Deep into the clouds of horde,
But Alone with everybody,
I walked, searching for my aisle
In the darkness of the frivolity.
I tread,
To my path as I walk.
As I walk with folks around
The faces I missed, that were masked.
To its vanity I got ensnarled.
I tread,
To my dears, I wrote words in my heart.
I may end here but you should go on.
‘What happened, happened! try to move on,
Nothing ‘s permanent here, carry on…’
I tread,
To a place of unstinted abundance
And a realm magnificent,
I stretched my vision,
For some clue and signs.
I tread
The shiny glittery way,
A harbinger of fruitful tales.
Confused and stepped in disdain,
Until in it proved to be a murcuric murk.
I tread,
Moving, jolted by the stormy azimuth,
Avoiding the pricking defiant thorns,
Walking into its dubious cloud.
Perambulating into its wizened misery
I tread
Absorbing the rays for forlornly weathers
On an embers of fierce straddle
With the calm of reclusive hermit
With a glowing halo charm and robed like a monk.
Hope you like it.
Also read the next part.
part 2.
Aquib Khan
©Copyright reserved !ns¡ght 2017.
What does the poem mean?
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The correct path is always not obvious.
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Yes.. now I get it..
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I agree, the correct path is not always, obvious.
In my case, never that obvious.
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Thanks for the read. Moaushmi. Keep smiling.
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It’s continued….
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☺️☺️☺️
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*hi*
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Hi, hope you are having an awesome.
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Very well penned bro. Keep it up.
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Thanks a lot bro. Keep smiling
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Beautifully written. You really have talent, the way you choose the words. Amazing !
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Thanks lot a lot. This means a lot.
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Loved your writing 🙂
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Thanks a lot Mistimaan bhai. This means a lot to me. Have a great day.
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this is so good poetry !!:)
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Thanks Poojan a lot. Glad you liked it. Have a great day.
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🙂 you too!
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This is a great. That is what life needs, we need to continue to research until we discover as many secrets as if there are no other ones. Thanks for sharing!
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Thanks Peter, you are insights are really inspiring. Have a great day. ☺️
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Thanks! and you too. I always enjoy your write-ups whenever I’m opportuned to read any of them.
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That’s really humbling for me.. I always as a reader have looked up for your advices and motivation through your posts. ☺️☺️
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I really appreciate who you are!
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Same here! brother. ☺️.
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its not necessary that the path you chise its always right… nice poem…
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Yep, but there are signs casting and intuitions reminding but our overall entropy must be in order, we must strive and strive and differentiate the white from the black . Thanks fire the read panchali ma’am.
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😊✌️
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Amazingly expressed👍
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Thanks a lot doctor Saab. Have a great day.
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Well written.Keep up ur good work!! 🙂
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Thanks a lot., 😊
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Wow! Phenomenal and inspirational.
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Thanks a lot for the read, Sharon. Glad you liked it.
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I surely did. You are an amazing writer.
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You are certainly very kind.. Keep writing and smiling.
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Thank you.
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Beautifully crafted👌
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Thanks a lot gargi.
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Welcome
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The chaos that builds before treading upon the appropriate route…amazingly depicted…the chosen path is not necessarily the destined one…great post💞
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Whatever be the case we have to be positive and have patience and trust God, ask for His guidance for he listen to everyone and grants it.
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Well said😊
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☺️☺️👍👍
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True we never know the right path unless we walk through it….
Lovely.
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We must observe the signs are always be ready to accept the truth and follow it. 😊☺️
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Eloquent expression of thoughts.
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Hey thanks a lot. Glad you liked it. Have a great day ahead.
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