#poem #insight.
Looked far away from where I was standing among the crowds, saw a giant cliff and wore a shroud.
Moved ahead in the gloomy nights all alone, watching dogs barking, shrieking noises of the dragon flies.
Walked and walked as the sun shines and crowds moved in quagmire of life.
I saw drooped vertebrae longing for sons and daughters with faces looking above and counting their days.
I saw grown-up of zygotes bewildering their roots of once umblicused soul with their own mouth.
I saw evil faces, shining the dark radiance, and joining their frivolous fane.
I walked alone among the friends, once I stood for their antsy minds, now refused to remain.
I continued walking over and over, and saw until my eyes didn’t take.
I sat beneath the oak tree, and lacmyral drops: the Brine from the sclera of the mind.
I did not want to tell my friends but my mind cannot hold the burden of the mortal mights.
The time still ticks in the dead dials and I moved, ’cause I don’t have time.
I moved and moved through the flim flam and the glitzy walls, through the trampling and through the pickets of wars, through relegated soul and through the materialistic ensnared soul.
Let me move, for the beloved stood there watching me blanched and sulled in the horrors of the world with a insidious smile, I moved for they don’t know the line, for they sundered the “ratification” made.
Let me move away from your humanoid feral and beasts, for them the reprisals await.
Let me move, let move I am near the cliff ‘s jag, I took a step watching behind and left all my stakes, I saw with my closed eyes gardens of rivers flowing beneath, I smile ethereal lyrics as I vanish away.
Aquib khan
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A repost of my old poems. Hope you all will cherish it.
insight2017aquib@gmail.com
Image credits : Google images.
Brilliant composition
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Thank you so much, dear.
Keep smiling and writing.
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Welcome friend have a great day
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Your comment landed in my spam, sorry about that. And yeah you too.
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Thanks and yes it sure happens with all of us
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Yep. ☺️☺️
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Yes absolutely
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Yep. ☺️
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Great piece of art !
It attracts the attention of the reader !!
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Thanks Soheir, JazakAllah. Keep sm in and writing.
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such a deep an involved verse, left me near the precipice overlooking our mangled world.
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Thank you sir so much, for the read. And your contemplation is very apt and overwhelming for me.
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Your word using is really exemplary!
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Thank you Hati, so much. Really your poem on India is apt for the independence day. Here on 15 Aug.
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I feel honored by your words 🙏🏼🙏🏼🙏🏼🙏🏼
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I am quite speechless.
Btw Main abhi so ke utha. (Lol).
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You just woke up? 😅 I M not sure if I understand rightly
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Yes, I just woke. You got it right. 🙃☺️
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😅 acha
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, but, late go gayi. My routine is messing up. 🙁
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Hurry up 🔥
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Great post !
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Thank you Lara so much for the read. Your comments are really appreciated and motivates me.
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Thanks you Simi,
Have a nice day. Keep writing and smiling.
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AMAZE as always !
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Thank you Mam so much,
I really appreciate your every comments.
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Masterpiece writing 👌
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Thank you Shayra,
For reading and understanding. I really appreciate your motivating comments. And congratulations, you won the contest for the poem.
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Thank a lot saquib😊
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My pleasure.
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Hey,I have posted the missing parts of the story.Would like to know that you liked it or not?
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Ofcourse, i am checking asap.
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Just awesome! 🙂
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Thanks Simi, (did you receive my previous reply? Wp is glitching nowadays).
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Yes I got a notification once, but then I didn’t find it.
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It landed in my spam.
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Oh!
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Yep, ☺️
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Drooped vertebrae.. that touched my heart..
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Thanks Tanay.
Hope to read more from your side. ☺️☺️☺️
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Sure 😃
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It seems surreal.. very well written!
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Thanks christy very much. I appreciate your comment it act as a catalyst for me.
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So kind of you to write that in return and let me know. We encourage one another!
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Yep, and I am not sleeping I dunno why, it’s 3:03 am here.
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Beautiful pictures and interesting poem.
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Thank you daisy so much.
Looking forward to read you.
☺️
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🙂
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I will tell u why this insomnia. Take all these out of it ur mind. Relax and sleep. That’s all. And plz have limited time for this.
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Api. Everything is alright. Aap bus apna lecture record karke bhejo jaldi,google drive ke through.
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Your choice of words are exceptional and your depiction sublime!
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Thanks a lot. Have a great day DMC.
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Thank you! Inspirational to say the least, god bless you and with your permission would love to quote some of your works credit evidently going to you of course!
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Yea, of course. Go ahead, it will be my pleasure. ☺️☺️👍👍
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God bless ! 😊🙏🏼
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Buona domenica 🙂
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Anche una domenica benedetta Simona
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What a great post!
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Thanks a lot Peter
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You’re welcome!
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☺️☺️
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This is so sad.
