In the complexities of this transient world,
You see faces masquerading bubbles,
Which choke you, inside they’re empty.
Empty like a vacuum.
I learned it from that pages, yellowing.
(Their ink now evaporating.)
Shocked with the electric tales
of Entangled false brewery.
Mastering in creating cob webs.
They are black widows, which sting.
They were anopheles which sucked the blood.
They were bladder worms too, that inhabited
Deep, deep inside the muscles.
(don’t consume it)
Until they vituperate and castigate.
They were such brutal ferals.
.
Disguised as sheep, as diety.
Believe them not on their mockery,
For they are entangling black magicians.
Jinxing and putting curses.
Come out of this deluge,
Come out before the sun sets.
Break the cage, come out.
.
Plague shall fall on them eventually,
For strings delicate, conducting gratitude,
Pride, honor, mirth…
Dissolved in their aqua Regia.
There exist then reprisal, reprimand
from the universe’s law, channnelising
and running this world that has an obdurate gaze on everyone.
(I don’t own the image used here.)
This is for the prompt that I myself asked from Novus lectioin the comments. Apart from this she also host daily word prompt contest, if you are looking for it. Give it a go.
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Your words are written with depth and the knowledge you have regarding life always reflect. Your vocabulary is excellent. This was a great read.☺️
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, thank you Sameera. . Always my pleasure to receive your expert comments. You have a good day Morrow.
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You have a good overmorrow❤️ Expert comments.😀 Itni bhi mahan nahi mei ab. Yahi expert comments spam ho jate hai kabhi kabhi😂
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Haan sameera, koi baat ni you will be resolved jald hi.
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Let’s see😶🍒
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👍👍
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Pleasure always.😊
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👍🤗🤗🤗
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Deep thoughts here, Aquib. You have written a wonderful post.
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Thanks yassy, overwhelmed by your kind words of appreciation. peace be on you.
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Peace salaams
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👍🤗
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This is such a great writeup and the words used perfect!
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Thanks velvet alot. Glad to hear from you. Best wishes.
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You are welcome
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👍🤗🤗
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Oh this was Awesome!!! Indeed we may be easily fooled by some people. Very well described and written Aquib jee
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Thanks Novus. Really appreciate it. Best wishes.
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To you too😃
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🤗🤗
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It’s brilliant Aquib 🙏😊
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Thanks Rudra, glad to hear for you. Hope you are having time.
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💗😊
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Great **. 🤗👍
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Thanks yassy, overwhelmed by your kind remarks. May peace be on you.
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Nicely written.. and well portrayed as well
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Thanks Shanzetoor, appreciate it a lot.
Best wishes.
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You’re welcome AQUIB..
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🤗🤗👍👍.
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You have a really good vocabulary, I must say!
This is a pretty poem 👌
~🌸
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Thabks Pramegha. Always my pleasure to hear from you.
I am wondering about your name’s meaning, megha means rain, sandhiviched karne pad, pra??
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Haha…..sandhiviched karne se koi prapti nhi hogi 😂 kyunki…..
my name doesn’t have a literal meaning, but a lot of emotional meaning.
😊
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Oh my God. Hats off to your parents. Naam Ka asar hota, kuch Hadd tak. And you must be very emotional right?
Just read your latest post. Trust me don’t believe that there is block, or anything. Follow keep it simple stragedy. Btw it was really well penned.
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Yes, I am very very emotional!
Sometimes I get terrible mood swings.
Gotta keep this advice. I will keep it simple😊
But now I am curious, what is the meaning of your name?
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My name is Aquib which is an Arabic word. It literally means last and final ultimate, but my name actually is inspired or named 😁 because it’s one of the name of the Prophet Muhammad (peace be on him), which He pbuh was attributed as Aquib.
Yeah. I hope I conveyed.
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And luckily I am the only son of my parents rest are my two elder sisters. May be my parents thought this.
But I figured it out myself. Lol
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That’s wonderful actually. Very thoughtful.👌👌
Do you think your name affects you?
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I have heard it from hearsay . But I really dunno for sure.
All that matter is personality, conduct, good action etc, all these good stuffs.
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You seem like a good person, I get those vibes☺
And then there are your wonderful writing skills too!
~🌸
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That reminded me of a tag line I heard.
“if you are bad then I am your dad”.
😀😀😀.
Thanks for the compliment though , the feeling is certainly mutual.
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😂😂😂
I thank you, too!
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Hey, do you need some pet ghosts? I have connections you know. 😂😂
Just kidding.(I just wanted to say this so badly now).
Have a good one.
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Seriously!😂😂 You are so…..
I definitely need a pet ghost, how can I get one?
I can train it to scare you, then.
Have a good night, you too😁
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(Sorry for saying that in the first place never mind)..
Tab toh pakka bhejna.. … 😛😛.
Jk.
Night night.
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(I was kidding too, so no sorry needed!)
😁
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👍👍👌👌😀
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Such power in these words.
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Thanks Adnama appreciate it.
