Flying ridges lingering in the toroidal lanes,
Feeding morsels were zombies; pale,
Hand drenched in burgundy blood,
“Heads or tails”, but it always fail.
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Epochs, aeons, periods;combined,
Axle, loops, circles circambulating,
Yang yin, past, future & kith and kin,
Dreaming stuck in loop, ‘tween.
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Hiding patches of scars amidst,
Aminds course sand and off beat tracks,
Ears longing to hear a soulful voice,
Signing empty breaches of hearts; akin.
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Lusty days of longing happiness,
Stars in my sky failed to shine,
Sun that remained in west.
Lost hopes in the closet, closed.
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World reminded a perplexing cage,
Love reminded a frivolous well,
Swaying wind echoes all the tales,
Sung by drooped vertebrae & sacrilege.
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Whining, charading and tattering
Arrows, filled the sky dry,
Soaked the lustre from within,
Left like a orphan with a cry.
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Sung hymn that coalesce time and space,
Convalescing the prevailing grimy state,
Stop and bulwark in the ramparts,
Let the peace prevail.
©Copyright reserved 2018
**Reposted.
!ns¡ght.
– Aquib.
This was a great read
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Thanks a lot., sorry your comment landed in my spam.
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Indeed an arduous journey, a long trek, and an insightful pilgrimage
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Thanks Ivor for appreciating this agreed with your remark… Always glad to hear from you. Have a great day.
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Always my pleasure ☺️
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😊😊
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I agree with this great comment 🙂
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Oh, and I love the images too. Stunning post
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Thanks @saytoclowns,glad to hear that.
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You’re welcome!
(you can call me Vanessa
I always forget to say 🙂 )
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Ok, Vanessa, nice name. 😊😊
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thank you! 😁
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☝️☝️☝️💪💪👍👍👍👌👌
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Dark! But good 😉
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Thanks Novus jee… How have you been now?….. Chocolate,, forgotten???…
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Yep forgotten ☔
I’ve found a few bits here and there 🍪🍫🍫🍪
They’re not very sweet though , they’re for diabetic people
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Lol, yeah.. #Savagemode 😂😂😂…
Oh, man, don’t worry i can make a sugar syrup and dip that and have it…. But still you are not saved fr. This. Haha. 😂😂😂, I am watching you. Lol
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😂😂😂😂
ok ok take more chocolate 🍪🍪🍫🍫🍫🍪🍫🍪🍪🍫🍪🍩🍩🍫🍪🍫🍫
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😂😂😂, 😋😋😋, thanks btw, virtual me is having it like MATRIX movie you know, 😁😂😂😁..
. Good night. Keep smiling.
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Ok Good night bro
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Rather dark poem but never the less … good!
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Thanks Anna for encouraging and appreciating it. Have a great day.
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great poem love the fact it has a mood to it.
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Thanks @mystories, glad to hear that. 😊😊
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Beautiful poem & photographs.
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Thanks a lot sir, glad to hear that from you.
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Beautiful poetic words so well penned, Aquib.
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Thanks a lot kamal, glad to hear that from you. 😊😊
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Welcome Aquib.
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Great👍
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Thanks @thecrown, glad to hear that.. Keep up the goodness.
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Loved it
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Thanks Mistimaan bhai, have a nice day.
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Aquib!❤ You never fail to surprise me with your brilliant themes and (beyond my reach) vocabulary! 👏👏👏
Be it any genre, you make it shine! 🌻
*spaces, spaces*
sikhaao yaar mujhe bhi😩
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*spaces spaces *, it’s all your humility pragya… Lol tumhe sikhao.. Aha. Star pragya ko.
Well I must say you are doing great and should keep writing.. Keep smiling.
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🤗🤗Lol
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Zhanks Faragyaz zee. Lol
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😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂
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This indeed is a tiring and long journey, loved how you ended it, keep it up 🙂
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Thanks soiba ji, your comments mean a lot. Keep up with the good work.
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A journey, though identifies more with a saga, loved the ending!
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Thanks a lot @Espxtruck for the encouraging remarks… 😊😊
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The construction of this one is pretty amazing. I loved the last paragraph.
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Thanks orange G, glad to hear that from you… 😊😊
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Totally my pleasure Aquib G! ☺️
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Aquib H, na??? orange G. G aapke pass hain. Hain ki nahi?
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Hey bhagwan!
