub 😛
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😜😜, urdu toh aapse seekhe hian, aur Kia.!! 😂😂
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Heehee going on the right track beta 😛
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Sahi Khel jati ho tum.. 😁😁.. Hmmm.
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Bahoot khoob
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Thanks a lot Gaurav bhai.
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The only word i understood is Falsafa which means philosophy…but i am sure it is a good poem. Keep writing dear bro..
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Thanks a lot Sister.. Glad to hear that. Yeah urdu has some words from Arabic language too. 😀😀
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Kya baat h . Mizaz badl gye . 👌
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Thanks shayara.
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Welcome 😊
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Waoo that was amazing. I love urdu poetries!
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Thanks, this is my attempt.. 😛😛… You guys have pretty strong urdu would love to read from your pen.
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Yeahh soon inshaAllah.
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That was good!
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Thanks urooj.. Have a great time.
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I have nominated you for Leibster’s award.
Good luck.
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Hindi, English, Urdu sab chaap lo…😛
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Yaar Isc girl.. Tumhari hindi MashaAllah hian.
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Aapki teeno languages Awesome hai Akeeb ji. Kuch sikha do yar😁
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Yaar nahi… Bas normal so hain. 🤗🤗
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Whether it’s a song??
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No it’s not a song marly, but a poem..
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Verry nice…😊☺
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Bohot khub❤️
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Thanks bruh, have a great time.
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Bahot khoob!
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Thanks yasmin for appreciating it. Glad to hear that.
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Amazing poem!!!
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Shukriya tooba je. E
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🙂
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Boht Khoob !
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Thanks.
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bahut khoob…👏😘
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