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Hey, Lara, don’t be sad…its always good for the good. Yeah, how are you these days.?
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I am fine Aquib, especially when I can read your beautiful poems. They make my day !!!
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It’s so kind of you Lara… Keep writing and grinding.
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That was pretty deep…👌👌👌
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Thanks Sairaj, I am glad and overwhelmed you liked it… Keep smiling. ☺️👍
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It was fantastic…….well done 🙂
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Thank you Mistimaan jee. How was your Navaratri?
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It was great…….have lots of fun
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Cool, hope you enjoyed with lot of Misti, sweets right?
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Oh yes…..Without misti life is not complete 🙂
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Yep, you are correct, Misti is life, Misti should be there to be relished completely.
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Absolutely though many fear eating sweets can increase weight.
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It’s good and profitable, you know , atleast the other person can benefit eating till satisfaction.
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Yess and eating it sometimes can give you more energy and happiness.
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Yep, roz roz mauka kaha milta hai, kya? , so jam ke khana chahiye.
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Bilkul……by the way apka favourite sweet konsa hai??
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Gulab jamun, I eat like twice or thrice a day, kaju barfi, rasgulla, ras malai, rabri, Lassi too, etc. These are like, I attack without giving a second thought.
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Wow……all my favourite including sweet curd
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Yeah, aapka Kaun sa favorite sweets hain?
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Kheer Kadam, rasmalai, boonde, laddu and baki jo apne likha hai
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Inme se I will surely eat kheer kadam, since I haven’t eaten it. Kheer kadam is on my radar now.
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Great……Have you ate Goja?
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No
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You must try it…….its awesome
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Oh k, I would surely, try. May be in a day or two, will let you know.
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Ok
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Great work..👏.. keep writing
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Thanks a lot Ummati, you too, keep writing and smiling.
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👏👏👏👏👏
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Thanks for the read, Pooja, hope for grind is on for your college works.
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Yes… Thnx aquib! ☺️☺️
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Great man and keep writing.Your posts👌.
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Thanks brother a lot. You too keep writing.
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☺
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Nice poem…
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Thanks a lot panchali, have a great day ahead
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Your words inspire me to visualise the intricacy of the world in my head…so so evocative 👌👌👌👌
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You too. 💐💐
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Hey, chronicles it’s totally OK, I think you must be busy, although chronicles was missed here.
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Please don’t mention again chronicles , you making me, what is that state called, my vocabulary though, embarrassed! , no!, can you help me Mistress?
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Oh, thanks a lot, will wait for email. Yeah, I too fell asleep, lol, unusual. Oh k, have a great day.. Yes good morning too.
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Yea, I mailed you back.
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That is an amazing piece of writing and my favorite. Thank you for supporting me and helping me spread awarness. Your raffle numbers are 88866 and 89991. My name is Brittian Weaver on facebook. That’s how you can continue being aware of the surprises. 😊😊
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Thanks a lot Brittian. For liking and reading this. Btw I don’t use Facebook for now, you can update your surprises on your post, if you can☺️. Keep smiling.
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Yes lf course! I will upload a video here!!!
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Beautiful as always
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Thanks Tanvir, much appreciated.
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This piece is so brilliantly written! Wonderful read.❤
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Thanks soul flower, have a great day.
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This old is certainly gold! Thanks for sharing. It’s a great piece. 🤗
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Oh thanks a lot, glad to hear that from you. 😀
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My pleasure 🤗
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Wonderfully profound
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Thanks Malkie for appreciating it. I am really glad to hear from you.
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My pleasure !
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Impressive and stirring.
I saw drooped vertebrae longing for sons and daughters with faces looking above and counting their days.
👌👌👌👏
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Thanks, yasmin. Much humbled by your profound appreciation. Have blessed days.
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You too,Aquib😊
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In a sea of compliments I stand bewildered. Bravo!
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I am totally overwhelmed. Always my pleasure to hear from the cherished and magical poetess like you.
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I am once more humbled by your words …. may your evening be crowned with smiles Aquib.
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You are as sweet as honey 🤗🤗 God bless you with success and happiness. 😊😊
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That is why I’m drawn to you and your rich writing kind Aquib 🤗💕
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Oh, wow, I am in awe with you more. And obviously feel the same. 🤗🤗
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Good one
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Thanks nada, much appreciated
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Oh, I love this. I know what you’re feeling with this and now I’m thinking whether this is what you’re feeling right now?
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No sophski, it’s really sweet of you to say that, it’s a thought that came and I wrote this. it’s all good now. Btw how are you? Hope you are having amazing time. Wish you all the good luck and success.
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We are going to go in circles so let’s say we both appreciate each other! 🤗
Kinda not great, thank you so much for asking. But I’ll find the light as long as I remember Allah (SWT). What about you?
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🤗🤗, can’t have said this better.
We should yes follow Allah and His Messenger saw.
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