G mere pass ho na ho, aap fail ho gaye!😂😂
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Orange G please Pass kardo.. Aquib Z hi kyon na lagado. Please😢😢😰!!! 🙏🙏🙏🙏👁️👁️
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Na na, ab toh aapke number kat gaye. Aise bhayanak jokes! 😂
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Arey.. Main ab kis mooh se ghar jao ga. Orange G. Badi umeed Thi. Kaash meri dard aap samjh sako, aaj maine jana ki zamane kitni kathoor hain. .. *Utterly sad tone * *sad music, ***(😂😂😂😂😂😂)
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😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂
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The images are beautifully haunting and the journey looks like the dark night of every soul. Beautifully crafted. Have a great day Aquib 🙂 Love and light ❤
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Hey thanks anand, I must say reading your post is a learning experience from me… I am grateful to your write ups.. 😊😊…
Keep smiling and writing.
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🙂 🙂 🙂 That’s very kind of you. The feeling is mutual 🙂 🙂 🙂
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☺️☺️☺️
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Very nice bro
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Arey waah bhai…. Thanks.. 😁😁
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Great vocab and fab ending
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Thanks Dolly Shah for appreciating it. Keep smiling.
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Just how? I will never be able to write this way. And hey, do a ballad please
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Will try ofcourse… Hmmm. Thanks Rita your remarks are very encouraging for me. Lol.
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Me too.
Haha. I’m glad 😊😊
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Hope are having an amazing day!! 😀😀
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It’s night now…. But I had a good day. Hope the same for you
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Yeah thanks.
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😊
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Wow, you are so good. This got me chills, with that image. WOW, superb!
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Hey thanks @lostinsight oh wow this is an awesome remark I am glad you liked it. Thanks for appreciating it.. Looking forward to your posts, you too write amazingly well.. 😊😊
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Aww, thank you… 🙂
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You are such a brilliant writer. “Sun that remained in west”… Just loved this line. ❤️
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Thanks Jaya, I feel the same for you. Been occupied with the ghost of test, now engulfing whole syllabus. Lol. Will vomit tomorrow, 😜. Hope i do not get constipation.
Do pray for me.
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Ghost of test will be friendly,
He will not scare you with questions unknown,
Everything will be fine, you will get no reason to moan.
Engulf the whole syllabus, revise the important notes,
When you will vomit it out, it will land on the perfect boats,
Which will bring back to you, the sky-soaring grades
My wishes are with you, I am done with the prayers. 😉
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This is so lovely, I am really honored by your sweet and kind little poem.
I really take it as a gift.
“In an strange realm, you seem so known,
The thoughts, so pure that channels,
In the land where light lightens,
It shines from your demure
Behind the screen, enlightening souls.”
This one for you.
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😍😍thank you so much.
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Alhamdulillah it went well. Yeah, I forgot to mention lol. 😁
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I am glad to hear this. 🙃
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Such eloquent writing .. beautifully done 👏👏
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Thanks a lot sakshi, honoured to receive your kind Remarks.
Much peace and happiness unto you.
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It was my pleasure Aquib 😊
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Excellent poetry and images, Aquib. A great post.
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Thanks a lot kamal, 😊😊🤗
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Welcome Aquib.
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Good read🤗
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Thanks nidhi for appreciating it. Much humbled. 👌🤗
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🤗💐
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loved it ❤
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Thanks Tanaz, best wishes to you.
Keep smiling.
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Wonderful words!
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Thanks a lot Malkie, much humbled.
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Its I who am humbled by the wisdom of your words!
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Glad you posted this. The seriousness of this is intense!
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Thanks Pramegha, it’s my pleasure to receive remarks from you. Peace be on you.
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Poignant, yet beautiful!❤
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Thanks a lot Richa.
God bless you.
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You are amazing my friend!!
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You are more amazing my friend.
Keep up with the amazement that we readers are use to. Wishing you all the best. 👍👍👍Peace andlove.
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Same to you my wondrous friend. You leave us in awe with your writings.😊
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just right for Halloween fantastic.
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Halloween, I have heard a lot about it, but it’s seeing the day, the light after the Halloween night.
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Great poem !
Enjoyed reading
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Thanks AT, appreciate it a lot.
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What choice if words, what portrayal, what a journey. Bravo
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Thanks a lot. appreciate it a lot.
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My pleasure
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