This poem happened when I replied to my awesome fellow reader in a poetic way and that triggered the poetic replies and led into beautiful symphony.
And due to my unavailability and her priorities this poem got delayed for the good.
Please do follow her, her writing is really mesmerizing and subtly sublime.
This poem that I am sharing its an serendipidy sometimes things just happen.
And we added the remaining stanzas to complete it.
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Let the afflatus of poetry flow.
Summon oh dear! , let your words flow, the tides are high and the ark ready to afloat.
Board the deck, join the crew.
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I have stepped down already, on this ark
Not with this mortal flesh, but with my soul
Can’t you see me?
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With all your wisdom, I witness
You aught to be the mariner Supreme ,
The Visage of the flag.
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I summon your poetic you to rule and mesmerize .
I can see sparkles the shimmery shine
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The shine is but the reflection
Of the glow of the sea
We wish not to conquer but to blend,
The waves and me
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There are submissive laws,
That universes get governed with,
Don’t shed tears or lay beneath,
The sorrow and vexed huts,
Don’t be their secluded hermit.
Embrace the divine laws.
Submit to the divine inspiration.
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My submission is clear,
To the laws and Faith in divinity.
Don’t ask me but,
To abandon sorrow.
For that which is a flaw of my flesh
Can’t diminish, can’t vanish
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Sure the marks on sand of time,
Don’t wash away with the waves,
It exist in realm where
what exist is you.
There once you set yourself to the truth,
Your new garment embraces you
With new zeal and vigour.
And sets you free.
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And sets me free.
Under the laws of divinity .
To yet again walk on those sands,
With the new ark whistling .
To yet again touch the waves
Anticipating the journey.
The ocean of possibilities,
The mighty tides of poetry.
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By, Pramegha and Aquib.
the keleidoscope the electricity in brain, word them before they get lost.
Thank you for appreciating!
A serendipity, sure it is. And a reason for delight for me as well.
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😁😁, yep, aha thanks PK, it was my pleasure and I am glad to have you here by the grace of God. Best wishes.
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Best wishes to you as well.😊
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Lovely! Beautiful you two
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Thanks Novus, sorry I did listen to your hindi song of lagaan, besides you being English, your accent was upto the mark.
(Sorry, I was about to compliment but something happened & I just forgot).
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😅😅😅😅
Thank you Bro.
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People talk about how we can be inspired by other poets and/or poems, but I am often by the chats with bloggers and the exchanging of ideas. By the way, I really like this.
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Very truly said by you drew.
Often I get inspired by other poems and writers or by interacting with other and observing them. It helps us to understand to make inference as well.
Therefore poets like you are truly inspirational and remarkable.
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You are very kind. Thank you
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Wonderful poem! Pramegha has quite the talent 🙂
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Thanks a lot Sophie,. Yep true, she is a remarkable writer, God bless her.
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Beautifully done. Set the soul free
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Thanks a lot, true that when you say that. 👍👍. Much humbled by your kind words.
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My pleasure always
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Remarkable !! So so beautiful.. it is so amazing how little things inspire and lead to the creation of such beautiful poetry 💕
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Very truly said by you, jaya.
It is utmost pleasure to hear from you. Keep smiling.
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You too 🙃. Have a great time.
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Have a good one, you too
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Count me in the crew.
What a fantastic journey it would be!
A complete treat for the readers! ☺️
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Yeah, you are already sailing there in the ocean.
Thanks A, for appreciating it. 👍👍
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Beautiful!
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Thanks a lot sir. Best wishes.
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‘The shine is but the reflection
Of the glow of the sea
We wish not to conquer but to blend,
The waves and me’ – stopped at this and still mesmerized❤️
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Thanks Sameera, glad to hear that from you.
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Nice one, Ak!!
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Thanks fam. Really humbling for me to receive from you.
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Beautiful my friend🌹🌹
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Thanks a lot Jo, wish you the best.
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My pleasure my friend🌹🌹
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Respected sir i seriously want to learn blogging from you…the way you write its brilliant and plz reply because i want to learn blogging and i think that i cant find a brilliant teacher like you…🙏🙏🙏
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That’s all your kindness Nandini. 👍👍My work is a mere tiny drop a speck.
You can mail me Nandini at insight2017aquib@gmail.com
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I am really honored to receive your remarks, I can share what I know or can help you in my best of my abilities. InshaAllah.
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Sir i messeged you on your email
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The title of the poem is well thought out, I like the image it creates of a all the limitless patterns of our thoughts that are as diverse as a kaleidoscope.
This was a brilliant collab! 👏
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Thank you.
Glad to hear from a profound poetess like you. Best wishes.
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Fabulous ! 🙌👌👏
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Thanks, appreciate it.
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Lovely!❤️
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👍😊😊, thanks.
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Wow, truly breathtaking Aquib. This is just what I needed to read today! I feel redirected and more assured. Awesome work.
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Thanks Sophie so Glad to hear that from you, whose writing is MashaAllah magnificent. More power to your pen.
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Lovely collaboration!! Words are powerful and the poem proved it
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Beautiful! The kaleidoscope is a wonderful metaphor. ❤️🦋🌀
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Thanks a lot Sheila, 💙.
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You both have gelled in so beautifully thru this poetic chat of yours.
Yes many times the little things which tags along with a highlight is more meaningful than the highlighted …like the chats we have with our readers make more sense than probably the post itself. It’s happened with me too…so it’s easy for me to resonate with your collab.
I feel as if i found treasure island when i found your blog.
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