Was shackled by the shadowy beasts,
In those aeons of trials ‘n tribulations
I interred in a cascade bartered,
Surely your hands so feebly strong,
That it hold be right.
Oh dear dont be crazy at me,
I looked upon your silhouette,
As you walked passed by.
Since the time I saw you,
I never knew,
You were by my side.
Dear, remember the laughter we share
Over the silly cup of tea,
I was really a caffeine addict,
Therefore I always stole
half the apart of yours.
It was really silly of me.
Love we shared was so delicately strong,
Your perky tears that my hand soaked
I won’t let it fall, my dear! ,
I once told if that appears again,
‘Gandhi ji would start a march there.’
Your desires and demands
Were like your books,
Your smile and demure I admired the most.
Sometimes your beady eyes sparkled
The joy and bliss channelising in ‘tween.
And across the road we stand
Amidst the heavy traffic in ‘tween
Waiting for the clear signs.
Only to see the apparition,
In the stillness of slowing silence
Where once you stood,
Waving your hand.
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Aquib.
Beautifully written, Aquib
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Thanks lot Nandita, glad you liked it. 😀😀. Hope you are having a busy Sunday😛, just kidding, a warm Sunday!😊😊!
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Yes, having a busy Sunday indeed. I’m in office 😦
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Oh, what a guess/co incident!! 😃, well work is work, keep going.
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Some beautiful alliteration and a great narrative style!🙂
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Thanks for appreciating it pragya. I am glad and overwhelmed by your response. Keep up with good posts you have.. 😊😊
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Loved it 💜
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Thanks Priya for appreciating it. Glad to hear you. 😊
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Well, I have just started. 🙂
And, I forgot to mention earlier that “Gandhi ji would start a march there” outstood the most! Brilliant👌
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Oh thanks again, wow! It was just spontaneous, glad you liked it, 😀😀. Hope you had an amazing Sunday.
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Haha..semester exams always make your Sundays “amazing”😂.
Have a great evening 😊🍸
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Oh that’s amaaazing 😳😳, best of luck and have fun with your question papers, yo 😎😎.
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Hahaha😂 Thank you☺☺☺
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That caffeine part was the best. ❤ ❤ ❤
Adorable write up 🙂
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Shukriya Sameera baji (lol, i dont meant baji), abbu ammi theek hain aapki?
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😛 pleasure bhaijaan (lol i mean it :P) ji sab ache hai. 🙂
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🤣🤣🤣, oh ok sameera baji (i mean it 😎😎)
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Awesome story telling and I loved the wording.
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Thanks buddy!!
CO- incidently I was reading your latest post, it’s awesome and full with your words of wisdom.
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Thank you my friend. Your stories, I love how you make them so real, language and all. Keep it up.
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My pleasure, thanks for appreciating buddy, it’s overwhelming for me. ☺️☺️
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No problem my friend, keep up the wonderful writing!! 🙂🙂
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🙂🙂.
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😊
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Lovely writing
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Thanks a lot Mistimaan bhai.
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Well written, Aquib.
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Thanks a lot MVS, glad you liked it. 😊😊.
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Anytime.
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Beautifully poignant !
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Thanks Malkie a lot, glad you liked it. 😊😊
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I did, you did a great job!
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Great writing
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Thanks a lot Anna 😊😊, for your lovely comment. Have a great day. 🙂🙂
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I wonder if you’d enjoy seeing a maybe paralleling feeling in old mold pop lyric. Al stewart’s ‘Time passages’. I so often have seen the apparition- well said! Btw- of memory replayed re-seen. And 😉 thanks too for continuing my ways reading 😉 what a nice thing to see 🙂 (hopefully you’ve a little proof back ? Heheheh)
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Yeah i do have the reminisce of proofs, you write so well really.. Buddy. Thanks for appreciating this, overwhelming for me!!!!.
Have a great day buddy.
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Reminisce-of-proofs… hmn… 😉 r.o.p. Romp. Heheh anagramic powers! M mild if not magnificent. And 😉 you’ve romped through memory😇
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Hint 😉 you’re genius – – mr inspiration
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, you can make anyone speechless really, it’s humbling for me.
Always Looking forward to read from your unique posts, and intriguing write ups. ☺️☺️☺️.
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If you I dust on saying my take is mine— keep in mind I saw r.o.p. R oh! P. Or rope that’s what is genius of associated depth (shh. Accidentally genius or unintentionally genius counts too! ;). Yes I’m butter)
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I dust was ‘insist’ before autocorrect snuck up
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That dust is clear now, I hope!!
Well I got you… I feel like.. 😉😉
Well buddy… It’s late night here in New Delhi.
Have a great day tomorrow.
Well where are you from, sir?
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Awesome work!!
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Thanks a lot buddy, glad to hear that from you.
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Love is a sacred silence. Beautiful words loaded with eloquence.
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Thanks Yassy.. Wow I really get enthralled with your remarks 😋😋.. JazakAllah khair.
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Very beautiful Aquib…
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Thanks a lot ananya… Glad to hear that from you .
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Plsr reading Aquib
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Beautiful narration as always
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Splendid!
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Thanks asha, glad to hear that. 😊
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Love this!😊
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Thanks jade and ambey, glad you liked it. 😊
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Nice poem indeed..
Keep writing dear bro..
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Thanks sohair, you too. Hope you are having an amazing day.
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Thank God …All is well.
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I am in awe if your talent to write… Masallah
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Thanks a noor a lot, your appreciation means a lot. Have a great day. 😊😊
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Thank you dear
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Gandhi ji march wow.Loved it:)
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Thanks a lot rahul.
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You replied to this comment.
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You nailed it. This was SO awesome.
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Hmmm thanks Shreya.. Humbled to hear that… Keep smiling and reading 😝😝and obviously!! Keep writing… I miss lots of emojis so please assume it, itna toh meharbani kar hi sakti ho kya???
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Areee haan haan Jaroor.
I am also using it on the laptop and missing emojis. haahaa. Fursah saeedah( I just tried, Let me know if its wrong)
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Ah thanks… Khusaamdeed..
Haan bahut sahi.. Sahi ja rahi hoon.. MashaAllah.. God bless you.
How was your exams btw, are you in nineth or tenth std,?
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Good luck with your further life. :):):)
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Same to you…
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A very divine, pure and serene poetry ❤
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Thanks a much appreciated. 😀
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Oh professor ji ye kitni khoobsurat Hai. Your lines reflect the purity of your heart. My professor ji may Allah bless you
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Which lines should I select as most beautiful O professor. Each letter here is love
As the picture says, Love is a sacred silence. Subhan Allah
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