
I can see stars
falling from the sky
Slowly but eventually.
I always wanted them
to be there to emblish
the sky, but Alas!! .
Seeing my thoughts
falling apart,
Pieces by pieces,
slowly withering away.
.
My puerile attempt for
the smile, sublimed,
Reminding me that i was
just a sovereign solivagant.
And nobody in your cascade
of tempting thoughts.
I shall tread yet another mile,
To hearken to a forlorn soul.
And dicipher its cryptic clues.
And feed on its pain
unless it set itself free.
.
I am but a dying ember,
With each light I gave I got dimmed.
Ardent albatross kept me flickering.
Sullied by the smothering hands,
Smudging me, leaving me interred.
..
The thoughts;thy thoughts
lingered in my grey matter,
Stealing away from my eyes to thee,
This prevaricated thoughts died,
On the pyre of thy eyes.
I now stand on a platform,
Listening to the whistle of train from afar.
It’s time to end the moments that were captured in our vitreous.
Your apprision smiled in glee,
With trailing rails
vanishing behind,
as I moved
In an unknown niche.
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Aquib.
Image do not belong to me.
This is truly a masterpiece, Poet Aquib!
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Oh my God, your comment, boom! encourages me. Thanks Aaeedah. Wish you all the best.
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🤗
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Great work again!💙💙
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Thanks Aqsa, means a lot , hope you are having an amazing day.
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Oh…. Lovely… An amazing piece
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Thanks Elijah, appreciate it a lot. Glad to hear from you. 👍👍😊😊😊
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You’re gladly welcome my friend
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👍👍😊😊
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As always…beautiful
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Thanks RR have a great time.
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You too😊
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Loved it
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Thanks Mistimaan bhai, hope you are doing great.
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Yes…….how are you?
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I am good bhai.. Goja abhi tak nahi mila, boss.
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Aa jao Kolkata bhai……khilaunga
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Ok, will let you know. Aha. 👌👌👍👍
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You penned it beautifully 😊
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Mahi thanks 👍👍, (I discovered your name in your comments 👍👍).
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Thanku 😊🌷
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Aap teen logo ki madad karo aur unse kaho ki woh teen logo ki madad kare. 😂😂
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Hahahhaha ji jaroor par wordpress pe aisa nae hoga na
Yaha thoda change hai
Aap 3 logo k post pe comment kre or unko bolo k wo or 3 logo k post pe comment kare 🤣🤣
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What an idea sir ji!
*Mahi ve that’s the way mahi’s way…. .*
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🤣
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What a poem you have penned !! Absolute hats off to you
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Thanks Tanvir, glad to hear from you. Hope you are doing great.
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Absolutely well and wish the same for you
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Glad to hear that. Best wishes.
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Wow Aquib you’ve a gift may God bless you!
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Kaha hain gift, soiba. Kaha. Hin. Tumne kaha tha gift dege.(thanks, God bless you with more).
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Beautiful !
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Thanks Uzma 😊😊👍👍best wishes
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Beautiful and exquisite.🌹
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Thanks Sameera, 👍👍👍, appreciate it a lot coming from you.
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This is lovely Aquib.
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Thanks, payal, glad to hear from you.
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You are welcome.
I am Punam not Payal. 😀
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Oh i am sorry, my bad… ..😊😊
Yeah, thanks again Punam.
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Once again you are welcome. 😊
Please don’t apologise. With so many followers it can be difficult to remember everyone’s name, specially if not using real name. 😊😊
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👍👍👍, appreciate this Punam a lot. You have a wonderful day Morrow. Best wishes.
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You too have a good day. Bless you.
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Yeah, God bless you too.
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Lovely Aquib bhai.
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Thanks sagar bhai,
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Welcome Aquib jim
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Such well chosen words to paint a heartfelt picture of this lost relationship.
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Thanks a lot mam, glad you liked, have a great day.
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Beautiful my friend, your heart bleeds passion at the keyboard, a true poets gift🌹🌹
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Thanks roy, always my pleasure to hear from you
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Always a pleasure reading your magnificent work my friend.
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Perfection.
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Thanks vikram, glad to hear from you 👍😊👌
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Thanks a lot. Roy, always my pleasure to hear from you.
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Thanks a lot sagar bhai.my pleasure to hear from you.
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It’s beautiful 😍
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Thanks Sanskriti, 😊, best wishes.
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Beautiful.
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Thanks alot.
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Your writing is beautiful
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The pic was as beautiful as your writing. Keep it up.😘😘
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Thanks Shreya, how is your school going?
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It’s all rubbish. Ye puchh Kar Jale pe namak chidak rage ho?
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Oh no,😱😱 please, I don’t meant that.. Its spontaneous. 😂.
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Very very nice. 👌👌
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Thanks Pramegha.
Hey, what’s the meaning of medha?
But we had one girl named medha in our middle classes, we used to call her maida? 😂😂
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Medha means intellect.
Maida….😂😂 We also do terrible transformations of our friends’ names.
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Yes boss responded. Do check..
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Beautiful!
Please check out my first blog at: http://feelthe.poetry.blog
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