This poem happened when I replied to my awesome fellow reader in a poetic way and that triggered the poetic replies and led into beautiful symphony.

And due to my unavailability and her priorities this poem got delayed for the good.

Please do follow her, her writing is really mesmerizing and subtly sublime.


This poem that I am sharing its an serendipidy sometimes things just happen.

And we added the remaining stanzas to complete it.


Let the afflatus of poetry flow.
Summon oh dear! , let your words flow, the tides are high and the ark ready to afloat.
Board the deck, join the crew.
I have stepped down already, on this ark
Not with this mortal flesh, but with my soul
Can’t you see me?
With all your wisdom, I witness
You aught to be the mariner Supreme ,
The Visage of the flag.
I summon your poetic you to rule and mesmerize .
I can see sparkles the shimmery shine
The shine is but the reflection
Of the glow of the sea
We wish not to conquer but to blend,
The waves and me
There are submissive laws,
That universes get governed with,
Don’t shed tears or lay beneath,
The sorrow and vexed huts,
Don’t be their secluded hermit.
Embrace the divine laws.
Submit to the divine inspiration.

My submission is clear,
To the laws and Faith in divinity.
Don’t ask me but,
To abandon sorrow.
For that which is a flaw of my flesh
Can’t diminish, can’t vanish
Sure the marks on sand of time,
Don’t wash away with the waves,
It exist in realm where
what exist is you.
There once you set yourself to the truth,
Your new garment embraces you
With new zeal and vigour.
And sets you free.
And sets me free.

Under the laws of divinity .

To yet again walk on those sands,

With the new ark whistling .

To yet again touch the waves

Anticipating the journey.

The ocean of possibilities,

The mighty tides of poetry.

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By, Pramegha and Aquib.

the keleidoscope the electricity in brain, word them before they get lost.

Published by AQUIB

the unsung poet..

45 thoughts on “Kaleidoscope

    1. Thanks Novus, sorry I did listen to your hindi song of lagaan, besides you being English, your accent was upto the mark.
      (Sorry, I was about to compliment but something happened & I just forgot).

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    1. Very truly said by you drew.
      Often I get inspired by other poems and writers or by interacting with other and observing them. It helps us to understand to make inference as well.
      Therefore poets like you are truly inspirational and remarkable.

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  1. Respected sir i seriously want to learn blogging from you…the way you write its brilliant and plz reply because i want to learn blogging and i think that i cant find a brilliant teacher like you…🙏🙏🙏

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  2. The title of the poem is well thought out, I like the image it creates of a all the limitless patterns of our thoughts that are as diverse as a kaleidoscope.

    This was a brilliant collab! 👏

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  3. You both have gelled in so beautifully thru this poetic chat of yours.
    Yes many times the little things which tags along with a highlight is more meaningful than the highlighted …like the chats we have with our readers make more sense than probably the post itself. It’s happened with me too…so it’s easy for me to resonate with your collab.
    I feel as if i found treasure island when i found your blog.


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