
The day I still remember,
You reaching me out,
I thought you liked me,
And you once said that.
I was totally wrong
And worse was that
I thought you of my kind.
You got me in the deluge
And sang blasphemous verses,
And in your elixir
masked, in it was your poisons,
Aimed at cursing contrive hearts.
And me,got bereaved of myself,
I did feel exploited and torn,
faced all the repurcussions.
You connived me into madness.

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After a wide gap it’s pleasing to publish and share some of my poetry to the kind readers. I was really losing the streak onto WordPress community until one of my readers approached and said the astonishing thing, *only happens once in a millennium* , “I miss your writing”, that was enough for me (owing to my over enthusiastic nature) to be on cloud nine, (is this the phrase?), I was on the verge of saying “I love you marry me”.
I was given the task of finding extra territorial life by Nasa, themselves. Isn’t that great?( If you are looking for a plot there on Mars, your boy has got connection, I am the plug you need to contact ), this daunting task kept me busy and there was no wifi on mars, that was really a take-off for me. Besides this in about just some ‘infinite‘ years it might be possible to have an en – route to Mars,*fasten your seat belts*.
The people overthere resemble us homosapiens but just look more red, more like different shades of red, and girls are hot, mind it they spit fire enough to roast someone, so there it’s opposite of what we see on the Earth, men there are the “deprived ones” most of the time. Will update you guys more after my next flight to Mars.
How can I forget about Axandra? That lovely, beautifully red hot lady, I would be honest here she liked me, and she was passionate about me*awkward smile*. We watched the movie “pk” together and mind it that movie is nothing close to what Martians are like, they definitely don’t roam about being completely naked.
There was a point where she approached to kiss me when we were about to leave she was burning in emotions, somehow i managed to save my lips, (I definitely don’t want to be lip less, and seeing my lips melt away is not a good trade-off for a red hot beautiful Martian lady’s kiss).
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peace love and equality.
©Copyright reserved. !ns¡ght 2018.
By, Aquib.
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Haa haaa ….you had me in splits😆
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Oh 😁😁😜thanks, Sakshi. Really heart warming for me to receive your remark. Have a great time, God bless.
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My pleasure btw your sense of humor overshadowed your poetry and I forgot mentioning it was awesome too
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Oh it’s completely fine, thanks again😊. Appreciate your encouraging remark a lot. Peace and love.
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What a splendid ride! The way poem begins and ends is Fine art! A true crescendo! And the Ranjhaana movie dialogue at the end!
Kabhi khushi kabhi gham kinda post😉😁🤗
I was on the verge of saying, “I love you marry me” hahaha😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂
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Thanks Aaeedah, .
With the crescendo I remember i have to resurrect and clone dodo. 😜😜(the worst pj, you know the worst pjs are the best one).
Jokes aside, wish you all the best. 👍👍Keep smiling.
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Okay…after so many years 😁… you’re back with this amazzzing …hilarious…. awesome post …
And congratulations..you managed to save your lips😂
Do let me know more about those people you met there😁
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Thanks RR, yeah but I prefer to be in front 😜😜. Lips are necessary you know, you are bio student so you know anatomy very well. Well next time i will bring some specimen or bodies for you to study, might be helpful you know exobiology.
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Oh thank you so much AK😁
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😜🤣
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😁😁😁
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Glad to see you appear in my reader Aquib, wonderfully composed, keep posting 🙂
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Thanks a lot Soi, I am already in everybodys heart, so it’s even now. 😜😁😁😁.
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🙂 🙂
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A really nice poem, with its structure and emotions.
Mars is good, but you can try Venus next time.
Or may be try to land somewhere in Andromeda!!
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Thanks Pramegha, well venus is really very hot planet, where is Andromeda?
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That’s another galaxy, I am not sure about the directions. You can check Google maps for it, though!!
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Ok, then the quest is on, btw you are in this noble quest, and we will revive the humanity.
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Wow! Dear Aquib,
This is really deep. The story of every heart!
The lines are heart touching.
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Thanks faiz bhai, home you are enjoying there. I am missing home as well.
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Amazing post. From picture to poem to Alexandra..pleasing perfect.
“I love you marry me” haha…
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I wanted a name that sounded like ‘Mars’, so axandra seemed to be more alienated. 😁😁.
Thanks for your kind remarks, appreciate it a ton. Have a wonderful day.
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Aquib, your flight of fancy to Mars was howlarious! I hope with this, you are back in the groove. 😊
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Thanks Punam a lot. Yeah God be willing. Wish you all the Best.
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You are welcome Aquib and thanks for your wishes.
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Hahaha! This was hilarious. 😂
And the poetry was really heart touching. 🖤 🖤
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Thanks Fatima, I was just hearing a byaan on the most righteous Hazrat fatima ra. I will share with you.
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Wonderfully written! Loved it!❤
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Thanks a lot Richa, much humbled 😊.
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nice poem, and a great write up starting from marry me because you love my writing to saving lips and burning within.
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Thanks a Lot esp, 😊
Yeah bro, 😁😁, I have to choose either of the one and be humble, you know . That’s life 😁.
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This is the first post of yours.. I am reading…..and let me tell you….you are not only hilarious but amazing too both with your prose and poem.
I must say this, you have a way with the words…a God given talent. Keep penning and keep posting… yes…even from Mars. Never ever think of quitting. I shld actually thank Jaya very much for leading me here. I happened to see both of your collab “The Black Rose” in her blog, my curiosity lead me here and I think I benefitted in every way.
Glad to meet youAquib ji….
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Thanks for your appreciation and kind remarks.
and Jaya is very kind and encouraging God bless her.
Glad to meet you as well, aha, hope you are having an amazing day.
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The pleasure as told, it’s entirely mine. Yes Jaya is a wonderful and very encouraging person . Ys i did have an amazing day. Hope your’s were as amazing as it could get too. Take care….don’t knw what is the time in your Mars, But here its past midnight so its Good night…
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This was really funny, Aquib! Those translated lyrics are lovely, and I love the film PK. Hope you are well 🙂
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Thanks a lot Sophia 😁😁 I liked the movie Pk too.
I am good Alhamdulillah. How are you Sophia?
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I’m good too, Alhumdulillah, thank you for asking. 🙂 How lovely is it when we can use more Islamic terminology? It’s quite rare on WordPress, I guess.
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Yeah, Sophie you are correct. I think even with others too, we can use it nonchalantly. 😊😊
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Very true, I’m just going to start calling any Muslim brothers and sisters exactly that: brother, sister. 🙂
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Bilkul sahi farmaya aapne behan.
(Using urdu Urdu 😁)
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Mujhe Lagta hai ki mein hindi ko aur samajta hoon. 😭
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First of all, I would like to congratulate you on creating this hidden wonderland! You are very capable and authentic mashaAllah! Your writing style is very captivating and one can easily get lost in this wonderful blog! Thank you so Much Aquib, Keep creating amazing content for us! ❤
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Yeah, InshaAllah zaroor. Duao me nas Yaad rakhiyega. 😁😁.
And it’s all from Above and all genuine people like you who encourage me MashaAllah.
Keep smiling. 😁😁. Keep praying.
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