Sorry I am not able to come up with the suitable title.
Here’s is the poem, I wrote a few weeks ago. Lately I haven’t publishing. I guess , I should apologize for that. Sorry
Here we go
There is happiness around.
A lot things happening around
No limit I see nor I get frown.
Beautiful faces and people walk by
Glancing and smiling each when sought by.
The sunlight is at peace
The nature looks bright.
The stars at night shine.
The morning has no worries,
Nor anything left to cry.
The trees bore fruit .
People, full of restitute.
‘Time, please stop have some rest.’
Don’t leave me I don’t have pace.
I can see people falling from your Adobe.
I cannot see them, no more.
This time is so nice,
That’s a merry to me or a dream.
Don’t pull me out from this place.
I always want to stay.
Alas, no more, a uninhabited
Time has paid me the price.
I ask for him one thing.
He said its just a case.
Everybody follow the same.
You have left out and it’s your fault.
The circumstances always not good for all.
You have a chance I will return
For another course.
Good one. But why tym will leave. It’s just thinking. U utilize it. U are precious not time. Time is important because u r in it. Am I right or not.
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Good one. But why tym will leave. It’s just thinking. U utilize it. U are precious not time. Time is important because u r in it. Am I right or not.
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Right
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Nice
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The poem is awesome, though it’s not titled, every statement therein seems like a title to me. Well done!
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Hey bro, thanks for appreciation, Keep reading and grinding,
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Alright! Do have a nice day!
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You too, keep smiling ☺️
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Untitled is a great title. It is catchy 😊
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Can you think of a suitable title? I will change it if I like it.
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Dear!! I m giving ur poem a title -“ALAS,NO MORE..” right.
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Yea, it’s awesome, but can you suggest one more please? ☺️
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9/11 or unkinded heart.
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No the objective of this poem is bit different, so. But you are very great at topics. 😇
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Image of ur post is seem like dt title suggested by me.
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Thank you. 😇😇
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Love these lines “Time, please stop have some rest.’
Don’t leave me I don’t have pace.”
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Thanks a lot. ☺️
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