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Heartfelt!❤
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Thanks Richa 😊👍
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Thanks Richa. 😊👍
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Your one post was about ghost and this one about living ones.Who would you prefer to be with you😂
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Living ones without a doubt.
Because ghosts no matter what are staunchest enemies of Human, dangerous they are in every way.
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Ok😄
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Bahot kam umr mein bahot kuch jaan gaye ho Aquib.
You are an awesome writer and also a very wise and wonderful soul.
Allah bless you always❤
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👍👍😀😀. Thanks yasmin, appreciate this a lot.
I have wonderfull people here like you I truly cherish it.
I feel the same for you a wonderful, strong happy go lucky soul. MashaAllah. Allah bless you too. 👍😊
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Have a good day AK😊🌼
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👍😁 You too.
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😨😱😭
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Omg.
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Lovely post
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Thanks Mistimaan
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👌✌ well expressed
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Thanks ojs
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Welcome
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i must say, you have a damn powerful vocabulary. I get atleast one new word whenever I read your posts.
Comments pade toh pata chala ki tumahare ghost se contacts hain.
Ghost ghost karo ab. Haha( I don’t have emojis)
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Arey main toh Mazaak Kar raha Shreya madam.
But thanks for the appreciation.
Hope you are having wonderful days.
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Shreya madam?
Obviously I know that you were kidding Haha.
You wouldn’t be befriending ghosts. haha. You’re funny.
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Aur Kia tum toh madam ho. Kia?
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Are nahi, Achi si feel ni aati. haha.
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Lol, 😂😂😂. Class ki prefect ban jao, Phir dekho Kamaal.
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Hume school main kisi ko madam kehna allowed nahi hai. Lol. agar perfect bhi ban jaaun toh bhi koi madam nahi kahega.
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Aisa Kia, mera Naam lena Aquib. Bas.. Tum ko choyega bhi nahi.. Naam toh mera suna hi hoga.
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Are tumhara naam kaise nahi suna hoga? Haha
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👌👌👍👍😂😂,
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This is beautifully penned!
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Thanks Winnie 👍👍👍, I am glad to hear from you. Hope you are doing great. Best wishes. 👍👍
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You’re welcome, Aquib! Thank you! I hope you are doing great too! 😊
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Very Deep 🙂
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Thanks.
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Hi Aquib….
Hope you are doing great!
I have nominated you for “Freedom of Expression” tag challenge, topic is – RESTART
Link to post -https://thoughtfulhues.wordpress.com/2018/07/06/freedom-of-expression-tag-topic-restart/
Would like to see you participate, take your time (PS – No compulsion tho!) 🙂
Have A good day …
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Will try to do it. Thanks Fariha a lot.
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Welcome and yes take your time.
And also no compulsion…
I just felt you would be a right contender for such creative challenge 😊
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Omg, it’s all your kindness and certainly overwhelming for me. You have good day. Best wishes.
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I tagged you on my post https://theatreandart.wordpress.com/2018/07/05/roll-the-dice-break-the-ice/ Be sure to check it out!
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Oh tthnaks a lot, sure, will check it out.
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Amazing. This reminded me of one of your previous posts where you wrote about certain cyber spiders harassing women. We really must be careful and cautious and not so easily swayed.
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Very true, Sophia. Esp girls they need to a tid bit careful on online platform, which is really mind-boggling, since majority of times the girls are being affected adversely with these cyber snake or cyber wolves,
(spider is a good insect Sophia, is it not?😊😊)
MashaAllah Strong, hight spirited and intelligent girls like you are true leaders of society, educating all. Kudos to you.
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Cyber wolves, yes, that’s the correct term and it’s all to serve their pseudo romance mentality.
Thank you, Aquib, you are so kind to me! I’m glad that you’re tackling issues like this on your platform, it’s men like you who give us women hope. 🤗
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Wow. I must your vocabulary is always on point 👌
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Always my pleasure to hear from you. Wish you success. 👌👍👍
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Hey Aquib! I’ve nominated you for the liebster award!
https://wp.me/p9YmoF-3R
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Thanks Aaeedah, for your nomination. Really means a lot coming from you.
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The anopheles and bladder worms right away reminded me of my 12th grade zoology textbook 😜
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Haaan jee sahi farmaya, Aiisha boss, kaha thi aap. Gayab.
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Ap khud gayab ho. Lo haazir hogayi akhir 😊
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😂😂, aap toh ji MashaAllah I look upto your writing sahi me, main bas abhi apni ghar aaya ho, *mitti di khushboo aayi *.
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Haha. Alhumdulillah if anyone looks upto my writing at all 🤗 Jazak Allah !
Mitti di khusboo ? Ab pani da rang vekh lo
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Haha 🤣 I’m as much of a boss as the person saying it 😎😁
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Yep JazakAllah khair.
May Allah bless you with success here and in hereafter ameen.
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Aapko do. Teen. Post. Aur padhne padege, kyonki aapki rai zarori hain.
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What vivid words and what depth. You are brilliant
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